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(Angie’s Story)
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Portard: Munchkin you want to take a swim with daddy?
Angelica nodded her head.
Portard: Well let’s put on your floats and then we can take a dip…safety first.
Portard properly dressed his daughter in swim gear and together they headed for the fresh water lake for a much needed cool off and swim. Olivia was lying out on the deck with her eyes closed enjoying the freshness of this whole experience. If you were to tell her years ago that she would be out in the dark woods with all kinds of bugs and insects, swimming in a lake sworn with fishes, and gutting worms to catch her breakfast she would probably just laugh in your face, but now since meeting Portard she has been trying to let loose and try new things that she wouldn’t before. Angie and Portard swam for about thirty minutes until their tiredness finally caught up with them, then they join Olivia in lying on the deck and taking a quick nap since there weren’t anyone nearby for a mile or two, so they figure it should be safe.
GRAPHIC WRANING ADVISED…THE BEAR INCIDENT IS DESCRIBED IN DETAILS…
Angelica was the first one to stir as she still had some hyper left and couldn’t sleep that long. When she looked up she saw what she thought was a large black dog but in reality it was adult black bear walking along the woods. She got up and quickly ran towards it as the bear was walking farther away from her view.
Olivia: Angie honey give us a few more minutes then we will get up and play with you, ok sweetie.
Olivia said sleepily but got no response from Angelica.
Angelica: Doggy. Doggy.
Angie called out to the bear.
Angelica: Doggy come back here!
Angie was running towards the bear but accidently tripped on some branches which caused her to start wimping, and the sound of the branches and child’s cry caught the bear’s attention as he laid eyes on Angelica for the first time. Like a predator stalking his prey he changed directions and started walking towards Angelica.
Olivia: Honey I think we should be heading back now.
Olivia was speaking to her husband who by the sound of her voice began to stir.
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Damn! I was thinking the same thing that a will was left. Kit would get custody but she will say she’s too old and let Bette and Tina have Boo. Especially once she founds out about the bond Tina has with Boo. Please post again TODAY!! Loved it. PPS
Dang TN1….totally gruesome to read I can only imagine how you felt when you were writing it. Poor Angie, hopefully Kit will help out since she knew the family and Tina and Angie can be together…BAM!… You are totally awesome storyteller!…Portard huh…priceless!..what a page turner you’re writing….thx for updating so soon…Boom!…lubya
Portard what an ugly name first or last. Chuckled at that. Loved the update, thanks.
As a good reader I’m keeping my theories on the continuing story to myself!
Look forward to seeing if I’m right but don’t think PF’s far off!
That was horrible to read, so sad that Angie lost her parents like that.
I hope that Kit is indeed the one that got custody over Angelica, should something happen with her parents and that is how B&T become her New parents.
Great, but sad update!
Let Bette and Tina be Angie new parents for good!PPS!
Wow that was creepy, angel see their
country being killed was horrible and very sad.
Let’s hope that Bette and Tina able
custody of Angel.
I wait anxiously next chapter.
5 stars.
It was really quite difficult to read, and we thank you that in spite of the difficulties you wrote us a great chapter.
I’m like the others, I hope Kit will help to Angie, that Bette and Tina be raised her.
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Keep churning this story, TN1 – really love king your story! Thank you!
The attacked was horrifying , poor Angie… Please let Tina and Bette love her from now.
I love your story very much.. Thank you.. Pps