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Lost, part 3
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Previously…
Bette and Jodi came out of the bedroom and walked into an empty living room.
"T," Bette said as she checked the guest room thinking Tina might have wanted to lay down. It was empty as well.
“Where is she,” asked Jodi as she went into the kitchen and begun to make a pot of coffee.
Bette noticed all of Tina’s things were gone and the blanket was neatly folded on the couch.
"T?" Bette called out as she walked outside to the patio. No one was there.
Bette entered the house in a panic. Where could she have gone, she thought as she opened the front door and stepped onto the front porch, looking for Tina frantically.
As she looked toward Shane’s house, she saw the door close and figured that’s where she must have gone.
She grabbed her shoes and ran out the door as she went after Tina.
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Even half drunk and a little more than hung-over, Shane could tell there was something wrong the minute she saw Tina at her door at 5am.
“Come on in T,” said Shane as she did her best to hold the door while Tina slid past her. “I don’t know what happened, it opened all the way last night.”
Tina went over to the couch where she saw a full tequila bottle sitting on the table. She opened it, poured a little in the empty glass next to her that was left from the party the night before.
Shane didn’t say a word.
“I know, it’s gross, but at this point I don’t give a shit,” said Tina as she plugged her nose and put the glass up to her lips. She tried to take a drink. It barely made it past her lips when she spit it back into her cup.
“Maybe that wasn’t the best idea,” said Tina. “It sounded like a good idea at…” Tina stopped abruptly in the middle of her sentence and quickly looked around.
Shane knew that look.
“Shit. T. Here, wait,” Shane managed as she grabbed the nearest trashcan and placed it in front of Tina who violently vomited into it.
When Tina was finished, she put her head into her hands and started to cry.
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I am not a tibetter and I hate how Tina has treated Bette, punishing her for years while never taking an ounce of responsibility for everything she herself has done. I thought this was well written, and Tina was actually looking at her own behavior,finally, but, however, not telling Bette, the one who needs to hear it. When Bette heard Tina speaking of her own behavior, she rushes in to stop her? Tina mustn’t feel bad, even after the Henry crap? Telling Jenny to shut up..when Jenny was speaking the truth? Bette was not the singlehanded destroyer of the relationship, they both did, but Bette has paid enough for her mistakes. If they will have any chance, they both need to hold Tina accountable for what she has done as well, and she needs to tell Bette.
And Jenny needs to die a horrible death but we can’t always get what we want. Bette with anyone else is suck, and Tina with anyone else is suck. They belong together regardless of any and all shit that went on in the past.
Lament I agree with you 100%. Annieb why didn’t you let Bette just knock the fire out of Jenny, she deserves it. Jenny needs to hurt badly from all the hell she has created. Tina indeed needs to talk to Bette and tell her everything and Bette has paid enough, they both have. They just need to talk and end all this strife and get on with making a new life with their child and be true to each other. Keep writing for us. PPS
Annie, I thought this was REALLY well written and definitely one way to increase the communication between these two characters. If we take the approach the writers have with the series, these two really struggle to have a honest conversation. I know it’s partially to maintain the drama but really… let’s add in a little bit of realism as well. You have in your story and I’ll look forward to the next post… It’s really well done!
I’m glad Bette came to Tina’s rescue! Oh, and by the way, will someone please out Jenny to sleep…permanently!
You’re doing an excellent job w/this story. I also enjoy reading your posts on TWoP. You have the same screen name there, right? PPS.
this is the beginning of very intense chapters to come WOW. we need to call the vet’s office and have jenny hauled away and put DOWN. love how tina take some of the blame. but it’s time for them to talk and get everything out their system and let it go and move forward, they need to stop living in the past! :) excellent
i am a TIBETTE and im proud of it.. lol.. sorry susannah cant fight fate.. i hope they really talk now.. and Jenny.. what a boring girl.. hope you update soon.. loving that story. thanks :-)
Okay, totally and completely hooked!! Thanks!
I love how Bette and Shane put Jenny in her place. It is kind of hard to talk to someone when they are with another person. Tina does not feel like she has the right to talk to Bette and be truthful because of her mistakes. I see that the Tibette ship is sailing and one non-believer needs to get off and quickly.
I hope that this will finally break Bette and Tina’s dam of silence. It’s long past time that they both laid their cards on the table and said their piece. You wrote this magnificiently. I can’t wait to read more. PS I love that Jenny is scared of Bette!
Oh geezus, I’m so sick of Tina being lambasted by Jenny, etc. Bette should shut the biatch up. Thk god Bette has got some compassion, that’s what u have for the people u love. Jenny should get a life and stop stealing other peoples’. She’s a cretin, a leech, a paua, a parasite!!!! I’m so happy some of us can see the love!! Thx for bringing them back 2gether and for Jodi who altho u haven’t told us yet seems to truly love Bette enuff to let her GO. Thx to u for this poignant tale. PPS
Thank you all for your comments. Susannah2000, I completely understand what you are talking about, however…The reason I wrote these characters the way I did was because this is how these characters communicate, even Jenny. While Tina didn’t say all of this to Bette directly, Bette got the message. This will hopefully open up the lines of communication between these two. Besides, if I just had them have an actual conversation, what fun would that be?
That was awesome and jenny need her ass to get kick!