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Life: Altered 03.28 ~*~ Captured
“She goes, what is going on here?” Ro demanded; and
“We jumped you in, we are jumping you out.” Ro tossed her head back and laughed,
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“You think you are going to take me?
“Blood in…” He began and something came over Rosita, she couldn’t hold it all in any more, the cool collective Rosita disappeared, and this new, emotional Rosita emerged.
“***** YOU! I have bled for you! I’ve lost for you…” Ro roared back and Ro thought it sounded like what
“I’m calling the police.”
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“Take the car and get out of here. Now.” Ro commanded
“GO, before they change their minds and don’t let you.” Ro said, moving to her, and whispering in her ear. “I’ll be fine, nothing they can throw at me that I can’t handle.”
“Oh god.” She muttered, the tires squealing and as she looked up, she saw Rosita taking the first swing at whom
“Dance with me
“No weapons.” He growled and someone pulled out a gun, and
“NO! We are not here to kill her! We are jumping her out, that’s it! All of you owe her your lives at one point or another! Remember that! Turning our back on her isn’t enough, she turned her back on us, and so we are going to leave her with a remembrance. Come on Rosita, be the Picaro, and beat us fair and square if you dare.”
“Poet and the ***** don’t know it.” Ro said, tossing the handle aside into the garage, letting out a primal yell, wading in like Jet Li, but she knew she was going to come out looking like the Terminator at the end of the second movie. Dead.
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I agree with Pao totally. The road Shane has to take now that she’s blind is a tough one, and you portray it so well. I imagine putting myself in her position, or any other blind person and try to understand what they must be going through. BTW, I like this Beach character, she seems very nice. I hope Shane does decide to go with Dana to Australia.I loved the way Quin explained what she’s feeling right now, and it’s a very good thing. As I said before, Alice just might have found what she’s been looking for. And I hope Ro is gonna be ok!
Wonderful chap. Haven’t commented in a while, just trying to catch up on all the rapidly posted chapters. Not complaining about that by the way. Loved Quin finally admitting how she feels. I do happen to like your version of Bette, she seems much more relaxed w/ Candace, Don’t know if she’ll cheat w/ Ro but whats Bette w/o drama in her life? Shane & Dana are a fav as well.