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Letting Go – chapter 18
Previously in chapter 17:
Bette now slowly traced her index finger down Tina’s lips and onto her chin where Bette slowly lifted Tina’s head up to meet her eyes. “Tina,” Bette continued, “Can I kiss you?”
“Yes,” Tina finally found the word she was searching for as she whispered it softly. Never in her life had she been so sure of an answer, yes, yes, yes, she wanted to shout out her response, because never in her life had she been so crazily in love. The woman standing before her had stolen her heart from the beginning. Yes, if only it were that easy to respond to Eric’s proposal.
Chapter 18:
Tina closed her eyes and tilted her head up to provide Bette with better access to her lips.
“Yes,” was all Bette needed to hear before she placed her awaiting lips onto the beautiful blonde that stood so close in front of her. Using the outer side of her fingers, Bette removed them from Tina’s chin and slid them across the outline of Tina’s jaw structure where she traced that imaginary line. Meeting Tina’s locks, Bette stretched out her fingers and intertwined them together pulling her in for soft kisses.
Meanwhile, Bette’s left hand found itself rising. It crawled up Tina’s lower thigh, up to her hips, and Bette finally settled them onto Tina’s waist, pulling her in closer by wrapping her arms around her waist. Meeting face to face and hip to hip only had the two women craving more. No matter how close they came into contact, they just weren’t close enough.
‘What is she doing to me?’ Tina asked herself. With the initial first kiss Bette placed on Tina, she knew it was over. There was no way Tina could ever sustain herself from not going crazy, and she was getting weaker by the second. Uncontrollably, Tina’s arms found themselves raising, and wrapping itself behind Bette’s neck for support.
For each kiss Bette placed on Tina, Tina felt herself sinking deeper into Bette’s touch. Everything she had been worrying about: school, teaching, Eric, and his proposal last night; all seemed to have vanished. It was as if Bette had become her haven shielding her from everything she didn’t want.
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(41 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Hahah, Joanna makes me think of my sisters. . .and I can’t help but laugh at her reactions sometimes. Chubby heart huh? Is that a full heart maybe? And is a skinny heart empty? Hmmm. . .things to contemplate while watching grass grow. . .HAha, please post again soon, I love this story!
someone just turned the turn the temperature up a notch. phew… hot.
Awwwwww Smile…I’ve missed you. Great update. Funny how “moms” show up unannounced, uninvited and unexpected….my mother does it often ;)
On a side note ~ snQQpy – Do you like Eric? If you do, take him away from Tina, PLEASE!
HELL NO! Smile, only you can prevent forrest fires….and that’s all Eric is. The sooner YOU remove him from Tina, the happier we’ll all be.
I’ve been waiting and hoping for a new chapter. Thank you for not forgetting us. This was great and I love Joanna’s reaction. I wonder how dumb Tina’s mom really is? Then again, she may be on denial. I hope this doesn’t bring drama into B&T starting relationship. Although, I’m afraid it will. But I suppose not everything can be smooth sailing. I was just hoping that these two could have a drama free beginning as a couple. Kiitos!
It is hott and they were going to take all their clothes off !lol they are so busted
Hey I’m really smiley right now to read this Story OMG! their are busted LOL! Please continue post soon Thanks!!
All children and parents are the same. The children want approvAL nd love . Most parents wantmwhat they think is best for the child and still boss them,, thanks
Yes Smile is back great…. Love the story.. This chapter is just so good….. Why don´t you like it?? I hope life will treat you with time to make another post soon:-)Take care of yourself…:o)
Have missed your posts great story great chapter!!!!
Tina wasn’t wearing any underwear either!?!?!
Wow.lol
I see why Bette lost…I would have given up too! I think the Joanna and Mrs. Kennard suprise is great ( interesting/unny as hell). Bette should sneak out the back window onto the firescape…just for kicks.
THE MESS OF LOVE…..GREAT GREAT CHAPTER…THANKS FOR NOT FORGETTING ABOUT US.POST AGAIN WHEN YOU CAN….
DAMS…this is good shit. Please post soon.
I love this story and this particular beginning. Post soon please.
Those two hot mamas need to be more considerate of others. (smile) Can’t wait to see what happens next. Please post soon. Loving this.
It’s either a that damned bell or someone interrupting B & T! Sorry I haven’t commented for so long, I just now got up to date with the story, and love it, love it, love it and love it. By the way did I mention that I love it? Be waiting.
why must you leave us hanging like that. Please don’t let them get caught be mom..shit.
this story just gets better
As long as you keep writing like that you can have any part of my brain you want. Although you have completely turned it into mush at the moment, she says breathing heavily. ;)
Great chapter, very sexy. I hope they don’t get busted by mom lol.
Question: Where is this story taking place?
I hope you post again soon, I love this story.
Wow..it’s getting good and hot in here!!
awwww lo lsoo cute!! heheh please post soon you rthe best!!!Lol thanx byeness<33823957389
Alright!!! so great keep it coming !!!!
AW,c’mon on…you ended it there!!?!?? Please smile can I have some more?
Yeah Smile is back and glad to see you. Damn this chapter is hot and beautiful and damn love it. Now mon in the door and they better stop make out before mom gonna kick their ass, and glad is Joanna see them first, if Mom see it she will die right there lol. Ok post soon please, thanks!
What!?!?!?!?! Hahahaha… that was great… more than great !! :D
Hahaha… mess heh… yeah there’s a really big mess in there!!! Hahaha… what’s going on with their talk during the dinner? I’m really curious to know about that :P
Yess… you’re “sooper smartt” to know that I like that shirt :P
Sorry, was caught up with work… and had quite a bad day :( So I wasn’t able to read you mail until just now… and you’d posted it :) Anyway, you’re doing great without any of my suggestion :P
Wow, incredibly sexy!! Why does mom and sis have to ruin it?!? Go back home. (sorry, I can’t help myself) Great drama.
gawd smiley. your killing me. my mom never announces herself either, highly frustrating. please, get eric out of all of our miserys. tina and bette have craved their names into each other. you should never second guess yourself about this story. your doing a great job. thanks.