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    Pretty Women, episode 5

    Story written on August 11, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    ‘Don’t talk just…’ A Bette and Tina beginning based on the movie ‘Pretty Woman’

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    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot of Bette sitting on the couch, staring at Tina, and then Tina making her way on hands and knees to Bette… We see the way her hands passionately carress Bette’s body and Tina says ‘I dont kiss on the mouth…’ The dissapointment is clearly seen in those chocolatbrown pools of emotions before the brunette answered ‘neither do I’ #

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Bette and Tina in the penthouse, they are only inches from eachother and seem hypnotized by eachother#

    The song ‘Hungry eyes’ by Eric Carmen starts playing.

     

     

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    Pretty women, Episode 5

     

     

    It was as if a hypnotizing force drew the two together, when the space between their bodies was minimized… Their eyes, lips… Only inches from eachother… Little sparks of fire seemed to exchange between the two women, who had been strangers untill recently, or perhaps even still were… But their souls and bodies merged together more with every slight movement each of them made. Bette felt Tina’s breath carress her face and felt the sudden urge to moan in delight… The other womans words still echoed through the brunettes head as she surpressed the moan and closed her eyes

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    6. Yehaaa I’m doing my happy dance here M, you did indeed keep your promise and fast, thanks. I can see you’re still a BIG tease LOL, but the tension you’ve created between our girls is just amazing and full of magic, I love it. The only problem with this post is….now I want more :o)) and it’s ok if it’s not NC-17 (did I just say that!!!! LOL. A big hug back to you.

    8. Oh man, YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE!!!!!!! Is that how you treat your long waited fans! I really missed your stories. Please let them kiss! Great chapter, please post more often. :)

    9. Where is the dance floor? I wan’t to happy dance to.Where have you been i was going through post withdrawl syndrom lol (that must be a dieses right?).please post again soon. =)

    12. wow! you did it! i thought that you will take more time in post but here is a wonderful chapter, what a way to let me hook! you are a big teaser! but i think that you enjoy so much make us suffer waiting for the NC17 chapter. thanks for the post! take care!

    14. Ohh you are soo bad for leaving us like this….jesus. Glad to see your post again – I missed it and I love this story and I want more so please continue. Soon I hope, post soon

    16. Ok… I kno it seems silly to leave a comment to your own story LOL But I forgot to thank my friend Lu for her contibution in this story by a word she taught me… Thank you for the mesmerizing word Lu!

    22. I just found this story and I love it…Pretty Woman is one of my all time favorite movies and I love your spin on it. Now that I have found this story…please post soon.

    26. Ok JLBT, its been a long time my friend and good to see you back. You know when the moment of B&T get excited and hot and I say to myself oh this is what Im (we) talking about and waiting for and Im getting so excited here and then bOOm the next thing I know is you leave us hanging just like that, not nice my friend lol, you such a tease and hope you will post soon, thanks!

    27. AAAARRRGGGHHHHH!!! this was the 1st story since 8:45am ish this moning and it was a shcok to see it there and fun to read, but was sad to only get 2 pages and to b teased with promises of an NC17……WHEN OH WHEN WILL IT B POSTED????!!!!!!!!

    28. Ahhh.. you’re back.. I was just thinking and missing your stories dearly :D Oh wow.. this is HOT!! You’re such a big tease you know that? Please continue soooooooooon~~~

    29. !!!!! I was on the verge of my sit waiting for the kiss!!!! I have to admit it, the whole moment was sensual, don’t know how you do it but I know your readers never get bored.

    30. WoW…I’ve just read all your chapters of Pretty Woman…and I just love your writing style babes! I can’t believe I havent read your stuff before! I must remember to say thank you to Dani for getting you to PM me!!! You’ve got a fan for life now! :) Can’t wait for the kiss! Ok, I’m off now to start your other fic! Thanks.

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