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Lost, part 3
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As Bette ran over to Shane’s, she wondered what she was going to say to Tina and why she left in the first place. As she reached out to grab the door handle, she realized it hadn’t been shut all the way. Just as she was about to go in, she stopped as she heard crying coming from inside. She knew she shouldn’t be listen, but couldn’t stop herself.
“Shh, shh, T, it’s ok, Shane whispered trying her best to comfort Tina as she rubbed her back, “It’s just a trash can.”
“I’m so sorry, I’m so embarrassed,” Tina said between sobs. “I should just go.”
“Nonsense, it’s no big deal,” said Shane as she lifted Tina’s chin so she would look at her. She knew Tina wasn’t crying about the trashcan. “It was Jenny’s anyway.”
Tina smiled.
“See, that’s what I like to see,” Shane cooed.
She had a good idea of what was going on, but didn’t want to push Tina to talk about it if she wasn’t ready. She had seen the way they stole glances at each other when they thought the other didn’t notice during the self-defense class, and how they just happened to be paired up together and how both tensed up as Bette wrapped her arms around Tina.
She had also seen the way Tina seemed to be searching for someone while she was dancing with Brenda at She-Bar and how Bette had been doing the same thing, and how Tina had been avoiding Bette ever since that night. Something must have happened.
“I am so fucked up Shane,” said Tina. “How did my life get so fucked up?”
Tina wasn’t so much asking as she was talking out loud.
“Bette…she…we…”
“Tina, you don’t have to explain anything. It’s ok, you don’t owe any expla…”
“No, I know I don’t. I just need…” Tina paused.
“T, what do you need? I’ll do anything I can to…”
Again, Tina cut her off. “I need…I need…” she paused.
“T?”
“I need Bette,” Tina started. “I need her Shane. I know I just keep fucking up over and over again, but I need her. Why did I push her so hard to go after Jodi?
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I am not a tibetter and I hate how Tina has treated Bette, punishing her for years while never taking an ounce of responsibility for everything she herself has done. I thought this was well written, and Tina was actually looking at her own behavior,finally, but, however, not telling Bette, the one who needs to hear it. When Bette heard Tina speaking of her own behavior, she rushes in to stop her? Tina mustn’t feel bad, even after the Henry crap? Telling Jenny to shut up..when Jenny was speaking the truth? Bette was not the singlehanded destroyer of the relationship, they both did, but Bette has paid enough for her mistakes. If they will have any chance, they both need to hold Tina accountable for what she has done as well, and she needs to tell Bette.
And Jenny needs to die a horrible death but we can’t always get what we want. Bette with anyone else is suck, and Tina with anyone else is suck. They belong together regardless of any and all shit that went on in the past.
Lament I agree with you 100%. Annieb why didn’t you let Bette just knock the fire out of Jenny, she deserves it. Jenny needs to hurt badly from all the hell she has created. Tina indeed needs to talk to Bette and tell her everything and Bette has paid enough, they both have. They just need to talk and end all this strife and get on with making a new life with their child and be true to each other. Keep writing for us. PPS
Annie, I thought this was REALLY well written and definitely one way to increase the communication between these two characters. If we take the approach the writers have with the series, these two really struggle to have a honest conversation. I know it’s partially to maintain the drama but really… let’s add in a little bit of realism as well. You have in your story and I’ll look forward to the next post… It’s really well done!
I’m glad Bette came to Tina’s rescue! Oh, and by the way, will someone please out Jenny to sleep…permanently!
You’re doing an excellent job w/this story. I also enjoy reading your posts on TWoP. You have the same screen name there, right? PPS.
this is the beginning of very intense chapters to come WOW. we need to call the vet’s office and have jenny hauled away and put DOWN. love how tina take some of the blame. but it’s time for them to talk and get everything out their system and let it go and move forward, they need to stop living in the past! :) excellent
i am a TIBETTE and im proud of it.. lol.. sorry susannah cant fight fate.. i hope they really talk now.. and Jenny.. what a boring girl.. hope you update soon.. loving that story. thanks :-)
Okay, totally and completely hooked!! Thanks!
I love how Bette and Shane put Jenny in her place. It is kind of hard to talk to someone when they are with another person. Tina does not feel like she has the right to talk to Bette and be truthful because of her mistakes. I see that the Tibette ship is sailing and one non-believer needs to get off and quickly.
I hope that this will finally break Bette and Tina’s dam of silence. It’s long past time that they both laid their cards on the table and said their piece. You wrote this magnificiently. I can’t wait to read more. PS I love that Jenny is scared of Bette!
Oh geezus, I’m so sick of Tina being lambasted by Jenny, etc. Bette should shut the biatch up. Thk god Bette has got some compassion, that’s what u have for the people u love. Jenny should get a life and stop stealing other peoples’. She’s a cretin, a leech, a paua, a parasite!!!! I’m so happy some of us can see the love!! Thx for bringing them back 2gether and for Jodi who altho u haven’t told us yet seems to truly love Bette enuff to let her GO. Thx to u for this poignant tale. PPS
Thank you all for your comments. Susannah2000, I completely understand what you are talking about, however…The reason I wrote these characters the way I did was because this is how these characters communicate, even Jenny. While Tina didn’t say all of this to Bette directly, Bette got the message. This will hopefully open up the lines of communication between these two. Besides, if I just had them have an actual conversation, what fun would that be?
That was awesome and jenny need her ass to get kick!