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Locked Up 13
"Please…." Tina begged again.
Bette smiled into the blondes soft skin as she slid her hands up and down her sides. She planted soft kisses in the centre of her chest as she reached around to unfasten her bra. Letting it slide to the floor, she felt her body tingling as Tina’s beautiful breasts were exposed. Moving her hands to cup them, she let her thumbs brush over the nipples as she leant back to admire the sight of pleasure washing over the blondes face.
"God you’re beautiful" she whispered.
She leant back in again and kissed her way from Tina’s breastbone to her left nipple. Letting her tongue flick over the swollen nub, she was rewarded by a gasp from the blonde. Swirling her tongue around it, she then took it into her mouth and sucked. Overwhelmed by the pleasure she was experiencing, Tina ran her hands through Bette’s hair before dragging her fingers down her back to the hem of her top. She lifted it up, causing the brunette to break contact with her chest as she pulled it off and threw it to the floor.
"Turn around" Tina ordered huskily.
Their eyes met and Bette was reassured by the softness behind the evident lust that she saw. She stood up and turned, immediately placing her hands on the table to steady herself as she didn’t trust her legs to hold her up. Tina kissed the brunettes shoulder tenderly as she unfastened her bra and slowly slid it from her body. Stepping in, she pressed her breasts against Bette’s back and heard her moan softly. Her hands reached around to cup the newly exposed breasts as she let the bra slide to the floor.
Bette closed her eyes and leant her head back against the blondes shoulder as she felt her hands begin to massage her breasts. The blonde rolled her nipples between her thumbs and fingers as she took the brunettes earlobe into her mouth and sucked on it.
"I love the way you feel" she whispered.
The brunette groaned at the feel of Tina’s breath against her now wet earlobe. The stirring inside ran the whole length of her body and she tilted her head to the side so that her mouth took the place of her ear. Their lips parted and their tongues flicked against each other as they engaged in a slow and deliberate kiss. Both women groaned and Bette tried to turn round, eager to deepen the kiss, but the blonde stopped her by moving her hands to forcefully grip her hips.
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(39 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Bette is going to need lots of counseling sessions…hehehe. Wow, that was HOT!!!!!! Love Tina being alpha. Great chapter, PPVS!!
should’ve wait to read at home, now the rest of the work day is ruined LOL now Tina needs to find the way to get Bette out of jail
wow a whole 5pages just for me eh?i think i needed that after the day ive had. Tina being the dominant one i like it actually but i like how they understand each others bodys and took their time. As for Bette i think this is her forst real love and she is about to fall fast into that magical place. Where’s Helena my darling??Oh she should be with Dana oh yes lol. Am waiting to hear more about Nikki & Helen think they way you are portraying them is awesome the same aspects as the show but in better deepth and understanding. Thank you for that post…im really enjoying your work your writing gives me a new sense of direction with my own FF so thanx again. Caramel
that’s great!!! amazing!!! more please:)))
Again. . . you create a budding relationship so well by building a foundation from the inside that finally bursts out into the physical expression that a reader is thoroughly captured. Thanks for taking the time to craft your stories this way. Glad to hear the job front looks better . . . keeping positive thoughts in that arena. Great to have posts so close together.
ok, i have to say this up front, wow wow the entire chapter was NC-17, loved it simply put…LOL now we know you can never just go to one counseling session, several visit are needed..
just got home from work,and looky what i see when i get on line.all i can say yes yes yes hot hot hot please more.
Right, first of all, wanna let u know that i have only just found this story about an hour ago, and caught up from the first chapter to now. I think what u have done here is amazing. I loved Bad Girls, and was gutted when Helen and Nikki went out of it, think there should be a spin off meself, but who knows? Anyone, combining larkhall and bad girls, with the l word and bette and tina is a fantastic idea. And i want to convey to u what a great job u are doing, because i have read fan fics before, concerning bad girls/lword cross over and they haven’t been very good, but this one, IMHO is the best i have read. So please pvs. Thank you for the gift of this story :)
Oh, and as for the NC-17’s, all i can say is ….. that’s the hotness right there! lol :D
amazing, hot and erotic..nice update..i couldn’t ask for ne thing more at the moment..way to hot, but i want more post soon
Wow, talk about hot. I get the feeling Bette is going to require a lot more counseling sessions.
Dang! That was hot! Phew! We have air conditioning here but I still feel hot. PPS!
That was HOT! Can’t wait to see what happens. pps
great, great job on this chapter, i luved it, and talk about hot!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow! Now all B&T need to do is learn to keep those smiles off thier faces and play it off like nothing is going on with them. PPS
Damn that was freaking hot and awesome. So glad to catch up with this story and love it. Please post more, thanks!
I have not watched Bad Girls but I am loving this amazing story.
Fantastic BBaby! Absolutely brilliant! PPS!