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Lifeline 2
Alice, I dont need advice. Im worried, okay? I am.
Youre worried because you know deep down that youre still in love with her. Tina dont fight it, embrace it. Alice stepped back as Tinas hand rose with an open palm and headed straight for Alices cheek. The hand dropped short as Tina collapsed into a heap on the ground, tears streaming down her cheeks. Two clenched fists beat into the hot asphalt, sobs echoing through the air.
Tina… Alice kneeled beside the heartbroken blonde, pushing twists of gold aside as she met the hazel orbs. Im sorry.
Shes gone Alice. Shes never going to come back. Tina choked through her sobs, burying her head into Als waiting shoulder. The love of my life hates me.
That is the biggest load of bullshit Ive ever heard.Alice dismissed the comment, wrapping her arms loosely around shaky shoulders.
I cant handle this Alice. I just cant deal with this kind of pain. Tina shook her head, sniffing through a clogged nose. First the baby, then Bette cheating and now shes gone without a trace. I want to hate her with every fiber of my being, but its not easy.
Then dont hate her, T. Dont worry about the past until we know that Bette is safe, that should be our main priority right now.
Bette was what kept me grounded, I cant search for her. I dont even know where to start. She is far too independent to try to get any help, shes going to end up hurt and alone.
Well you know that Shane, Dana and I are always here to help. We maybe a little sluggish and immat-
Speak for yourself, Al. Said Shane through a yawn, walking over to join them. Dana was in her wake, stumbling tiredly through the parking lot. Whats wrong, Tina? Shane kneeled, searching Tinas teary eyes.
I love Bette is whats wrong Shane, I am still in love with the woman who tossed my heart to the curb like an empty bottle of alcohol on new years eve.
Alice crossed her arms over her chest, rolling her eyes. I totally knew it.
Shut up, Al, this is probably a really rough time for her. Dana added, placing an arm around Tina.
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(42 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
Wow that was emotional. Please you must continue!
OMG. Powerful and painful. Gentlefully written. Please post soon….
Awww…for Tina. Ewww…for Bette. Ummm…for the heck of it.
I love it. So full of love and heartbreak Please coninue! You are great
The heartache and pain, that hurts. Two very stubborn hurt people Looking into the night for what, Just needing and wanting each other. thanks
I really am lovin’ this…hope ya’ll keep it up.
Wow this is so emotion and sad. Post soon.
the idea of bette sleeping on a sidewalk and walking around in filthy and dirty just calls for too much suspension of disbelief. I could see her throwing herself into her work, drinking too much, putting up a nearly insurmountable emotional wall, isolating herself from loved ones even, but not this.
Awesome story, I’m glad you two found time to update.
And why do I always get stuck doing this job. I feel like im moderating these comment rants.
Chantal, you might not be able to picture it, but if you try hard, and realize how defeated Bette is(She just got robbed for gods sake) you might understand why she’s sleeping on the ground.
I personally enjoy the way that each of them loves each other,but in a way they’re both afraid.
Continue please.
Well well you two are back. God damn you are good. This story is comming along very well. Let´s have some more please. Post soon and keep up the god work
I apologize if my comments left anyone feeling the need to “moderate” them. They were not meant to be mean spirited. I honestly meant them as constructive criticism on the story premise and nothing more. I would never discourage anyone from expressing themselves or sharing their work with others.
Yeah I’m sorry, I flipped out a little bit. I write fanfiction on here and I see a lot of the critiscm and so I need to vent at some point. Sorry.
this is disturbing