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Life Without Jenny (chapter 13)
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“So you guys will be at my wedding?” I said.
“I was gonna be there whether she was a good woman or not to be honest,” Carla said with a smile.
“I expect you to walk you down the aisle myself, sis,” Greg said smiling widely.
Tears of joy filled my eyes as I set down my empty glass and went to the couch to sit in between my long-lost siblings. They smiled widely at me and just like when we were children we embraced and just held each other…
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Max:
“Holy fuck!” I exclaimed, “is this real?”
“She has no control over anything right now,” the hypnotist said, “she is describing everything she is seeing.”
“Oh my God,” I cried, “that means…”
Nikki gasped breaking out of the trance in tears, “Dylan killed Jenny!”
“We have to go!” I said grabbing Nikki hand and rushing her out of the room.
“Where?” Nikki cried.
“To Helena’s house,” I said shoving her in the car, “she’s in grave danger.”
“We won’t get there on time!” Nikki cried.
“That’s why you’re calling the cops and I’m calling Helena,” I said revving up my truck and zooming down the street at full speed.
“Hello?” I heard Nikki crying as I dialed Helena’s number, “this is an emergency. The murderer of Jennifer Schecter is heading toward Helena Peabody’s house and she’s dangerous!”
I heard more chattering and Nikki started giving names and descriptions, as I hit dial and lifted the phone up to my ear. The phone rang and rang over and over again, but no one picked up.
“Fuck, fuck, FUCK!” I cried hanging up and trying her house phone. I went through the same process again before I called Alice’s cell phone.
“Hello?” I heard Alice’s groggy voice say.
“Alice!” I cried, “listen to me, it’s an emergency!”
“Max?” she said more alert.
“Dylan was the person who killed Jenny!” I cried.
“What!” Alice cried, “but how, when did she…”
“I was there Alice!” I cried, “please listen to me! She knows about Dusty and Helena and she’s on her way to her house now! She’s not answering her phone!”
“Tasha! Tasha!” I heard Alice crying.
“I’m driving over there now, but I won’t get there on time!” I said.
“Tasha’s getting dressed, she’ll head over there,” Alice said, “call Shane.”
“Already am,” I heard Nikki saying holding the phone to her ear.
“Is that Nikki?” Alice said in shock.
“Look, I’ll explain later okay? I have to go!” I said desperately.
“Be careful Max,” Alice said before hanging up the phone.
“Hello? Shane?” I heard Nikki saying.
I focused my eyes on the road and said, “put it on speaker!”
“Nikki?” I heard Shane say.
“Shane, it’s an emergency okay,” Nikki said desperately, “Dylan killed Jenny!”
“What!” Shane cried.
“Shane what’s going on?” I heard Carmen’s soft voice say.
“Listen Shane,” I said.
“Max?” Shane said.
“Yes, it’s me,” I said, “listen, Dylan is on her way to Helena’s house and she’s not answering the phone! She’s in grave danger!”
“I’m on my way,” Shane said.
“No! Shane! That’s dangerous!” Carmen said.
“Jenny is my best friend,” Shane argued angrily, “I can’t let her murderer get away.”
“We’ll see you there Shane,” I said.
“Be careful,” Nikki said.
We hung up the phone as I focused my eyes on the road once more. I only hoped we arrived on time…
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Wow, a lot happening and all good and exciting. PPS
‘Dylan was the person who killed Jenny!” – wow – didn’t see that coming
excellent as always. glad tina’s bro and sis are not like their parents!
Oh, I figured it might be Dylan. She’s one of my favorite characters, but I’ll suffer through her being the murderer. Good story.
great chaps!!
Little Angie and Cal has a nice ring to it. Drama up ahead.
am so gripped with this. dylan am i surprised in a way yes. dusty will save helena me hopes ty for post :)
Wow. So I have finally got caught up on all the shenanigans. Where to start ok, Tina nearly killing herself I didn’t see that one coming but I’m glad her sis and bro told Bette about that part of her life. Ok onto Helena she’s now an alcoholic :o I thought she was heading on a downwards spiral but didn’t think it would have gotten to actually becoming an alcoholic. As for Dusty wasn’t a real big fan of those two but I will put up with it for the sake of the story always preferred her with Dylan. But as Dylan is the baddie the murderer there is no going back for Helena anyway. Dylan killing Jenny :/ I wished it was Nikki cause she was a norse and out for herself even though Jenny had many of them traits she was in fact more annoying. Alice and Tasha, hmmm I liked them together yes but Tasha could annoy me with some of her actions but I’m glad they seem to be at a point in their relationship where everything is good and the love remains strong. Who will get to Helena’s house first??? I think it might be Shane, if so I hope she can handle what ever Dylan has to throw at her. Can’t wait for more. Oh and Caleb not a huge fan of the name but I can imagine how their lil family looks now more complete. I love how you have integrated their pasts into this story there was so much left unsaid I guess this could fill in many of the blanks.
Glad it’s Dylan and not my dear Bette… That’s all I care about. :D
Dylan killed Jenny-interesting .I didn`t see that coming.But I`m glad about the Tibette family.Thank you for the update.PPS
Wonderful update. thank you can’t wait to see what happens. Love Tina and her siblings.
Dylan killed Jenny, wow didn’t see that coming. Damn Bette and Tina are hot!
Fantastic chapter loved the darkness of Tina’s past and I love how there is a chance that Dylen might strike again! Loved it :D