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“What is it Mommy?” Angelica called as she turned in Bette’s arms, stopping her splashing briefly.
“Vegetables!” Tina replied
“Not hungry,” Angelica called back as she returned to splashing.
Bette laughed as the water was kicked up around her.
“Mommy cut some fresh veggies for you, you don’t want to try any?”
“Nope.”
“Maybe I’ll go have some,” Bette swung Angelica around. “But I have to pass you off to … Auntie Shane!”
“Yay!” Angelica was jubilant that she was being allowed to stay in the pool rather than go eat yucky vegetables.
Bette walked slowly up the pool stairs. Beads of water ran in rivulets down her taut stomach.
Tina was mesmerized. She couldn’t help but stare as Bette moved with confidence towards her.
“Thanks for doing this Tina,” Bette said as she looked at the tray and pondered at her choices. She finally selected a slice of cucumber and dipped it into some oil and vinegar.
“Thanks for hosting,” Tina replied. “I’m feeling quite a profound sense of déjà vu right now.”
“No matter what ends up happening Tee, we really have to make sure it doesn’t mess with how far we’ve come,” Bette replied. She glanced back at everyone in the pool. “Neither of us wants to create any friction because of Angelica, but we also have the other kids to consider.”
Tina laughed.
“Our family does require nurturing doesn’t it?”
Bette adopted a sombre demeanour.
“I’m serious Tee,” Bette ran her hand down Tina’s arm as she spoke. “I don’t want to lose ground from where we are.”
“Neither do I,” Tina replied. “But I don’t want to be so scared of losing what we have that we miss out on something even better.”
Bette took Tina’s hand and started walking into the house.
“Come with me for a minute Tee,” Bette said. She could sense Tina’s hesitation. “Seriously, just for a minute.”
They stepped inside the patio door, and Bette closed it behind her, leaving them with a modicum of privacy amidst what had become a very public day.
They stood silently in the kitchen, considering one another with the backdrop of frivolity continuing just beyond the doors.
“Why did you bring me inside Bette,” Tina asked.
Bette took Tina’s face in her hands and leaned in to kiss her gently, but directly, on the lips.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol