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Lost and Found – Chapter 1
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Angelica sighed deeply.
"Look, if I don’t get these stupid homework done, then I doubt my moms are gonna let me go to any party tonight…"
Angelica wanted to go, though. She did not want to miss an opportunity where she could show herself in company of her "boyfriend".
"But you have to try to convince them!" Alex said, sounding desperate.
"Okay, I’ll try" Angelica said, "But I can’t promise anything, okay?"
"Okay," Alex said, "Try! I love you, bye."
"Bye." Angelica hung up. Slowly, she got up from her bed, went over to the window and looked outside. Her mother Bette’s car was not yet in the driveway. Angelica did not know whether or not to find this good. She knew her mothers did have the ability to calm each other down, but if her mother Bette would be stressed from work, there was no way she would be in a good mood.
The door to Angelica’s room was opened and her little brother, Melvin, walked into the room. Angelica whirled around.
"How many times do I have to tell you?!"she shouted at him, her anger rising.
"Yeah, I know!", Melvin quickly cut her off, "I should have knocked, chillax!"
Angelica shot him another angry look.
"Momma T wants you downstairs," Melvin went on, "Guess she wants to check your homework, you’re gonna be so busted if you haven’t done them…Have you?"
"Whatever…" Angelica mumbled, feeling intensly annoyed. "Just get out of my room."
She went over to Melvin and pushed him out of the door.
"Hey!" Melvin screamed; Angelica had pushed him a little to hard, he had stumbled and almost fallen over.
"Watch your step!" Angelica grinned, moving towards the staircase.
Melvin glared at his sister furiously.
"I’m gonna tell Mom!" he cried, running past her down the stairs into the living room.
"No, wait!" Angelica yelled after him in panic. She could not risk giving her mother a second reason why she would not let her go to the party.
Melvin, however, was faster than Angelica and when she came storming into the living room, he was already talking to Tina, who was sitting on the couch, reading a book.
"She pushed me on purpose and I almost fell!" Melvin said, apparently close to tears, pointing a finger at his sister.
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You’ve been successful in describing teenage angst. They are so egocentric. Excellent beginning. You must be British or European b/c here in the U.S. we call it math w/o the extra “s”. This is not meant as a criticism just an observation. :-)
Cool story, I’m interested to see where this is going, even though I think Tina was a little harsh on Angelica. Just my opinion
Interesting start! Tina should make Angie sit downstairs where she can keep an eye on her while she works on her math homework. That makes it easier to ask for help when needed.
Great beginning. I’m curious as to why Angie isn’t into her boyfriend so much. Is she just trying to fit in or is there something more?
I feel for Angie but 100% behind Tina.Angie is lucky Bette wasn’t there too lol.Sometime parents have to be strict with young people because life is not that easy and if they haven’t got any education it is even more difficult. can’t wait for the next post. great beginning.
Very good, interesting first post. The most important thing in any teenaged girls(or boys)life is being accepted by peers. Definitely post again.
very good start, really enjoyed this first chapter
This is interesting start and like it. Please post more, thanks!
I feel sorry for Angie… Trying to fit in isn’t easy if you parents are ‘different’. I like your story xxx PPS
oh yes this is already starting off very interesting, and I love tina and bette with more than one child..hell I love to read family stories about them period sigh***