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“Did you have a good sleep sweetie?” Tina asked as she entered the kitchen. Angelica and Bette sat at the table and Angelica was having a glass of freshly squeezed apple juice while eating some mashed carrots.
“Yup.”
“Are you ready to go home to bed soon?”
“Aww, Mommy can’t we stay here?” Angelica asked plaintively.
“No sweetie, I don’t have any jammies here like you do,” Tina replied, in an effort to mask her true desire to stay and continue with what she and Bette had started.
“You can borrow something to wear to bed Tee,” Bette said the words before thinking much on their potential impact. “And we can make up the couch if you’d like to stay.”
“I don’t want to impose,” Tina began. “I know I’ve kept you from your work schedule too much today.”
“I needed the break,” Bette said. “Please stay. We can have breakfast together and then I’ll have the rest of the day to get some work done before the week starts.”
“Please Mommy?”
“Okay,” Tina pretended to acquiesce to Angelica’s wishes, when she was in fact looking for assurances that Bette would want them to stay. And with the way the decision had transpired, it seemed as though it was Angelica’s idea. Perfect.
Angelica grinned widely as she took her next sip of juice.
“What should we do next?” Angelica asked, as if this was one big adventure.
“Let’s get your art book out,” Bette suggested. “You can draw a picture for Mommy to put up at home.”
“A picture of us today?” Angelica suggested.
“Sure,” Bette smiled. “You can draw a picture of us.”
“I’m going to be in the pool and you and mommy are eating grapes, so I need a purple pencil crayon.”
“Sounds perfect,” Bette said. “Have you had enough to eat?”
“It’s time to draw Mom,” Angelica said curtly.
Tina had to bite her lip to hide the smile. Sometimes their little girl was so much like Bette it scared her. There were so many times Bette would skip a meal when she had something else on her agenda.
Tina cleared Angelica’s plate and glass from the table while Bette retrieved her art supplies. She also returned with one lovely bottle of vintage Barolo.
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol