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Lightning Crashes – 3
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Kit Porter, Rest In Peace…
It was an all star gathering of various celebrities, both past and present. Ivan was there. Slim Daddy was there. The entire BETTY band was there. It seemed the whole World showed up to be part of a celebration of Kit’s life. But they didn’t know her. They didn’t know Kit, the ever loyal friend. Bette was devastated and it took Shane, Carmen and Lara to help her get through it. Bette’s nephew and Kit’s son, David was also there…but in the background mostly. Bette and David talked privately and very briefly.
Alice Pieszecki, Rest In Peace…
There were tears all around. All Shane can remember is clutching Bette as they both sobbed.
Tina Kennard, Rest In Peace…
Bette still loved her. Knowing that and remembering the look in Bette’s eyes as she held baby Angelica at the funeral made Shane feel worse. It made her wonder what the whole point of this was. All of these friends and a pilot were gone. All of these friends were now with Dana.
Standing before the church, Shane looks up towards the sky searching for God and an explanation.
Jenny’s House…
It would always be Jenny’s house, no matter who occupied the space or lived there. Shay lays in bed, sleeping. This has been a weird adventure for him. It was Shane’s bedroom as Shane didn’t feel comfortable with her little brother being in Jenny’s room. Knowing Jenny, she wouldn’t have been comfortable with it, either. Jenny’s bedroom is now where Shane tries to sleep when she’s home. In the kitchen, Lara drinks from a bottle of water collecting her thoughts. She was never able to attend Dana’s funeral, which still eats at her. Attending Alice’s, Lara thought of both of them constantly. So emotionally drained was Lara that she could not shed a single tear, as much as she wanted to. Carmen enters from the kitchen door, having tried and failed to sleep in her new bed in the studio building.
Lara: Can’t sleep either, huh?
Carmen: No. Is Shane home yet?
Lara shakes her head.
Lara: She’s still out walking.
Carmen walks to the refridgerator and opens its door. She bends down slightly and finds a beer, taking it from its home and opening the top before closing the refridgerator door.
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Ahh Kace, I love the way you keep seeming to pair up Carmen and Lara, thanks for being the only writer I’ve found so far who will write about these two together. You write very well man, keep it up!
Good chapter, you took 9 wonderful people in a flash. Well i will continue to read. Not to many more to get rid of. If you get rid of them then you would have no story. Carman,Lara Shane and Bette, Bette does have Angie. thanks
Although others may find it bleak, I like the fact that there aren’t too many characters to deal with (I know that’s kinda morbid). Pps Kace my curiosity is piqued.
can’t wait to see how you’ll keep unwinding this tale…very sad indeed but again, so much potential for where to go–looking forward to updates (soon, please;)
This really is intriguing. I’m fascinated by all the grief. Great job.
Do I sense a little Shuta in the future?
Gosh, it’s so bleak, I don’t even know what to say except for “Good chapter.” Heh, that’s a pathetic attempt at a comment. I hope Shane can find some answers… and someone needs to be there for Bette. I don’t know how she’s going to cope. Thanks, Kace
Ok, well I’ll continue reading even though this is pretty grim. Still, I’m curious what you have planned. Hope all the girls get help!!
I just… that beginning part, my heart was just breaking for Bette. Yet, the pain seems to be magnetic, and I’m really fascinated by the care with which you’re weaving this rather delicate and ambitious tale. Looking forward to how it unfolds.