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(Angie’s Story)

Olivia: NOOOOOO OH GOD NOOOO!!!!!!
Portard could hear his wife screams and looked at her from afar with tears running down his cheeks, trying to call out and tell her to keep going but the pain in his chest was making it difficult to breath.
Olivia: Angie listen to me carefully, I want you to stay right here ok DON’T MOVE A STEP, DO YOU HEAR ME?
Olivia placed Angelica behind a large tree.
Angelica nodded her head with crocodile tears running down her chubby cheeks, she wasn’t sure of what exactly was going on but just by her mother and father screaming and crying it made her frighten so she did the same thing.
Olivia: Mommy is going to go help daddy ok, I’ll be right back for you sweetheart, I love you so much.
Olivia kissed Angelica on the forehead then took off running to help her dying husband.
Olivia: ALLEN!!
Olivia called him by the nickname she had given him because she hated saying Portard, it just sounded like a bad mixture of two people names gone wrong.
Portard: GO BACK OLIVIA….GO BACK NOW!!!
Portard said as he saw his wife running towards him.
Olivia: NOT WITHOUT YOU!!
Portard: DAMN IT OLIVIA…PLEASE GO BACK!!!
But Olivia ignored his request and kept running towards him. When she finally reached him the bear was still standing next to him but she didn’t care, she too picked up the large branch and held it at the bear for defense.
Olivia: I’m not leaving without you baby, we need you.
Portard: I can’t move Olivia, my legs are deeply wounded, I can’t stand up.
Olivia looked down at Portard legs and saw the big gash that the bear had bitten into them when she was behind the tree talking to Angelica.
Portard: Angie needs you, it’s too late for me…you have to go back.
Olivia slowly crawled to Portard side and holding him in her arms completely ignoring the bear still standing there.
Olivia: I love you Allen, you are my world you know that?
Portard: I love you too Olivia with all my heart, tell Angie daddy love her so much and…there’s noth..i.ng..I
Portard breath was shortening as he tried to talk and slowly his eyes began to close with blood gushing out of his mouth and that’s when Olivia realizes what was happening. Once his eyes shut for good she screamed out in the same agony as Portard had done earlier.
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Damn! I was thinking the same thing that a will was left. Kit would get custody but she will say she’s too old and let Bette and Tina have Boo. Especially once she founds out about the bond Tina has with Boo. Please post again TODAY!! Loved it. PPS
Dang TN1….totally gruesome to read I can only imagine how you felt when you were writing it. Poor Angie, hopefully Kit will help out since she knew the family and Tina and Angie can be together…BAM!… You are totally awesome storyteller!…Portard huh…priceless!..what a page turner you’re writing….thx for updating so soon…Boom!…lubya
Portard what an ugly name first or last. Chuckled at that. Loved the update, thanks.
As a good reader I’m keeping my theories on the continuing story to myself!
Look forward to seeing if I’m right but don’t think PF’s far off!
That was horrible to read, so sad that Angie lost her parents like that.
I hope that Kit is indeed the one that got custody over Angelica, should something happen with her parents and that is how B&T become her New parents.
Great, but sad update!
Let Bette and Tina be Angie new parents for good!PPS!
Wow that was creepy, angel see their
country being killed was horrible and very sad.
Let’s hope that Bette and Tina able
custody of Angel.
I wait anxiously next chapter.
5 stars.
It was really quite difficult to read, and we thank you that in spite of the difficulties you wrote us a great chapter.
I’m like the others, I hope Kit will help to Angie, that Bette and Tina be raised her.
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Keep churning this story, TN1 – really love king your story! Thank you!
The attacked was horrifying , poor Angie… Please let Tina and Bette love her from now.
I love your story very much.. Thank you.. Pps