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    Letting Go – chapter 14

    Story written on August 29, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Bette’s stubbornness was a way of showing how much she actually cared about Tina.

     

    “I…” Tina rested her forehead on the palm of her hands.  ‘How did I get myself into this?’ as she asked herself.  “I made a total fool out of myself.  I don’t even have the right to be upset.”

     

    Tina was no different from Cecilia, they were both mad about Bette, and they both had made a move on her without her consent and regard for her feelings.  However Tina felt, Cecilia must have been feeling too.

     

    “What happened, Tina?” Alice‘s voice went from curiosity to genuine concern.

     

    “I’m sorry Alice, I don’t feel comfortable discussing this.”

     

    “It’s okay Tina, just know that I’m here for you, and so is Bette.  She might seem cold on the outside, but she’s full of passion and love on the inside.  I’ve known her for a long time, and I can tell she cares for you, even if it’s only been a couple of days.”  Alice stated.

     

    Alice‘s statement was indeed true.  Bette refused to allow emotions get the best of her, and that’s why she would choose never to get attached to anything or anyone.  Bette’s stubbornness was a way of showing how much she actually cared about Tina.  The only other time she had cared about something so much within the last decade was losing her charm.

     

    Tina didn’t know how to reply to Alice, all she did was reply by giving a forced but weak smile.

     

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    Bette was now having dinner with Cecilia.  She said she wouldn’t, but the way Tina had so clearly drawn that boundary between them upset Bette.  A part of Bette wanted to get even, and having dinner with Cecilia might just do, but did Tina even care?  Another part of Bette wanted to just forget about Tina, and dating might speed up the process, but did she want to forget Tina?

     

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    Tina on the other hand was having dinner with Eric, and her parents, who were celebrating their own wedding anniversary.  She was happy for her parents, they had been together for 25 years and their love grew stronger everyday.  That was the kind of love that lacked between her and Eric.

     

    Tina didn’t know what was wrong, whether it was what had happened between her and Bette this afternoon or whether she was sitting next to a man she didn’t love and had to pretend she did, but she didn’t have a good feeling about this dinner.  Her instinct told her something was about to happen; especially with all the odd stares Tina’s parents and Eric had been exchanging all night.

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    6. Good chapter. This is sad for Bette and Tina, they need to talk and work thing out and see what they have for each other.Oh we will see the drama coming next. Post soon, thanks!

    7. Thanks for posting two chapters this weekend. It’s a nice way to return to work! I like the little drama and can’t wait for Eric to propose….maybe Bette and Cecilia are at the same restaurant. I hope that Tina will not be pressured to say yes, but instead she can follow her own feelings and tell Eric that it is over. Kiitos!

    9. LMFAO @ SHIZNIT i loved this chapter and uh oh time for a proposal, tina had better brake things off with eric and go running to bette with an explanation. and mmayb they’re at the same restaurant and if tina brakes up with eric then she’ll have bette there to console her. and cecilia better leave bette alone and bette needs to make up her mind. POST SOON!!!!!

    10. Hey sorry, was caught up with work and went out for lunch, hehe… trying my luck to see if you’d posted and “Ta da” :D
      Oh my… here comes the drama….
      Noooooo… I am/was not just being nice to you… this story is truly great!!! I mean it!!!
      I’m sooooo eager to wait for that house to be built, although I have some hesitation though because of my own ‘decoration’ ability :P hahaha

    13. Hola! Great Past 2 chapters. Sorry I didn’t comment on the last one. You are doing an excellent job! I love the twist.. Since I am so addicted to yours I will try writing mine again since I know there are some people who like my twist!! :) Post soon.

    14. Hey come on your last chapter was GREAT!!!! and I know I’m not the only 1 who thinks that!!! Public bathroom sex can be HOTT, and u started that out very nicely!!!! Now I smell trouble brewing… I think Eric is gonna pop the question!!!! What a mess for Tina, she’d better run to Bette, right after she turns down Eric, and finish up what she started!!!!!! POST SOON!!!!!

    16. great chapter. I see these 2 two need to talk to one another bec they are thinking and feeling similar. silly girls. oh gosh eric is going to propose at dinner. I hope T does not do anything stupid….please continue.

    17. How many I love this story do you want this time smile?? love it love it love it more?? love it please post soon I LOVE IT great chapter I hope Tina has the strength to say no to Erik….

    19. k. what part of “your mine” didnt i understand from last chapt. for me that usually means, everyone else keep your fucking hands off. but thats just me. so smiles, you see no smiles from me about with chappy. what the hell, after bette saw was cecillia made her feel she goes to dinner. and eric. god, kill him off already.

    20. C’est toujours un plaisir de lire ton histoire. c’est le coeur battant que tous les jours je vérifie que tu as posté un nouveau chapitre. Merci, merci… J’attends la suite avec impatience.

    22. Oh NO,that sounds like a proposal.I hope Bette & Cecelia don’t go to the same restaurant,because that may trigger Tina to say Yes…GREAT JOB…POST SOON..THANKS

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