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Lightning Crashes – 3
Shane brings her hands to her face, wiping away some tears that stream down from her eyes. Her face once again dry, she looks up and feels a single drop of rain splash against her right cheek. She slowly wipes away the raindrop and looks at it, before looking up once again in a whisper.
Shane: …God?
Shane hears a voice from behind, causing her to turn around.
Uta: Nice church, is it not?
Shane sees the woman standing next to her. She has an aura of confidence with a radiant grin. She also looks familiar. Shane looks around for a second, wondering where she emerged from so suddenly.
Shane: Um…do I know you?
She extends her right hand to Shane.
Uta: Uta. I knew your friend, Alice.
Shane accepts the handshake.
Shane: Shane. You were at her funeral.
Uta: Yes. Yes I was. I must admit, I have found myself asking the same question you just were earlier.
Shane: What?
Uta: Why, God? Why take someone so kind and special? I guess we both had the same calling to come here tonight.
Shane: Yeah, I guess so.
Uta: Life does not make much sense, I know. In a way, I suppose that’s the beauty of it. We can always explore and hopefully one day, find out.
Shane: I don’t know if I really wanna explore right now.
Uta: That’s a shame, really.
Shane: Why’s that?
Uta: It just is. Shane…despite all of the scholars who’s entire being revolves around knowledge, none of us know for sure the answer.
Shane: Yeah…so why bother?
Uta: Because otherwise, we’ll be in front of a church during the late hours asking for an answer we can only find within ourselves. Alice was a good person. I’m sure you know that far better than I.
Shane nods.
Uta: If you ever start to find yourself struggling to look for an answer, do not be afraid to call on me.
Shane raises an eyebrow.
Shane: Okay.
Uta: I must be going now. Be safe and be well.
Uta nods with a smile and backs away as Shane looks back at the church and then up to the sky again. When Shane turns her eyes back towards the direction Uta was in, there is no one.
Shane: Where’d the fuck she go?
It’s time to go back home. Shane knows it’s going to be yet another rough night trying to sleep. As she makes her way back to the house, she looks momentarily at Bette’s house, next door. If it were not so late, she would be tempted to go there instead. Shane wanders into her home and notices that Lara is not on the couch where she’s been resting recently.
In the studio room outside, Lara and Carmen, two friends lie together in bed, both with the fear of being alone and both with the longing for comfort.
"There must be someone out there who can help you breathe again"
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Ahh Kace, I love the way you keep seeming to pair up Carmen and Lara, thanks for being the only writer I’ve found so far who will write about these two together. You write very well man, keep it up!
Good chapter, you took 9 wonderful people in a flash. Well i will continue to read. Not to many more to get rid of. If you get rid of them then you would have no story. Carman,Lara Shane and Bette, Bette does have Angie. thanks
Although others may find it bleak, I like the fact that there aren’t too many characters to deal with (I know that’s kinda morbid). Pps Kace my curiosity is piqued.
can’t wait to see how you’ll keep unwinding this tale…very sad indeed but again, so much potential for where to go–looking forward to updates (soon, please;)
This really is intriguing. I’m fascinated by all the grief. Great job.
Do I sense a little Shuta in the future?
Gosh, it’s so bleak, I don’t even know what to say except for “Good chapter.” Heh, that’s a pathetic attempt at a comment. I hope Shane can find some answers… and someone needs to be there for Bette. I don’t know how she’s going to cope. Thanks, Kace
Ok, well I’ll continue reading even though this is pretty grim. Still, I’m curious what you have planned. Hope all the girls get help!!
I just… that beginning part, my heart was just breaking for Bette. Yet, the pain seems to be magnetic, and I’m really fascinated by the care with which you’re weaving this rather delicate and ambitious tale. Looking forward to how it unfolds.