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Tina tentatively reached forward and pulled Bette closer by the hem of her top.
“It seems to me we were otherwise occupied when she got up earlier this evening,” Tina said.
“Yes, but what was it we were doing,” Bette pretended to ponder the question as they stood in close proximity.
“I believe I was about to re-introduce you to my tongue,” Tina said quietly, before leaning forward and kissing Bette’s lips. “I’ve missed you.”
Tina brought one hand up around Bette’s neck as their kisses continued in the hallway outside Angelica’s bedroom. Her other hand released the hem of Bette’s top, unfastened the top button of her jeans and slowly lowered the zipper.
She backed away, but didn’t release her grip on one belt loop of the jeans, drawing Bette back with her.
“Don’t worry, I won’t keep you up all night,” Tina promised. “I know you have work to do tomorrow.”
“Suppose I want to keep you up all night?” Bette queried.
“I would find it difficult to turn that offer down,” Tina replied.
They walked into the bedroom and Tina finally released Bette’s jeans, at which point Bette pulled Tina back into her
She held Tina’s face in her hands and teased closer and closer, relishing when she got close enough for Tina to have an expectation of contact, only to have Bette pull away.
“You’re doing that on purpose,” Tina whispered, her eyelids heavy with desire.
Bette released her, backed away and swung the door shut before locking it and turning back to face Tina again.
“Get undressed and get into bed,” Bette said as she leaned back onto the door. “I’ll watch.”
Tina walked casually over to where Bette stood.
“Every time I remove something, you have to match me,” Tina said as she unfastened the buttons on her blouse. “If we’re starting something again, it’s going to be with you and me on equal footing.”
Tina slipped the blouse off her shoulders and tossed it over the arm of a chair that sat beside one of the dressers. Bette pulled her t-shirt over her head and simply let it fall to the floor.
“Is that one of the reasons you left?” Bette asked. “Because you didn’t feel we were equals?”
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Oh my God!
I am so happy that you are back!
I love your stories, i read them more than once over the years.
But i don’t have time to reread this story, have to work very early in the morning , but i hope to read it when i am back tomorrow. I am looking forward to it!
You are a incredible writer and i do hope that you will find the time to write more! For now, thank you again for returning!
I was so happy to see your name again, I love your stories, off to read now,, but please continue to post more stories.,, please post soon.
Thanks for the shoutout! You’re an incredible writer with a natural style that pulls the reader in and makes one sorry when the chapter/story ends. Your writing demands rereading many times. It’s just that enjoyable. :-)
Brilliant, thanks so much for this. 62 Pages of pleasure.
Enjoy your stories which are good to read more than once.
Look forward to keeping on swimming :-)
I love this story, as I always enjoy reading your work!
Loved it, thanks so much. You are such a good writer!
Glad you are back,I love your stories.
I certainly remember this story and I love it more now. Thanks for updating the language so the profane language is present. It’s not that I am a complete potty mouth but let’s be realistic. Several of the stories that have transferred over have blanks or asterisks instead of the actual language. In my opinion, when this happens, the stories lose some of their authenticity and the characters lose their edge. I realize that it takes effort to fill in the blanks especially in longer stories. So thanks for doing that.
I find stories harder to read with the asterisks inserted…it’s like a jolt of reality interfering with my escapism. I had to get to the task of editing them out. I do plan to work on more stories; some easier than others because of where the files are. This story was first posted almost 10 (!) years ago, so the digital file was more challenging to retrieve. I’m not much for cursing, but the occasional well placed F-bomb can really get someone’s attention.
@JKS I can’t believe this story is almost 10 years old! It reads now as fresh as it did then. I really love your stories because they are so well written with realism, humor, sarcasm and authenticity. It also helps that for us ORs (Original Readers), it follows canon for the characters and storylines. :-)
WOW, what a fabulous surprise seeing you back here, JKS! So glad you found your way back here and have even edited! Let me know if you have any questions or need any help!
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing again!
Thanks for your effort of editing and for giving us this wonderful story again.
It’s still as beautiful as I remember it from reading your story for the first time a few years ago.
Finally I managed to finish reading!
I was slowly reading this story.
And I confess that it was a great trip.
Pretty and wonderful.!
And to think that have passed since the 10 years, but
It remains very current.
The entire universe.
Don’t remember seeing this before and it was wonderful, took me back a ways. So great to have you back giving us something to read from you. Wish other former writers would come back to us, all of you are valued and missed greatly. So many of the stories are not completed, would be so nice if they were. Again welcome back, looking forward to more. Thanks.
Loved this! I love your writing. I’m so glad I’ve come across your stories, be it years later but better late than never lol