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Lifeline – Chapter 9
“Bette?!” Alice asked with alarm. “Are you okay?” She did not look well, the blonde observed with concern. She had stood silently for several moments staring into space before keening over, apparently in pain.
“You wanna stop for awhile? We don’t have to do this now.”
“No. I’m okay.”
She stood up slowly, her forehead dotted with perspiration. “Let’s get this over with.”
3.)She would find her laptop on the bed. The DVDs were in the media room; a mix of love stories and romantic comedies, period dramas, Tina’s own films. Just bring the ones on the list.
Bette…
Go away! I don’t want to talk about it right now. Later. Please. Leave me alone.
Okay. But later…
4.)Their iPods. Bette would play their favorite music for Tina, the songs that had marked special times in their lives, happy memories, and just the stuff she loved to slow dance to.
“Remember the first time we danced, baby?”
“Yes, I do.”
“I had never danced with a woman before.”
“You were a natural.”
“I loved the feel of your hands on my butt,” she smiled in her breathless, flirty way, brushing a lock of hair from Bette’s forehead, looking up into her deep brown eyes, her hands locked around Bette’s neck.
“Me too,” Bette grinned lasciviously. “Just like this.” She spread her hands over her wife’s small rump, then squeezed hard, making Tina jump.
“Well, you didn’t do that, thank God. That might probably would have scared me to death! I was kinda surprised though. I mean most guys don’t have the guts to put their hands right on your ass the first time they dance with you,” she laughed, rubbing her thumb over Bette’s bottom lip.
“Well, I’m not most guys,” Bette answered, biting her neck.
“No, you are not,” Tina gasped, pulling back to look at Bette again. “I loved the way you felt against me, your breasts brushing against mine, making my nipples hard, the way you seemed so turned on, but quietly, just in your eyes, she whispered hoarsely. “When I felt your breath, ragged in my ear, in my hair, I got so wet I think I stopped dancing for a moment, in shock!” She exclaimed, eyes widening with the recollection. “My God, you were so hot I thought you were gonna burst into flames and take me with you.”
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Ahhh…Heartbreakingly beautiful, Nell. Tears welled in my eyes too as I read and re-read The List, the dialogue in Bette’s head and Neruda’s immortal words. Thank you, Nell, from the bottom of my heart. I can’t remember the last time I read a post as poignant, as romantic and as poetic as this. A thousand times thank you for sharing this beautiful love story, Nell. Hugs, mm =)
That was so heartbreaking and beautiful, it made me cry. I left it for a while and just came back to read it again …. and it made me cry again! Thank you so much for this powerful and moving story.
AMAZING!
Such a moving chapter. I love your amazing approach to this story.
My Lord, I’ve read a lot of beautiful love stories on this site over the years, some made me cry buckets and made me hurt and sad all at the same time. But this chapter is the greatest example of complete love and adoration I have ever read anywhere at anytime in my life. It points out the complete connection they have with each other. At first I thought it was showing that connection they have with each other, and that may be your intention but, whatever your intent was this chapter has exceeded it. It is the most poignant thing I’ve ever read regarding the love between two poeple. Bette is famous for making lists but, this one is so very complete and beautiful showing just how much she loves Tina, the video that Bette mentioned at the end and the Neruda poem took my breath away and made me cry buckets all over again. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. Hopefully Tina will wake up after listening to all the things that Bette wants to play for her and I think this will do the trick and, of course, Bette talking to her. Simply beautiful and amazing. Thanks again.
I hope you come back very soon and continue this story. Yes it’s sad but very beautiful. I love the conversation in Bette’s head and her devotion to Tina, so very touching.
I finally caught up with incredible story. I know that you started this story way before the AZ situation but it seems to fit what is happening in real life. I trust that you keep Bette from going crazy and making herself sick while Tina is fighting her own battle to live.
Beautiful.Thank you.
This is amazing and heartbreaking. Hope Tina will wake up soon. Please post more, thanks!
Hi gr8d8, This is so touching and emotional. The real shame is that often in life it takes life-threating events to focus us on the important things. Bette and Tina have such a complete connection. This story encapsulates this perfectly. I just adore it. Many thanks for sharing it with me. A Fan.
WOW… love this story… very well writen… pps
This is so beautifully written. You have expressed the love they have for each other incredibly well. Your characters really come to life the way you have written them. I’m really enjoying reading this story. Thanks so much for posting this.
That was just so very beautiful. Thank you I loved every minute of it.
Very beautifully written!
Just found this story. Beautifully written! Thank you.
Beautiful.
So Amazing and loving!!!! The List was so Heart felt and Romantic. Thank you PPS
Simply amazing, simply beautiful. That list was so poignant. It just left me speechless.
Thank you for this really fine story. It really tugs at ones heart and leaves me exhausted. I look forward to your next post.
Wow, wonderful job! :)