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Love All Chapter 36
“Everyone, this is Carmen, Carmen, this is Al, Dana, Helena, Marina and Bette.” She introduced as she gestured to the five of them. “And this is the other love of my life. Tina.”
Tina smiled broadly, wiped her hands on the bar towel and came from behind it to give Carmen a big hug.
“I’m so happy to meet you. I feel like I know you I’ve heard so much about you.” Tina informed her, giddily as the brunette returned the hug feeling instantly at ease with this all important person in Shane’s life.
“And you. Why would I bother to start the music since I know our choices will be limited to your tastes. Better just to wait for the professional to arrive.”
Shane smacked Tina on the bottom. “Oh funny Kennard. I know for a fact that you love Jimmy Buffet, too.”
“Ah forgot about that. You might have to throw that on since I’m just in the process of making margaritas now.”
Shane reached for the remote and cursored through the ipod selection to start Jimmy. “Carmen, you want a margarita. Too?” Tina asked as she restarted her mixing.
“Sure. Since you’re offering.”
“Ok belly up to the bar. You’re drinks are served.”
With the exception of one Cosmo, the others eagerly collected their drinks and grinned at how good it tasted.
“…wasted away again in margaritaville, searching for my lost shaker of salt.” Shane sang as she joined Tina behind the bar and took her in her arms to waltz to the couple’s favorite song.
Tina joined in surprising everyone with her lovely singing voice. “Some people claim that there’s a woman to blame but I think, it could be my fault.”
By the time the second verse, the other had all joined in the singing and Shane traded dancing with Tina to dancing with Carmen. Bette stood and grabbed her around the waist, bring Tina in close as she waltzed with her.”
The song finished, the group was breathless from singing, laughing and dancing.
They had only a short window together before the others started to arrive and within the hour, the room and the deck were filled. Luckily the bartenders Shane had hired had also arrived and Tina was leaving the bar to join her friends who were now completely relaxed with the margaritas.
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(65 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
I am forced to call a fault on ending the story there, oh queen of the cliffhangers!!
Thanks for the mammaries, but no thanks for the “blue balls.”
I love it.More soon,Pleeze.
Oh yes.
Ohh…my…goddness!! Please say yes Bette!! Wow…please post soon!
NOT that I condone adultery, but in this case with the husband being such a “DICK” and Tina and her are really ment to be, I am doing a happy dance. Glad for Dana and Tina going after her girl. Can’t wait for Bette to come into her own. Tina is going to be in heaven and will reap all the rewards!! Please post soon!!!
maybe you can shoot for next years open… in case you didn’t know… we don’t want you to end this… and what a place to stop… god Robi… i hope bette screams YES
You’re BAD! But I love it…PS. Ciao.
Wow. Just wow. And no tennis. Perfect chapter!! :)
wow… it’s about time !!!! I’ve not commented so far, ’cause I was late… but I really like this story : I like tennis, and tenniswomen (go Amélie, go !!) but I also like your story for its original point of view : I liked that you reversed the “usual” situation, Tina being the lesbian, and Bette being the married “straight” one , unsure of herself, (even if she is still very alpha)… I don’t know exactly when is the US Open… but I hope you won’t finish too soon : after so long waiting before coming to the point, these two need time to enjoy, heh ?!! (and we need it too…) so please, go on with the story ASAP !
yippeeeeeee, doing my little happy dance, that they are finally getting it together, now your leaving us hanging, you big tease, but it hurts so good!!!!!
Bette, I hope you have a pre-nup. Alimony can be a b_ _ _ _! Thanks, Robi, to leading us up to almost…
It’s about time…. Please continue! :)
Oh my. All a bit steamy for a Sunday morning, but hot damn if I don’t want more. Please don’t leave us hanging, Robi, more soon! Thanks
Ditto, with what Cerdi said!!!!!!!!
Amazingly written amazing turn of events!!! Please let them fully express their love toward each other… Bette will figure things out tomorrow. Thanks!
Cerdi, LOL!! I feel the same way!
Wow, Bravo. I really enjoyed this update.
while i understand how life gets in the way, i was SO waiting for an update! and what an update it was… are you teasing us and you have the next one ready and you’ll post it today? pps
OMG! I’ve been dying for this post & now you’ve left us hangin. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE I need the rest.
wtf????? u left us there, I mean them there??? u beta post soon…
Another great one, keep’em coming :) pps
ALELUIAAAAA! I´m happy! :D Of course she will say YES! :D They are togethere YAYY!Great chapter and PPS
WOW! That was just so…I don’t even know what to say, I hope you are planning to post again later today. That was not nice leaving us at the point of will she or won’t she we have to know if it’s time to start sending condolence (hit the road jack)cards to Jody so pps.
Oh my $%^^& God what a chapter and well worth the wait !!!! excellent beyond words.Buy hey what”with the cliff hanger geeze you creative types on this board are killing me with them…But I have this unbelievable confidence that any moment now you will post the next chapter ;-)and if not I beg and go down on bended knees for the rest real soon !!
my comment is the same as everyone else’s thus far. just one thing diff is what I got……you authors love to tease and draw things out, so I think that posting the rest of this will possibly be some time next week, on schedule with your regular posts….am I right??? Please make me wrong. PPS
Ditto on what Cerdi wrote!!!
Cerdi said it all. Damn woman the was just MEAN!!!! Thanks PPS
Thanks for this terrific story! Please post soon.
Woah. Finally! Can’t wait for more.
Well finally!!!!
Damn that was getting hot and not nice to leave us like that!