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(Angie’s Story)
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Portard: Ok well we can hike up the camp site if it means that much to you.
Olivia smiled.
Olivia: Thanks honey, and how far is it exactly?
Portard: No more than about 5 miles up.
And her smile fades away…
Olivia: You got to be kidding me?
Portard: Nope
Portard said gloating.
Olivia: You’re enjoying this are you?
Portard: Oh you have no idea.
Olivia: Honey I need a real shower, I’m no good without one.
Portard: Babe just jump in the lake, take one of those cloths out the bag and wipe yourself as if you were in a real shower but just with clothes on instead.
Olivia: Fine I will take a wash off in this water but it better be a fresh water lake or 5 miles or not, we’re hiking!
Portard: Yes mommy
Olivia: Come on Angie, let mommy clean you off in the water sweetie.
Angelica started taking off her clothes and heading to the lake with just her Barbie panties on which caused both parents to start laughing.
Olivia: Gosh I should have had a boy because she sure is your equal, I’m not kidding it’s ridiculous.
Olivia and Angelica got into the water in the shadow end and started wiping off.
Portard: Honey do you want to go buy some spray to warn off the mosquitoes, you know how Angie likes to swell up when she’s bitten.
Portard called out and Olivia was about to speak but was cut off by her daughter.
Angelica: Daddy we can’t go buy anything!
Portard: Oh yeah, and why is that?
Angelica: Because mommy said you were cheap.
Angelica said splashing around.
Portard: Oh she did, didn’t she?
Portard tried to act offended by his wife’s comment.
Angelica: uh huh, didn’t you mommy?
Olivia: Ahh baby I think that’s enough of the wash off, come on and let mommy put on your clothes for the day so we can see what your generous and loving father have planned for us today.
Olivia said sweetly trying to get on Portard’s good side but he just glared at her in a playful way letting her know she was in trouble later for that comment.
Portard: Well I thought we could walk along the trial, I have water, snacks and swim gear packed just in case we want to take a dive along the way.
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Damn! I was thinking the same thing that a will was left. Kit would get custody but she will say she’s too old and let Bette and Tina have Boo. Especially once she founds out about the bond Tina has with Boo. Please post again TODAY!! Loved it. PPS
Dang TN1….totally gruesome to read I can only imagine how you felt when you were writing it. Poor Angie, hopefully Kit will help out since she knew the family and Tina and Angie can be together…BAM!… You are totally awesome storyteller!…Portard huh…priceless!..what a page turner you’re writing….thx for updating so soon…Boom!…lubya
Portard what an ugly name first or last. Chuckled at that. Loved the update, thanks.
As a good reader I’m keeping my theories on the continuing story to myself!
Look forward to seeing if I’m right but don’t think PF’s far off!
That was horrible to read, so sad that Angie lost her parents like that.
I hope that Kit is indeed the one that got custody over Angelica, should something happen with her parents and that is how B&T become her New parents.
Great, but sad update!
Let Bette and Tina be Angie new parents for good!PPS!
Wow that was creepy, angel see their
country being killed was horrible and very sad.
Let’s hope that Bette and Tina able
custody of Angel.
I wait anxiously next chapter.
5 stars.
It was really quite difficult to read, and we thank you that in spite of the difficulties you wrote us a great chapter.
I’m like the others, I hope Kit will help to Angie, that Bette and Tina be raised her.
I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Keep churning this story, TN1 – really love king your story! Thank you!
The attacked was horrifying , poor Angie… Please let Tina and Bette love her from now.
I love your story very much.. Thank you.. Pps