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Longed For Chapter 4
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Tina leaned in to God’s arms and allowed him to envolope her in a hug. All the time Bette had been on earth she had missed being held.
"Tina there is nothing I can do. I can not interfere in Melvin’s choices but I have sent someone to be with Bette, to watch and look over her." God
"That should be me, I should be there for her." Tina sobs.
"You will be with her Tina. You are strong and I know you won’t give up looking for her when you are born." God
Tina sat up looking god in the eye,
"To right. She is my world and nothing or no one will stop us from being together."
"Then we best get your journey started Tina." God smiling
"Eh? What? I don’t understand?" Tina looking shocked.
"Its time Tina, time to find Bette." Shane looked at her smiling.
"Omg really, But whooooooooooooo hooooooooooooooooooooooo." Tina jumps up and down excitedly.
"I was coming to tell you, but you where so upset that I didn’t get chance." Shane
"Now I can find Bette and put everything right. I will never leave her or let anyone hurt her again. And as for………….." Tina keeps talking
"Tina calm down. Lets get you there and then you can get on with all you are planning." Shane smiling.
"Tina its time. Are you ready?" God
"Yes, yes, YES!" Tina laughing.
"Then lets go. Time for you to be born." God
"I won’t remember any of this will I?" Tina looks at Shane.
"No you won’t." Shane
Tears are running down Tina’s cheeks.
"I’m gonna miss you Shane you are a true friend thank you for everything." Tina hugs Shane holding her close.
"Always here for you." Shane hugs Tina back.
Shane looks at God when Tina has gone,
"Luckily for Melvin Tina won’t remember anything that has happened."
"Don’t be so sure." God smiling
Earth
Tina is born on a sunny day. She is held close by her mom and watched over by her dad. She knows that for now she must wait but she will find Bette. She falls asleep content with the world.
Bette stops in the playground. She just stands there staring ahead. In her mind only 1 thought’ Tina………………………
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OMG CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish and your (now) fiance the best! And thanks for the update, take our time with the next enjoy this joyous occasion
hey CONGRATULATIONS!!! is a good news I wish you the best..((bette remember tina?))
congratulations from me and my girlfriend :D emily
congratulations cutiebear11,love and luck for you both in the future,,x,, i`m so loving this story and can`t wait for tina to find bette…x
COngrats to you. Thank you for this wonderful story. Love it.
Congrats on the engagement. Thanks for the awesome update.
Congratulations and thank you for the update.
Congratulations and thank you for the update.
ALL THE BEST AND CONGRATULATIONS to you and your lady. Thanks for taking the time to post a chapter. I thought they were not supposed to remember each other but it seems they do, at least their names. Oh I can hardly wait for them to meet. Will they meet at school since Bette is on the playground thinking of her. Great chapter. Again Congratulations.
Congratulations my friend, happy for you. That was great and thanks for the update and please post more, thanks!
Beautiful