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Letting It Lie (5) – final chapter
‘I believe in miracles,’ she thought with a smile, finally zoning in on Tina’s sensitive nub to pay it the special attention it deserved – her fingers still moving in and out of her.
Tina was losing it, and fast. She was pulling at Bette’s hair, trying to be gentle while warning waves splashed over her. ‘This is too intense,’ she thought as her body shook, ‘Oh yes … I could die like this …’
Bette could tell Tina was cumming soon, but wouldn’t let up. She thrusted into Tina harder, thumping her tongue even faster while she felt Tina’s legs around her head, tensing up. With her free arm, she held her legs opened and continued to make love to her body while she came.
After holding her breath in anticipation, the orgasm crashed into her, shaking her senses. She opened her eyes and gasped up, her back arching wildly. She pushed up on her hands, her stomach muscles pulling her up gently, forcing her to watch the sight of Bette’s head between her legs. That only made her climax all the more intense, dropping back down into the bed, screaming for a moment and then whimpering as her body began to settle. She had lost her breath along the way, and panted while Bette moved up her exhausted body.
She felt her body attempt to recover with Bette’s fingers still inside of her while she looked around. The sudden realization of where they were hit her, and Bette seemed to notice her physical shift as well.
"It’s okay," Bette whispered to her, kissing over Tina’s cheek to her lips. "It’s okay. I’m here … I’m here baby."
Tina could feel herself spasm, a reaction to her earlier orgasm, and she smiled, relaxing in Bette’s arms.
"I don’t think it’s ever been that good," Tina smiled lazily, her hair a complete mess from all of her squirming about. "Bette … I’m so sorry too."
"We’ll sort it out," she replied honestly, her chest heaving. She wished she wasn’t so desperately in need of Tina’s touch and just able to hold her, but that wasn’t the truth.
Tina smiled at the troubled expression on her face. She reached her head up to lock lips with her again, somehow managing to shift them so that Bette laid on her back. She brought her legs between Bette’s and started to grind into her.
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I’m glad Rick was more than just the selfish creep who wanted to watch. And that he cared enough about Tina to let her go for her happiness.
That was ……..amazing!
Just catching up on all of your postings. What a great, great story. Really touched my heart and I am soo thankful that you shared your talent with us. I’m going to save this one so I can read it again and again. Thank you!
sooo intense so beautiful bravo GrindRight, excellent!
Great story and I hate to see it end. It was full of love, forgiveness and the inevitability of a reconnection and the ability to restore their lost one and only love. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
whoa!! but still sad!!
loved this story, and i also hated to see it end, but you did a great job… waiting for more from you
story’s very intense and the writing, very vivid. hope you can post again soon.
Thank you for such an original (and hot!)take on the B&T relationship. You have a writer’s gift for knowing how to leave a story at the perfect time. Bravo.
Awesome grindright, you did it just right. I would love to see more posts from you. Thank you.
What a beautiful and bittersweet story. Your writing is brilliant. I can’t wait to read more of your stories.
Intense but beautiful at the same time.. forgiveness can be so beautiful in the aftermath of pain. Thanks for a sharing this story with us… Lets see a few more stories from you in the future.
Amazing story!!! So full of love and sadness but also joy and forgiveness. Thank you
Excellent story GrindRight! Loved it nd thank you for this. It was different but oh so beaufiful. Thank you!
Wow powerful! :)
Wow! That was powerful yet different. I enjoyed it very much but sad to see it end. Thank you.
That was excellent and awesome story, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Absolutely without a doubt, the best TiBette story I’ve ever read! Thank you.
It was a wonderful story. have me a lot different feeling, but the best moment was the end.
Great story thanks.