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“Promise me that Angelica is going to have two parents that can raise her together no matter what,” Bette said quietly.
“I promise,” Tina replied immediately. She meant it.
“I don’t know what’s going to happen Tee,” Bette started. “But I am willing to try.”
Tina paused as she digested what Bette had to say.
“That’s all I want us to do,” she replied. “It’s all we can do.”
Bette started to back away, but Tina reached behind her and pulled her in.
“Wait,” Tina said. “While our little one is outside being occupied by one of her many aunties…”
Tina’s arms ran up around Bette’s neck as she moved in closer.
“Okay?” Tina asked.
“Okay,” Bette acquiesced to Tina’s intent, but time seemed to slow to a crawl.
“I miss kissing you,” Tina whispered as they got closer.
Their lips met briefly before they parted to consider what might happen next.
A brief pause was just an opportunity for sparks to fly.
What had been fairly innocent flirtation took a decided turn for the passionate as they kissed again. The pretence of holding back vanished as they practically consumed each other. Bette turned Tina and leaned her back toward the counter, never once losing contact with her mouth.
“We can’t,” Tina said breathlessly. “We have to stop.”
Frustrated, Bette pulled away. She happened upon a compromise.
“One minute,” she said. She saw Tina’s confusion. “We’ll kiss for one minute and then we’ll stop and go back outside, and enjoy the afternoon.”
They glanced simultaneously at the kitchen clock.
“When the second hand reaches the twelve again, we’re done,” Bette said. “But for the next minute I’m going to kiss you as though I’m about to make love to you…”
Bette’s mouth was on her, gently at first, as they both moved to re-discover each other.
Tina felt Bette suck her bottom lip into her mouth and couldn’t resist opening her eyes to see Bette staring at her as she teased with her tongue.
It really never was just a kiss between them. She should have realized that.
Too soon, Bette pulled away.
“Sorry I think I went a little overtime,” she apologized with an innocent smile.
“S’okay,” Tina replied, dizzy from their interlude.
“You go ahead, I’ll be out right away,” Bette suggested.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol