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Like A Fairytale, chpt 6
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Once upon a time on Like a fairytale
The princess started to feel agitated… This birthdayparty, these visitors… It gave her butterflies in her stomach, a strange and swirling feeling… Or was this feeling caused by the fact that she had just seen her best friend return to the castle? The royal girl shook her head to lose that strange thought.
Mother, can I go now?
As the queen allowed her daughter to go, she ran out of the room, straight to the brownhaired girl that was talking to her father who was taking care of the roses… The queen watched them and a stinging feeling of annoyance caught her… Maxime’s girl distracted her daughter in her search for true love.
The queen was surprised at her own thoughts…
But now that it was in her head, it seemed stuck there, and she caught herself observing the 2 girls the next couple of hours, as they decided to play in the rosegarden…
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Chapter 6
As the royal family of the nearby country arrived, the castle was still buzzing with activity. Adjusting flowers, making up beds, every servant was helping… Mary-Anne had asked her daughter to stand next to her when they welcomed the guests and she felt the now familiair sting of annoyance when she saw the princess hastily approach her after saying goodbye to Bette.
Well, My queen… So glad to finally meet you
The other royal woman took Mary-Anne’s hand and looked around, admiring the castle.
The boy next to her was shyly fidgeting with the white gloves his mother had made him wear, as he caught the eyes af the beautifull young princess he felt something swirl in his stomach… His mother had gone on and on about this princess and he was exited to finally meet her, but first he kissed the hand of her mother.
Prince Eric, queen…
Welcome! Both of you! I am so thrilled to finally meet you
Tina observed the prince and thought him handsome, he was… with his dark hair and strong royal jawline he, oddly enough, reminded her a little of Bette and that made her blush.
The prince and both queens had noticed the blush too as Eric took her hand and softly kissed it…
Eirc was pleased to see he had this effect on the beautifull princes
Constance, Eric’s mother, was proud of her handsome son who had such an impact on the young girl
Mary-Anne was almost sighed of relieve when she saw her daughters cheeks redden and smiled…
But there was someone else who observed Christinas response to the prince.
Bette felt a tear roll down her cheek when she saw the red face of her best friend who she loved so deeply
Tina also welcomed the queen and prince like her mother had told her to do… The king now made his way towards the new guests and shook the prince’s hand manly after kissing Constance’s
As the king talked to the guest Tina looked around hoping to see the reassuring smile of Bette… She was nervous… She couldnt find Bette but Eric caught her eye and smiled at her… He really looked a bit like Bette… The young princess was surprised and confused with her own thoughts, why did she keep thinking about Bette? She had just seen her a couple off minutes ago but she missed her already… She shook her head and thought it was just because she was nervous to meet new people.
In the meanwhile Bette had run to the safe protection only the forest could give her… She cried without sound, the tears just kept on rolling… She’d been afraid of the prince since the moment her best friend had mentioned him and she was crushed when she saw Tinas reaction to the handsome boy… She collapsed against a tree and sat there, crying, untill the bell rang for diner…
Defeated, she headed back to the castle and left the forest.
Not aware that she also left the green-eyed female who lived there, very worried….
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thanks for this post! poor Bette she feel so bad, but she need to know that all the time Tina was thinking in her! continue please take your time! take care
Ok now this is really not nice to leave us like this, this is to short. I knew the prince would be eric and funny it is. Poor Bette this is sad and hope you will do something to make it right and please don’t let Bette cry again, this is hurt her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I believe in fairytales!!! And, I love this story!!! Thank you!
poor bette, if only she knew…i hope eric will turn out to be an ass
It hurts so much when you see someone you’re in love ‘fell’ for someone else… Oh poor Bette… just let it go :D hehehe… ‘your killing me with your eveil laughter though ;)’ Oh… am I? muahahaha *evil laughter*
very good history….very short cahpters..snif snif
WAY TOO SHORT!!! What? ‘He really looked a bit like Bette’ Ewwww… come on Tina, not even one bit, ok?! lol… Her eye sight perhaps got some problem or else how could she not see the love from Bette, kids. Lol… love it, more please.
price = prince gogo POS keyboard!
That’s the 2nd time today you’ve forgotten part of the chapter. j/k =p Poor Bette. I think it’s time for September to intervene. Oh and if Eric looks a bit like Bette then he must be a cutie. And yes I know I’ve been trying to get Tina to kiss Bette. I still like my “trip and land on her lips” idea. ;) And about my gaydar, the price just got introduced in this chapter. It’s hard to make an assessment without getting to “meet” someone first. lol At least his name isn’t Henry like I thought it might be. YUCK!
I think it time forSeptember to work a little magic on the small pricess,also her Mother,if not Maxie will send Bette away
Its Mary-Ann not Mazine. thanks
Wel als hij Bette lijkt, dan zou ik het ook moeilijk krijgen…maar dan nog, hij heeft iets teveel en dan weer iets te weinig op de juiste plekken nietwaar. Kan je je hoofstukjes niet een ietsiepietsie langer maken, pleeeaaaaseeeeeee
Thank you, I met September but she was unable to help me. She said something about having to return to her forest to help this one girl, I think that she called the girl Bette, win the love of her life. She then told me about how she had to work fast because Bette thought that her best friend and the one she loved was liking this guy. I told her she better go quickly so that the guy is kicked back away from Bette’s love interest. She said maybe when things settle down she could help me then. I guess that means that there is no hope for me. Oh well, as long as there is a Bette and Tina I can live with that. Thanks for the help and for the chapter. Waiting to see if September was able to help out Bette.
awww…my heart goes out to bette and tina. :( i continue to follow your vision and clarity of this journey and i cannot help but close my eyes and feel the pain eminating from bette and tina. like the two star crossed lovers on a moon lit night, these two juliets of diverse back ground and upbringing shall be brought together by fate and destiny.again, a most deserved gracious ten thumbs up from me to you for your clarity, vision and pure simplicity of this journey. i thank you for taking the time to share with us all another excellent and wonderful chapter of this story.
3 little words for you – I LOVE IT LOL