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Letting Go – chapter 14
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Chapter 14:
“Ahem,” a voice coughed as the restroom door swung open and brought Bette and Tina back into reality; they were in a public restroom at a restaurant and on a lunch break.
Both their faces were flushed with embarrassment as they pulled away from each other faster than lightning. As they were fixing their hair and straightening their clothes, unsure where to look anymore, their eyes rolled in all directions avoiding contact with the server who had just walked in to use the restroom.
Their wandering eyes finally met again, and Bette’s eyes made an “Oops,” expression while her smile of mortification stated “Well, looks like I’m never coming back here again.” Tina noticed Bette’s own innocence as she returned back to her shy state of mind releasing a “Pardon me for being so aggressive,” awkward smile.
The server who had walked in on the two was now in a stall with the stall door closed, but Bette and Tina were still embarrassed from being caught. It was as if they were two kids caught with their hands in a cookie jar after specifically being told not to. They paused not making the slightest movement hoping, praying, believing that if they just stood there, they might become invisible and maybe no one saw them.
Bette realized the time restriction they both had and finally, she stuck her thumb out of her fist and pointed backwards towards the door urging for them to make an escape before they had to see the server again.
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“Wow, I didn’t know two people could get lost in this place.” Cecilia said in a sarcastic tone when she finally saw Bette and Tina returning to their booth.
From the looks on Bette and Tina, Cecilia could tell something was going on, and she knew what it was. However, she wasn’t going to give up on Bette so easily. She was back for good, and this time she’d make sure Bette would be hers again.
A smile of exasperation was let out by Bette, she didn’t feel like dealing with Cecilia’s *****, especially after what had just happened.
“We have to get going, class is going to start soon, has the server brought our check over?” Bette asked while her eyes were searching the table for their check.
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Hey smile. The special is back! Did you miss me? : P
The oh shiznit line was funny.
Loved the chapter and as always keep on trucking.
EWWWWW he’s going to propose. Now in a situation like this she should definately give the ring back b4 she fcuks Bette..lol
c’est la vie… such is life.
Oh shit..I am finally caught up on chapters and now have to wait to see if T says NO! to Eric. I lover your story.
Run Tina, run!!Get away from the dinner table before it’s too late! Marvellous story, can’t wait for the next chapter
Good chapter. This is sad for Bette and Tina, they need to talk and work thing out and see what they have for each other.Oh we will see the drama coming next. Post soon, thanks!
Thanks for posting two chapters this weekend. It’s a nice way to return to work! I like the little drama and can’t wait for Eric to propose….maybe Bette and Cecilia are at the same restaurant. I hope that Tina will not be pressured to say yes, but instead she can follow her own feelings and tell Eric that it is over. Kiitos!
Nice chapter…by all means please proceed. Will there be a a drama scene at the dinner table???
LMFAO @ SHIZNIT i loved this chapter and uh oh time for a proposal, tina had better brake things off with eric and go running to bette with an explanation. and mmayb they’re at the same restaurant and if tina brakes up with eric then she’ll have bette there to console her. and cecilia better leave bette alone and bette needs to make up her mind. POST SOON!!!!!
Hey sorry, was caught up with work and went out for lunch, hehe… trying my luck to see if you’d posted and “Ta da” :D
Oh my… here comes the drama….
Noooooo… I am/was not just being nice to you… this story is truly great!!! I mean it!!!
I’m sooooo eager to wait for that house to be built, although I have some hesitation though because of my own ‘decoration’ ability :P hahaha
I will not let go, I will not let go, I will not let go…!!!
good story.hurry and post soon
Hola! Great Past 2 chapters. Sorry I didn’t comment on the last one. You are doing an excellent job! I love the twist.. Since I am so addicted to yours I will try writing mine again since I know there are some people who like my twist!! :) Post soon.
Hey come on your last chapter was GREAT!!!! and I know I’m not the only 1 who thinks that!!! Public bathroom sex can be HOTT, and u started that out very nicely!!!! Now I smell trouble brewing… I think Eric is gonna pop the question!!!! What a mess for Tina, she’d better run to Bette, right after she turns down Eric, and finish up what she started!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!!
Ohh yes verý nice…but Tina better make up her mind and go for her woman. Wonderful story here and do post soon
great chapter. I see these 2 two need to talk to one another bec they are thinking and feeling similar. silly girls. oh gosh eric is going to propose at dinner. I hope T does not do anything stupid….please continue.
How many I love this story do you want this time smile?? love it love it love it more?? love it please post soon I LOVE IT great chapter I hope Tina has the strength to say no to Erik….
whoo hoo…let the games begin!!! I smell drama in the works, pls be gentle on their hearts..tks
k. what part of “your mine” didnt i understand from last chapt. for me that usually means, everyone else keep your fucking hands off. but thats just me. so smiles, you see no smiles from me about with chappy. what the hell, after bette saw was cecillia made her feel she goes to dinner. and eric. god, kill him off already.
C’est toujours un plaisir de lire ton histoire. c’est le coeur battant que tous les jours je vérifie que tu as posté un nouveau chapitre. Merci, merci… J’attends la suite avec impatience.
The games it will only make it hurt worse!!!!!!!!!!! nice post hate the cliff hangers lol
Oh NO,that sounds like a proposal.I hope Bette & Cecelia don’t go to the same restaurant,because that may trigger Tina to say Yes…GREAT JOB…POST SOON..THANKS
Great chapter again!!! I smell a proposal coming on.
My story…stories I cannot share. I don’t kiss an tell:)