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Locked Up 13
"Babe…" Bette started to protest.
"Shhhh" Tina interrupted "We’re doing this my way"
If it was even possible, Bette grew even more turned on at the blondes words. She was so used to being in control of everything, particularly sex, yet the thought of giving up control to Tina was exhilirating.
Tina had surprised herself with her confidence. Normally she just sat back and let other people take control. It wasn’t like she’d had many lovers, and she was never too sure of what to do. But with Bette it was different. Her desire for the brunette was overwhelming, and all she wanted to do was touch her. Though she wasn’t particularly experienced, she knew that her desire was enough.
Keeping her breasts pressed against Bette’s back so that she could feel the hardness of her nipples, she began to run her fingertips along the waistband of her trousers. She knew it was driving the brunette crazy as she could hear her begin to pant.
"I need you" Bette begged.
Giving the brunette a kiss on the shoulder, Tina unbuttoned Bette’s trousers and pushed them down over her hips. With a little help from the brunette, they fell to the floor.
"Step out of them" Tina ordered.
Bette did as she was told, and kicked the trousers aside. She felt Tina’s hands move back to her hips, her fingertips making light circles.
Tina nuzzled her head into the brunettes neck, kissing it softly, as her hands began to stroke under Bette’s underwear. She ran her fingers down to her thighs, then left her hands there, pulling the underwear away from her body. She nudged the brunettes curls aside with her nose and kissed the sensitive spot on her neck.
Bette groaned at the combination of senses that she was experiencing. The wetness of Tina’s mouth against her neck combined with the cool air hitting the wetness between her legs was driving her wild.
"Touch me" she growled.
The blonde smiled and sucked on her exposed neck. Slowly she moved her right hand inwards until she could feel the heat of Bette’s centre radiating. Her left hand gripped the brunettes hip as she pressed her body tighter against her and curved her other hand to cup her centre. She slid one finger between Bette’s folds as she trailed her left hand up to pull on her nipple again.
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(39 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Bette is going to need lots of counseling sessions…hehehe. Wow, that was HOT!!!!!! Love Tina being alpha. Great chapter, PPVS!!
should’ve wait to read at home, now the rest of the work day is ruined LOL now Tina needs to find the way to get Bette out of jail
wow a whole 5pages just for me eh?i think i needed that after the day ive had. Tina being the dominant one i like it actually but i like how they understand each others bodys and took their time. As for Bette i think this is her forst real love and she is about to fall fast into that magical place. Where’s Helena my darling??Oh she should be with Dana oh yes lol. Am waiting to hear more about Nikki & Helen think they way you are portraying them is awesome the same aspects as the show but in better deepth and understanding. Thank you for that post…im really enjoying your work your writing gives me a new sense of direction with my own FF so thanx again. Caramel
that’s great!!! amazing!!! more please:)))
Again. . . you create a budding relationship so well by building a foundation from the inside that finally bursts out into the physical expression that a reader is thoroughly captured. Thanks for taking the time to craft your stories this way. Glad to hear the job front looks better . . . keeping positive thoughts in that arena. Great to have posts so close together.
ok, i have to say this up front, wow wow the entire chapter was NC-17, loved it simply put…LOL now we know you can never just go to one counseling session, several visit are needed..
just got home from work,and looky what i see when i get on line.all i can say yes yes yes hot hot hot please more.
Right, first of all, wanna let u know that i have only just found this story about an hour ago, and caught up from the first chapter to now. I think what u have done here is amazing. I loved Bad Girls, and was gutted when Helen and Nikki went out of it, think there should be a spin off meself, but who knows? Anyone, combining larkhall and bad girls, with the l word and bette and tina is a fantastic idea. And i want to convey to u what a great job u are doing, because i have read fan fics before, concerning bad girls/lword cross over and they haven’t been very good, but this one, IMHO is the best i have read. So please pvs. Thank you for the gift of this story :)
Oh, and as for the NC-17’s, all i can say is ….. that’s the hotness right there! lol :D
amazing, hot and erotic..nice update..i couldn’t ask for ne thing more at the moment..way to hot, but i want more post soon
Wow, talk about hot. I get the feeling Bette is going to require a lot more counseling sessions.
Dang! That was hot! Phew! We have air conditioning here but I still feel hot. PPS!
That was HOT! Can’t wait to see what happens. pps
great, great job on this chapter, i luved it, and talk about hot!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow! Now all B&T need to do is learn to keep those smiles off thier faces and play it off like nothing is going on with them. PPS
Damn that was freaking hot and awesome. So glad to catch up with this story and love it. Please post more, thanks!
I have not watched Bad Girls but I am loving this amazing story.
Fantastic BBaby! Absolutely brilliant! PPS!