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Letting It Lie (5) – final chapter
Tina fell on top of Bette while she continued to ride out the orgasm. She held Bette’s head in her hands, pressing their lips together. A kiss that seemed endless.
"Ffffuck," Bette gasped after Tina had pulled back. "Uh … T … ahhhh. How … you … uhhh," Bette started with exhaustion.
"Bette?" Tina asked, enjoying the closeness of their bodies intertwined on the bed.
"Mmm," Bette breathed with a big smile. Nothing could be better than this moment.
Tina smiled down to her, reaching underneath her.
"What are you doing?" Bette asked, swallowing hard as her body just began to recover.
"I need to see all of you," she whispered, unclasping her bra and tossing it away from their spot on the bed.
"Show me," Bette smiled up to Tina, nodding toward her bra as well. She cleared her throat and then swallowed hard again when she saw Tina completely naked on top of her. "You’re … so … beautiful …"
Tina smirked at the look on Bette’s face, making the smallest noise of satisfaction when she felt Bette’s hands press into her breasts. "Not yet," Tina giggled, moving down Bette’s body with tiny kisses.
"Why?" Bette asked innocently, watching with wide eyes as Tina travelled down her body, kissing all over her thighs with a smile. "You …"
"-That’s right," Tina whispered, pushing Bette up on the bed to comfortably lay with her head between the woman’s legs. "Now watch me."
Bette rested her head up on the pillow, looking down to Tina in amazement. It was the most seductive thing she could have imagined.
Tina’s hands were all over her legs and her stomach, occassionally reaching up to take Bette’s nipple between her fingers and roll it. Everything seemed so incredible, and she couldn’t stop the quick build up once again. It was so hot. She watched as Tina’s tongue danced over her engorged clit. It was so swollen again it was nearly painful. she combed her fingers through Tina’s hair, sweeping it out of the way so she could watch more carefully. She spread her legs even wider and watched Tina eat her out, in every sense of the phrase. It was messy, but by god – it was amazing. It was even hard to watch the entire time – she was so aroused she could barely breathe. Then Tina locked eyes with her and she lost it again.
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I’m glad Rick was more than just the selfish creep who wanted to watch. And that he cared enough about Tina to let her go for her happiness.
That was ……..amazing!
Just catching up on all of your postings. What a great, great story. Really touched my heart and I am soo thankful that you shared your talent with us. I’m going to save this one so I can read it again and again. Thank you!
sooo intense so beautiful bravo GrindRight, excellent!
Great story and I hate to see it end. It was full of love, forgiveness and the inevitability of a reconnection and the ability to restore their lost one and only love. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
whoa!! but still sad!!
loved this story, and i also hated to see it end, but you did a great job… waiting for more from you
story’s very intense and the writing, very vivid. hope you can post again soon.
Thank you for such an original (and hot!)take on the B&T relationship. You have a writer’s gift for knowing how to leave a story at the perfect time. Bravo.
Awesome grindright, you did it just right. I would love to see more posts from you. Thank you.
What a beautiful and bittersweet story. Your writing is brilliant. I can’t wait to read more of your stories.
Intense but beautiful at the same time.. forgiveness can be so beautiful in the aftermath of pain. Thanks for a sharing this story with us… Lets see a few more stories from you in the future.
Amazing story!!! So full of love and sadness but also joy and forgiveness. Thank you
Excellent story GrindRight! Loved it nd thank you for this. It was different but oh so beaufiful. Thank you!
Wow powerful! :)
Wow! That was powerful yet different. I enjoyed it very much but sad to see it end. Thank you.
That was excellent and awesome story, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Absolutely without a doubt, the best TiBette story I’ve ever read! Thank you.
It was a wonderful story. have me a lot different feeling, but the best moment was the end.
Great story thanks.