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Longed For Chapter 4
Longed For Chapter 4
"WHAT A LIAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Omg how could he say that to her and expect her to belive it, why?"
Tina was shouting and hollering for ages. Shane could hear her as she walked up to where she was.
"Hey Tina you ok?" Shane asked the concern evident in her voice.
Tina turned to look at Shane tears falling down her face.
"He…He told Bette her mom was dead shane, that she’s dead. And he’s lying. He broke her heart and I just……….. I’m so angry right now, if I got my hands on him I’d put him in hell." Tina angrily
"He did what? Why would he do that? He knows Bette adores her mom. What a arsehole." Shane
"Isn’t he? What can we do to help her Shane she looks so alone right now." Tina crying.
"You know we can’t interfer with what is happening. I wish we could. God will have seen this just as you have. Maybe he won’t be as vocal as you about it but he will know. " Shane
Tina sits next to Shane who puts her arm around her. They sit there both lost in there own thoughts. Tina couldn’t belive what Melvin had done. She stood up and started to run. She didn’t know where she was running but just had to.
Shane chased after her.
"Tina! Tina! TINAAAAAAAAAA!!! Jesus girl hold up."
Shane caught up with Tina just as she ran round a corner and came to a screeching to a stop before god.
"Tina stop." God
Tina tried to run round god and keep going but couldn’t.
"TINA STOP NOW" God
Shane just caught p with Tina as she heard this. She knew god wasn’t angry just wanting Tina to stay where she was.
Tina started shaking and crying she wasn’t scared she was so angry. God knew this as Tina’s anger was well known.
"Tina take a breath and think before you do anything else." God
Tina couldn’t speak. She knew what she was being told was right but she just couldn’t calm down. If Bette was here she would know how to help her.
"Oh Bette!" Tina collasped to her knees crying.
What Shane saw next blew her away. God Knelt beside Tina and took her in his arms. She had never seen that before. She knew he was a compassionate and loving God but had never seen it shown so openly.
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OMG CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish and your (now) fiance the best! And thanks for the update, take our time with the next enjoy this joyous occasion
hey CONGRATULATIONS!!! is a good news I wish you the best..((bette remember tina?))
congratulations from me and my girlfriend :D emily
congratulations cutiebear11,love and luck for you both in the future,,x,, i`m so loving this story and can`t wait for tina to find bette…x
COngrats to you. Thank you for this wonderful story. Love it.
Congrats on the engagement. Thanks for the awesome update.
Congratulations and thank you for the update.
Congratulations and thank you for the update.
ALL THE BEST AND CONGRATULATIONS to you and your lady. Thanks for taking the time to post a chapter. I thought they were not supposed to remember each other but it seems they do, at least their names. Oh I can hardly wait for them to meet. Will they meet at school since Bette is on the playground thinking of her. Great chapter. Again Congratulations.
Congratulations my friend, happy for you. That was great and thanks for the update and please post more, thanks!
Beautiful