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    Letting Go – chapter 17

    Story written on September 5, 2005 by smile12345.
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    “Yes,” Tina finally found the word she was searching for as she whispered it softly. Never in her life had she been so sure…

     

    >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

     

    *Zzz Zzz*

     

    Tina’s phone lit up and vibrated indicating she had a new voicemail.

     

    Tina opened her eyes and without moving the rest of her body, her hand reached over to the other side of her bed searching for her cell phone.  She flipped open her cell phone while bringing it back into her direction, and pressing on the “1″ button to call her voicemail box.

     

    “You have one new voice message.  New message:” the automatic operator stopped speaking to play Bette’s message.  “Hi Tina, it’s Bette…I heard you weren’t feeling well so I just wanted to see how you were doing.  I’m outside your apartment right now but I guess since you’re not home I’ll see you later.  Okay sorry bye.”

     

    Hearing Bette’s name on her voicemail, with the quickness, Tina sat her upper body up still holding the phone to her ear.  ‘I’m outside your apartment right now…‘ Bette, she must’ve been the one knocking on the door! 

     

    As soon as Tina heard that sentence, the phone slid out of her hand and Tina jumped off of her bed hoping to catch Bette.  Without further thought, she sprinted out of her room, and bolted for her apartment door.  ‘Bette didn’t call too long ago, maybe she’s still here.’  When Tina opened her front door, the flowers lying against her door slid down to the ground.  She didn’t want to leave them there, but she didn’t have time to put them inside either.  Tina swooped them up from the ground as she continued running towards the elevator.

     

    ‘Come on, come on.  Hurry up!’ Tina quietly told the elevator while pressing the “down” button continuously as if it was going to make the elevator arrive faster.  She knew it wouldn’t, and it didn’t.  If Tina had to wait any longer, she might miss Bette.

     

    “Damn it!” Tina couldn’t wait for the elevator to arrive.  ‘Don’t leave, don’t leave, don’t leave, don’t leave’ was all Tina thought about as she ran towards the staircase, and ran, jumped, and skipped her way down those six flights stairs to the main entrance of her apartment complex.  Each step closer to the ground level, Tina picked up her pace, she refused to miss Bette.

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    1. well when she tells eric, NO. it willb e very difficult but she then has bettes strong and supportive arms to comfort and protect her, right? im telling ya, stop selling yourself short. your doing a great job and just keep posting and thanking us. its a two way street with ff stuff. you post we thank and you thank and then post and around and around it goes. so thank us and post again asap.

    2. Smile, this is great. I’m anxiously awaiting your next post. I understand lazy days, and it’s a holiday, so I’m just grateful you decided to post when you should be relaxing, like the rest with the day off. I’m glad that you got these two together. If Tina didn’t get to Bette in time, it would’ve been disheartening. But, they’re together now, and we’ll just see how they navigate from here. Post soon.

    5. Another great chapter. You really do a great job. This is one of my favorites on the FF site. Always looking for another post from you. Not new to your story, I just haven’t had time to comment or even breathe for that matter. Very busy lately, so I’m catching up with alot of my favorites. Unfortunately, I’m not commenting like I should, but I wanted to say great job. Love it.

    6. To answer your question, Mechanical. You haven’t disappointed me yet and I don’t expect you will, this story just keeps getting better and better. You really are a talented writer, along with a few others I have found on this site. I wish all stories were this good maybe then I wouldn’t be afraid of starting my introduction to Short Fiction course!! Calculus I can do, but literature, uggh! Try and take it easy and good luck!

    7. ‘Skool makes you sooper smart’… hahaha… I almost burst out laughing and I think one of my colleagues caught me with this huge grin on my face and I tried to cover it :P
      Yeah, I was busy with work last week and this week I’m more like… trying to relax a bit :P although I have another assign that’s gonna due this thurs :S
      Hahaha, well… hmm… should set a lower temperature or shorter timer to prevent the toasters from burning? :P
      I need more spoilers… hahaha… it’s not ruining your story… I swear!! :D

    10. Hey Smile Thanks for posted again Whoa! it’s getting better and really nice that Tina catch Bette LOL! Tina she really funny she really trying hard to catch Bette Wonderful written Smile anyway so your not really far from my MOM that was great I Love old town Alexandria I always call them small Georgetown look alike it’s that right I just guess anyway Please continue post soon THANKS.

    15. Glad to see another fantastic update from you smile….Tina catching up to find Bette…giving her her coat to warm her up….waiting for the next one smile…post soon

    16. This story is just so fucking cute. Tina runs after Bette, Bette just wants to take care of her, they finally kiss what more could you ask for. But Tina has got to let Eric go, its not right to keep him hanging, and she really won’t be able to move on with Bette until she does. Maybe Eric could stop by to check on Tina, find Bette and thenTina could just kinda let him know that way. Nah, thats mean. Hey, you do what you have to do with work and school, will be checking in to see if you’ve been able to drop in.

    18. Wonderful chapter. I especially loved the part on Tina running after Bette and leaving everything to catch the love of her life. Great job.

      I hope you Americans could enjoy your labor. After all the horrible news of Katrina it would be nice to be able to relax a bit. Just know that the rest of the world is praying for you and will send you relief efforts now that Bush has asked for it. Kiitos!

    19. freakin jezze lol yay im soo happy for them but eric needs to go and go now lol sorry i havent commented in a while my comp was down …i was just gonna start all my stories form their latest post but when i got your yours i had to go back and read it all lol your just that amazing lol well thankx and post soon!!byeness<3389375893759

    21. JESUS are u trying to kill me i read the summary and nearly fell off my chair geez. thank god she was saying yes to bette now all she has to do is say NO to eric. very good chapter and it should hopefully hold me off for the rest of the dat seeing as i start skool 2day and i have to go a whole day without reading fan fic or going into chat and ill probably be thinking about ur story all day everyones gonn ask y im smiling so much. POST SOON!!!!!!!

    22. Thinking back to last night, Tina remembered the expression on her parents’ faces, they were happier than she was, they were more anxious, and hell, they would’ve said “Yes,” and married Eric.

      ** LMAO! I had this thought when reading it.

      Smile, there are so many of us that are enjoying your story. I sincerely hope that you continue writing it.

      What albeez said, in essence is very true….you write, we say thank you…great job. Your writing is a way of telling your readers, “you’re welcome ~ and here’s another chapter!”

      Which leads me to….so where is it?

    23. YAY! That’s TOTALLY something I would do. . .and have done-run outside wearing close to nothing with no shoes in like 20 degree weather. . snow on the ground. . .buuur. Pleeeeaaase post again soon! I feel bad for Eric because he’s so romantic. . .well, not really, he’ll find someone else, bring on B&T!

    25. You’re working 2 jobs,going to school AND writing such splendid stories??? Good grief and i thought my 1 job and school were hard!! I’m impressed!!Well, I definitely understand the need for rest…but uhhh, I’m kinda addicted to the story…I’ll trade you 2 hours of my sleepytime for another chapter..whad’ya say??

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