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    Like a Fairytale, chpt 20

    Story written on July 19, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=61765
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    A deathly river… Who has the right characteristics to pass? A true love Bette and Tina beginning

    Once upon a time on : Like a fairytale

     

     

    Now… About this river…

     

    September started to explain matter-of-factly

     

    It is called ‘The pure water’ And only that, pure of heart, can find a way to cross it… Let me show you…

     

    The gorgeous green-eyed woman of magic stared at something behind the girls, and the 8 eyes followed her gaze. A small but beautifull butterfly was making its way to the river. With a flick of her eyes September made it land upon the water, that shortly lit up at the small creatures touch… As if the butterfly had created a small golden platform to rest on before it flew on…

     

    Only that person that is as purehearted as a butterfly, as able to love and care, as sacrifising, as innocent… Only a few people alive have the right combination of characteristics to make the path appear… And among you is one of those few… I can’t tell you who it is, for I don’t know…

     

    The 4 young women looked into the mirror with widened eyes, and it was Alice who uttered the question

     

    So… We should all try? And make this path, or whatever you call it, appear?

     

    September looked into the funny blondes eyes seriously and nodded towards something behind them… A hyena, far enough away from them to just make their heart race but not scare them entirely was making it’s way to the water. They watched it in awe…

     

    See what happens if you try and pass without the right combination of characteristics…

     

    The magical female almost whispered, as the ugly animal brought his snout towards the glinstering water…

     

    When the beasts nose touched the substance, the animal let out an almost human cry, and the girls hearts beated fastly as they saw the water turn black and the beast go through its knees…

     

    It again cried out in pain before it crumbled…

     

    Obviously liveless…

     

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    Chapter 20

     

     

    Shane was the first to found her voice when she turned to the mirror.

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    3. Oh Cool! I have been waiting for an update to this story. thanksa lot! Now, please post another one! I am dying to see what’s going to happen next! You and your cliffhangers…. Arggggghhhhh! =)

    4. Well I’m slow. I didn’t think it would be Alice and Dana trying to touch the water. lol I think I’ll go take a nap with my stuffed duck George till the next chapter is ready. *yawns* xD

    5. Nooo, evil! Damn cliffies! :P Thanks for the update though. I think there was something else I wanted to say, but being somwhere between tipsy and drunk I can’t remember… :S Oh right, power to tha efteling!!! :D :D

    8. always a pleasure read your story! you are forgive only if just will continue writting so well story like until now! this girls love each other so much i really think that Bette was the person that touch the water but Dana was amazing! take care.

    10. Awwww…come on! Kidding, kidding, but that was quite a cliffhanger you left there. I hope you can write more soon. I hope Alice and Dana are all right. Excellent chapter. Post soon! :)

    11. Hey Captain please don’t let them get hurt. They have to cross this river to get to Princess Tina before it is too late. I wonder if all four of them would be the right combination and not just one. They all have their own unique powers and love for another. Maybe that is what will keep them safe. Glad to see this story.

    12. I know you wouldn’t kill off a main character in a fairytale, would you? Post again soon any story. i realy enjoy the time and effort that you put into each of your stories. i also am amazed that you juggle 3 amazing stories and life. =)

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