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Lifeline 2
Pounding footsteps interrupted the conversation as a tall curly haired woman appeared. Do we need an ambulance? I heard there was a fem- Oh, hey guys. Is everything alright? Kit Porter smiled, nodding for the crowd behind her to return back to their business. Tina, why the tears?
Yeah well might as well tell you now. Bette is missing. Tina said quietly, unable to meet the strong gaze that Kit focused on Tinas slouched form.
Baby sister has disappeared? Did you guys try her phone? Kit asked, her voice finding its range that included concern.
She left her laptop and phone back at her house. We have no idea where she is. We tried to file a missing persons report but the cops said we should wait 48 hours. Dana chimed in as her and Shane helped Tina find her feet.
What happened Tina? I was in there and all of a sudden some girl comes running in screaming something about a girl down in the parking lot. I figured it was a drunken rant but its best to check. And of all people its you. So whats happening? Kit asked, placing a gentle hand out for Tinas.
Its nothing really, my emotions just got the best of me.
If you insist. At least come inside for a few minutes, Ill fix you up with some tissues and a glass of water. Kit persisted, bearing her teeth in a smile that could only be described as phenomenal.
Tina shook her head, Thanks but no thanks, I think Im just going to go to my hotel and fall asleep, it has been a very long day.
Nonsense, youll stay with me tonight. Alice smiled, patting Tinas back gently. It would be more likely for Bette to call me. Shes got no idea that youve been in the hotel.
Yeah, well all stay with you. Shane smiled, poking Dana in the ribs.
Dana howled and shot daggers at Shane,Ow.. I mean yeah well all party at Alices.
Alright its settled then. Kit opened her arms, pulling Tina in for a tight squeeze. Kit whispered into Tinas ear:Dont worry about it, my sister is a strong one. Shell find her way back when shes ready.
All three girls nodded in unison as they headed back to the car. Alice took the keys and climbed into the drivers side, letting Tina rest up for a little before the long night ahead of them.
Hey Tina? Dana asked.
Yeah? She replied through a yawn.
Why are you so interested in finding Bette? Arent you beyond pissed at her?
I love her, Dane. Tina whispered, feeling the stabbing pain within the depths of her heart. I love her more than any of you could ever imagine. And with that said, Tina fell quiet as the tears began their slow descent down the slopes that were her freckled cheeks.
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(42 votes, average: 3.76 out of 5)
Wow that was emotional. Please you must continue!
OMG. Powerful and painful. Gentlefully written. Please post soon….
Awww…for Tina. Ewww…for Bette. Ummm…for the heck of it.
I love it. So full of love and heartbreak Please coninue! You are great
The heartache and pain, that hurts. Two very stubborn hurt people Looking into the night for what, Just needing and wanting each other. thanks
I really am lovin’ this…hope ya’ll keep it up.
Wow this is so emotion and sad. Post soon.
the idea of bette sleeping on a sidewalk and walking around in filthy and dirty just calls for too much suspension of disbelief. I could see her throwing herself into her work, drinking too much, putting up a nearly insurmountable emotional wall, isolating herself from loved ones even, but not this.
Awesome story, I’m glad you two found time to update.
And why do I always get stuck doing this job. I feel like im moderating these comment rants.
Chantal, you might not be able to picture it, but if you try hard, and realize how defeated Bette is(She just got robbed for gods sake) you might understand why she’s sleeping on the ground.
I personally enjoy the way that each of them loves each other,but in a way they’re both afraid.
Continue please.
Well well you two are back. God damn you are good. This story is comming along very well. Let´s have some more please. Post soon and keep up the god work
I apologize if my comments left anyone feeling the need to “moderate” them. They were not meant to be mean spirited. I honestly meant them as constructive criticism on the story premise and nothing more. I would never discourage anyone from expressing themselves or sharing their work with others.
Yeah I’m sorry, I flipped out a little bit. I write fanfiction on here and I see a lot of the critiscm and so I need to vent at some point. Sorry.
this is disturbing