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Letting It Lie (5) – final chapter
Bette squirmed and writhed around, unable to contain herself in any manner. There was too much at stake, too much to lose, and everything to gain. Her head was swirling with wishes, and praying that Tina would let her cum before she exploded. The abstinence had been killing her, and she was sure she wouldn’t last another night. She was grinding her hips into Tina’s hand hard, contorting her face with another troubled expression Tina was familiar with.
"Hurt me," Bette hissed through her teeth, "Do it … hard! … Uhhh …"
Tina wasn’t about to hurt the beautiful, already wounded woman beneath her, but she did know what would make her feel better. She moved back only slightly and began to pound into her, using nearly the entire length of her fingers with each thrust.
"YES! UHHH!" Bette screamed, pressing her head into the mattress with the new sensations she was feeling. No one had ever touched her like Tina could.
"I love you," Tina whispered into her ear, knowing how much it would mean after all of this time. "… And I’m never leaving again."
"T!" Bette gasped, tears forming that she didn’t have the strength to hold in. "T …" Her hips rocked to meet the hand delivering such pleasures.
"And I forgive you …" Tina whispered honestly, kissing down Bette’s neck to her shoulder. The strap of her bra was hanging loosely down her arm until she enveloped Bette more tightly, and then it was taut around her bicep.
"T, I’m … cumming," Bette whimpered, complete pleasure coursing through her body. She let go and allowed herself to bask in the sensations she had missed, and rightfully so. She was actually amazed at how earth-shattering the sparks and tingles were that were taking her body over. She was shaking uncontrollably, her eyes focused on the hand that was giving her the incredible orgasm. "Uh! Ti … Tina …" she gasped out, holding her breath for several seconds before dropping her head back and letting out a scream like nothing Tina had ever heard before. It pierced through the air, and brought a smile to Tina’s face, just knowing how happy she had made Bette by making love to her remarkable body. It hadn’t changed a bit.
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I’m glad Rick was more than just the selfish creep who wanted to watch. And that he cared enough about Tina to let her go for her happiness.
That was ……..amazing!
Just catching up on all of your postings. What a great, great story. Really touched my heart and I am soo thankful that you shared your talent with us. I’m going to save this one so I can read it again and again. Thank you!
sooo intense so beautiful bravo GrindRight, excellent!
Great story and I hate to see it end. It was full of love, forgiveness and the inevitability of a reconnection and the ability to restore their lost one and only love. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
whoa!! but still sad!!
loved this story, and i also hated to see it end, but you did a great job… waiting for more from you
story’s very intense and the writing, very vivid. hope you can post again soon.
Thank you for such an original (and hot!)take on the B&T relationship. You have a writer’s gift for knowing how to leave a story at the perfect time. Bravo.
Awesome grindright, you did it just right. I would love to see more posts from you. Thank you.
What a beautiful and bittersweet story. Your writing is brilliant. I can’t wait to read more of your stories.
Intense but beautiful at the same time.. forgiveness can be so beautiful in the aftermath of pain. Thanks for a sharing this story with us… Lets see a few more stories from you in the future.
Amazing story!!! So full of love and sadness but also joy and forgiveness. Thank you
Excellent story GrindRight! Loved it nd thank you for this. It was different but oh so beaufiful. Thank you!
Wow powerful! :)
Wow! That was powerful yet different. I enjoyed it very much but sad to see it end. Thank you.
That was excellent and awesome story, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Absolutely without a doubt, the best TiBette story I’ve ever read! Thank you.
It was a wonderful story. have me a lot different feeling, but the best moment was the end.
Great story thanks.