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Love and Pride – chapter 69
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“I have been ringing you all day “
“Eh – I need to talk to you – outside “
Helena shrugged but followed Sara outside.
“There is nothing wrong with being able to admit that you have to stop drinking “ Tina said “You must have been drinking for 12 solid hours so of course you were drunk “
“Wonder what’s up with Sara?” Lara said
“She is probably just telling her off for last night – I do remember that Helena was being a bitch “Shane commented
“At least she wasn’t trying to steal the whole pub “ Tina said “You are a kleptomaniac Alice – you are unsubtle when you are sober and thieving – god only knows what you are like when you are drunk “
Five minutes passed before Sara came back in and spoke in Bette’s ear. Bette nodded and she followed her outside. Helena was sitting a few yards away on a low wall – she was crying
“What happened?”
“I am so sorry Bette “Sara said
“what are you sorry for – what the hell have you done to my sister?”
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“Are you going to order Tina? “ Alice demanded
Tina was looking at the door waiting for Bette and Helena.
“In a minute “Tina got up and went outside – Bette was hugging Helena who was crying. Tina hesitated but went across anxious about what had upset Helena. She guessed they had rowed – Tina touched Bette lightly on the back – she looked and smiled at her lover.
“Thank God – Tina- will you look after Helena for me?”
“Sure – what’s wrong?”
Bette looked close to tears – she shook her head “I have to talk to someone “
Tina was baffled but she nodded as Bette pulled away from her sister. Tina neatly took over and hugged her friend
“Its okay Hel – you are safe with us – come on honey “
Tina watched as Bette went inside – Helena was crying so hard that she couldn’t speak – all Tina could hear was gulping sobs. She held her closer – knowing the explanation would come soon enough. After several minutes the door of the restaurant opened and Shane emerged with the others behind her
“Helena “Shane spoke
Helena pulled away and looked across
“I – I am sssoo sorry “
“It’s not your fault honey “
Tina looked at Bette who was behind Shane
“Bette? “
“Sara and Carmen woke up together “Bette explained
“Oh God “
“They weren’t sure what they did last night but they have spent the day in bed having sex. Sara was breaking it up with Helena because she has fallen for Carmen”
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This is great. I have a lot of catching up to do but the descriptions of the drunken musketeers are winners.
I’m totally with funnyone here. Sara seemed so cool. What a fuckin’ bitch! “Carm, I haven’t the foggiest idea what happened last night, but, since we’re here in bed, let’s fuck till the decade ends and then neither of us will feel so bad!” I also missed the vandalism episode of Sesame Street. Or maybe it was The Muppet Show…
I just realized this is chapter 69. Yes, I’m 27 going on 13 =p
Interesting. I do feel bad for Helena that Sara broke her heart. However, I think everyone blaming Alice and Shane but absolving Helena as being a follower just allows her to act stupid without taking responsibility for her actions. Helena is just as wrong as whoever may have started it. I hope Peggy comes down heavy handed. And that Bette stops thinking the sun shines out of Helena’s ass. You can love someone and still think they are a fuck-up. But the Sara and Carmen thing does suck for Helena. Love this story though..
Great story, can’t wait for the next chapter, and also your other stories :) pps
Poor Helena, things just keep going from bad to worse. I’m afraid of Peggy’s arrival, she scares me a little. You got me hungry for toast at 9:30 at night! Thanks for the reply back.
Helena can’t win for losing her girlfriend is a bitch and Peggy is going to come and rip her a new one. The poor girl needs something good to happen in her life and soon I don’t know how much more she can take. PPS
Hello Ally, it looks like the drama is ramping right up. You do like to hit a dawg like Helena when she is down, First, a night in the cells, then Peggy on the rampage and now Sara ending things to be with Carmen. This is all messed up. IT is heart-warming to see the love that Bette has for her sister as well as the love that Tina now feels for Helena. It is awesome to have that kind of support. Helena will need it. Ally, as always, I adore your style and skills as an author. This little tale keeps rattling along. There are up and downs but what is important are the relationships between the women and their places in each others lives. These friends may last a lifetime or only through college but is awesome to be there a s part of it all. Many thanks, Your Loyal Fan.
OMG what the fuck. All the drama come to Helena (better than B&T) poor her and Shane. Well B&T and the gang will help her and Shane go through this. Please post soon, thanks!
OMG, it really is one shit sandwich after the next for Helena !!! And honestly, she doesn’t deserve this. Anyways, great twists Ally, and great drama. I’m enjoying this a lot. Thank you.
Geez, Ally, would you lighten up on Helena? Talk about kicking somebody when they’re down! And Peggy hasn’t even arrived yet and there’s still a court date to attend. Biro, huh? Must be a magic marker. When did the Muppets ever show a tendency to shoplifting and vandalism? I must have missed that episode of Sesame Street.
OK. I get that to have drama, one needs conflict. And, um, I’m sorry about this but, um, (whispering) I’d rather it be Helena than Bette ot Tina. Any place but on this board, that would probably make me a bad person. Good thing I spend so much time here that I can’t make it to any other boards.
Oh bloody hell, waiting to see how you write Helena out of this one
OMG, a great chapter. I feel so sorry for Helena. I look forward to see how you are gonna write the anger of mummy dearest, courtdate and all of the other shit that is going on. You are a hell of a good writer ;) Looking forward to the next post :D CK
Talk about being the DQ. Pain is raining down on Helena. PPS.
Well you did say you had plenty of drama instored. Helena is just have a bad, bad, couple of days and don’t think you will let it get any better (lol).
Oh dear! Poor Hel