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”Do you want to stay for dinner?” Bette asked. She squinted her eyes shut in anticipation of Tina’s negative response.
”Sure,” Tina replied. ”I didn’t have any plans tonight.”
”It’s nothing fancy,” Bette said. ”I was just going to bar-b-que some tuna and put it over a light salad.
”Sounds perfect,” Tina said. ”Can I run out and get anything?”
”Not necessary, I have everything we need,” Bette replied. She tied her sarong back around her hips. ”Come Angel, time to get out of the pool and rest before supper.”
Angelica looked plaintively at Tina hoping for a reprieve from nap time.
”Don’t look at me like that; you’re already turning into a little prune from being in the water for so long,” Tina said as she started towards the pool steps.
Angelica stood and walked up the stairs without being asked again.
”Did you have fun with mommy?” Bette asked as she reached out with a towel to wrap around her.
”Yes, but I want to stay up.”
”You can stay up for a little while after you get out of the pool, but you have to have a rest before we eat,” Bette compromised. She turned to face Tina. ”There’s a towel on the patio chair for you.”
”Thanks,” Tina replied. She kneeled down to help unfasten Angelica’s life jacket, and slipped it off her shoulders to let Bette continue to dry her off.
Tina set the jacket on the pool deck and retrieved the hose to rinse off the chlorine. A quick spray and she returned the hose to the rack at the back of the house.
”You can grab some fresh clothes from the top dresser drawer if you’d like,” Bette offered as they made their way inside.
”Thanks, just a pair of shorts would be great,” Tina said. ”It won’t take long for my top to dry in this heat.
”Help yourself and I’ll take care of changing her,” Bette said waving Tina toward the master bedroom.
It wasn’t long before Tina was sitting on the patio. Angelica was sound asleep in her room, having put up very little fuss.
”She was exhausted,” Bette said as she stepped outside, a bottle of wine in one hand and two glasses in the other. ”Can I pour you a glass before dinner?”
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol