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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 26
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Previously on the beginning of a friendship:
Bette:
‘Goodbye, T…’
I couldn’t do it… I couldn’t make it a true goodbye… Not when I saw the questions in her eyes
‘Call me, ok?’
I couldn’t believe I just asked her that… Me… Tha Alpha-female, finally giving up control
Her voice sounded hoarse and I could have sworn I saw a tear in her eyes when I turned around and made my way to Steve, who was waiting for me in the doorway.
‘I will, Bette… I will’
It was no more than a whisper, but it was the promise in her voice that made my heart and soul alive…
I looked back one more time before getting in the car… Our eyes met and locked, like I was used to now… I did it, before I had the chance of thinking about it, and mouthed it to her.
‘I love you’
Before she could react I realized what I had done, dropped my gaze and got in Steve’s car.
As he started to drive I fought the urge to look back…
*Goodbye T… I do love you…*
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Chapter 26
Tina:
The rest of the evening went… flew by me as in a blur…
Every time I closed my eyes I saw those lips moving…
*Could it be true that shed said what I so desperatly wanted to hear?*
It was as in a slow-motion picture…
*Had she really said I love you?*
All sentences that she could have said instead of that one rolled through my mind
Ill see you…
Ill call you…
Was it just my wishfull thinking that made my heart jump by the sight of her mouthing those words to me? Was it just my imagination that her eyes were filled with love when she had looked at me?
*It’s so frustrating!*
I wish I knew what it was she said… I wish I knew what she and Steve were talking about… I wish I knew why I hadnt insisted on bringing her home myself… I wish I was there with her…
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I love your story and your writing style. Thanks for this great update and please post again soon!
Just another great chapter…with a lot of drama. I can really relative to Tinas thinking about her family…I am the black sheep and my sister and brother…well.. Looking forward for your next post…soon I hope… :)
Oh man, you did it again! lol..I like this Tina and Bette a lot, they are so loving and cute! I like the way you write their thoughts.lol… 1st of all, Tina has to get rid of that Eric ASAP.. like NOW! Be strong Tina! Love it.. continue please
Tinas family get a zero as Parents Her sister doesnt even rate as a parent. If she only knew what she is missing I,m afraid that Tina want see her parents for a long time and might not ever see Rosey again. Steve will hang in there Thanks0
so sad, i think tina should adopt rosie or at least ask julie to let her live with tina for some time, i have feeling that julie doesn’t care…and B&T need to talk before they both run away
What is it about adults not getting there way. If a person is a little different they freak out. No wonder kids are so mean to each other. They learn from their parents and the adults around them. I wish that I could say that Tina is better off without them. Of course with Bette hopefully in her life later down the road it will make it better. But right now her life feels like it is falling apart. As far as Bette is concerned she needs to stay in touch with Tina and continue to build her friendship/love for her. I love how write this story, it reminds me of how my parents are. But most of all it shows how two people are beginning to connect. It seems real.
I want Rosy to come live with Tina!!! Thank you for this very emotional chapter.
Damn thats sad for Tina!
I wish Tina would embrace the wonderful woman who obviously adores her. At the very least get rid of Eric and all of her self doubt.
My heart is breaking for Tina. She thinks that she has lost her family. If she follows her heart and tells Bette how she feels, she will get a new amazing family. Please bring them together soon. This is sweet torture you are putting us through. I love your story and want more please—SOON.
Mooooooo.. hehe another one pleaseeee
Well that wasn’t as bad as I thought it would be. I’m not crying a river or anything. lol Of course I’m still half-asleep. So uh, Tina’s parents totally fail right now. =/
Common another chapter pleaseee…ee..eee I’ve been waiting since last night.
“The way you describe it is just the way I mean it ;)” Haha, the way u write ur story hit home ;) It’s so heartbreaking to see them that way. *sigh* it’s just so hard when each other value their ‘friendship’ too much and afraid that the true revealation will scare each other off.
man your killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m finally awake enough to leave a better comment. lol Besides Tina’s parents failing and not seeing Julia for what she really is, it looks like Tina is losing Rosy. Tina not having her parents would suck, but that little girl thinks the sun rises and sets on Tina. At least Tina still has Steve in her corner. And of course she has Bette and the girls. Hmmm maybe it’s time to turn to Yoda for some advice. ;)
This is such a great story. It is one of the first ones I look for. This was a great chapter and can’t wait for another. Thanks so much for giving your time and posting so often.
well what can i say except thank you for another fine chapter.. and isn’t gaydar a wonderful thing?.x.x.
Als ik jou was, zou ik er niet aan denken om Julia mijn richting uit te sturen, ik kom je dan eigenhandig in Rotterdam wurgen ;). Toen ik uit de kast kwam hebben mijn ouders ook hun rug gedraaid, ik hem ze nooit meer gezien, tja, het leven hé, ach het is al dertig jaar geleden, en toch…..Eigenlijk hoop ik op nog een ietsiepietsie hoofdstukje vandaag. Alvast bedankt op voorhand.
ok, now you have me crying first thing in the morning…..not nice!! Beautiful, now pls tina go to bette she will be your shoulder!!!!
Super hoofdstuk. Zou niet kunnen zeggen dat je nederlands bent aan de manier van schrijven. Good work.
hi justlove it was nice to meet you to in the chat room this story it great all we need now is for tina to tell eric to go thats for this post soon
Great chapter. Hope Tina tells Eric to get lost very soon. And when Bette calls she tells her she loves her. They both need to hear those words from the other. Thanks for the post.
Another great chapter. I hope Tina get’s rid of Eric and goes to Bette. Thank you for the Post it maid me cry.
wow… i have a feeling tina won’t ever see rosy either… her sister is a bitch… and her parents are right behind her… this was hard on tina… and us reading… please continue soon…
you r enjoying this agony u put me through…aren’t you??????
Finally had some time to catch up on some story reading and I stumbled on your wonderful story here – It is beautiful written and I love it. So keep up the amazing work and do post soon :o)