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Lifeless Chptr. 4
“She said she was on call. And that she’d hate for the tickets to go to waste.”
Kit nodded in response, “Well I hope you don’t mind me joining you for the night, I had hoped to spend it at this table.” the table was placed in the back, unobstructed and it allowed privacy for the couples who occupied it. Of course they all synced up and agreed that one more was a great idea for the night.
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Bette was at home with her computer on, watching as the screen saver constantly popped up, like it was her natural reaction she’d grab the mouse to start working but then she’d allow her mind to carry her thoughts elsewhere. She’d sat there since she’d come home and noticed that the house was void of any warmth. Marissa had moved all of her things out today. She’d taken her painting off of the walls and the kitchen was strangely colorless now. But the biggest effect was in their bedroom, she hadn’t noticed how much of the things that seemed rooted in the home made her feel comfortable. The colors and little things that made her house a home were gone. Back to being in this sterile and lifeless environment.
Every inch of her home seemed foreign to her now, all except her office. This was the one place she hadn’t allowed Marissa to infiltrate with her personality or warmth. Everything was just as she needed it to be, everything had it’s own designated place and there wasn’t much argument about where else it should go. Things had an order in here and they were set just as she placed them before. All except for this key, the key to her home was resting on her desk between her file holder and computer screen. Marissa had placed it in a spot where she knew Bette would notice it. Maybe it was done subconsciously or maybe it was spite that drove her actions, but she knew that Bette would find that to be unbearably irritating. There wasn’t much that got to penetrate these few walls in her home, Marissa being one of them. She needed that, she needed the privacy of this place to settle her constant nerves.
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They are both coming from a sad place. I hope they can be happy. Together. :-) thanks for the posts!
They are both coming from a sad place. I hope they can be happy. Together. :-) thanks for the posts!
I hope that these 2 women can find their way to happiness together! Thank you for the depth you have given to these characters. Please post soon!
Wonderful story. It seems so real!
Great update, love the depth of each of them. Can’t wait for more.
Looks as though Tina is trying to turn her life around now and dig out of the pit of despair that she had allowed her self to be so fully immersed. Maybe with her truly lovely smiles and her new attitude she can give some of that to Bette and help her turn her self around as well. Then maybe they can be happy together and we know how much love they can give to each other and with a little to love and cherish as well. That will be a very lucky little baby as well as two lucky and loving moms. Can hardly wait for the rest of the story to see how this plays itself out with our girls. Thanks for posting.
Forgetful me. Thanks for giving us two chapters today. That was great. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Maybe some light will enter Bette’s heart soon. Thank goodness for Alice and Tasha, they are holding Tina together.
Thats good and can’t wait to see B&T get to know each other and get through the pain. Please post more, thanks!
Fantastic story, so beautifully written. Glad that you wrote Rick as such a great guy. Look forward to the developing relationship between Tina and Dr Porter!
Bette is so guarded with her emotions. She may have had a tiny breakthrough when she felt Tina’s genuine concern for her social life. I think it’s going to take a lot more interaction with Tina for either of them to acknowledge that they enjoy each others company.
Excellent Thank you.