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    Love In The L Word – Chapter 1

    Story written on May 17, 2005 by L_Words_Biggest_Fan.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53968
    Author Notes:

    Bette gets to bring both Tina and their baby home from the hospital, and talk 2 eachother about how they feel 2 be back 2gether. Meanwhile, Dana and Alice put the problems they had be4 behind them.

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    dana and alice sit in their silence house, not next to eachother, but away from eachother. its like a game they keep playing, where dana would glance over at alice…and end up leading alice to glance over at dana, and once their eyes connect in2 a deep stare, they hurry up and turn.

    dana is sitting on the couch, staring down at her hands, looking upset and lonely. while alice is sitting on the chair across the room from her doing the same thing, but would end up glancing up at dana after a while, and see how upset she looks.

    dana ( looks over at alice with a sorry face on ): al, please look at me…please
    alice ( looks at dana..seeing how upset she looks ): what..?

    dana: al, i dont like how we are acting. i dont like that we arent talking 2 eachother and not acting how we usally do. i know that i might have said some things a few nights ago that upset you, and i am sorry, and i will keep saying sorry. i just dont want us 2 turn in2 how some old couples act, not talking 2 eachother. i miss talking 2 u so much baby.

    alice ( with a little smile on her face ): dana, i didnt want us 2 stop talking 2 eachother, its just i thought thats what u wanted.

    dana ( looking confussed a lil ): alice..what do u mean?

    alice: well a few nights ago u said that i was needy and wouldnt let u breathe..and i felt so bad when u told me that.. and –

    dana ( looking upset with a lil smile on her face ): aww..no..no..alice..there is no way in this world that i would ever wanna stop talking 2 u…at this moment u r the most important person in my life..and i dont want u 2 ever feel that i want u 2 stop talking 2 me…because i dont..

    dana walks over 2 where alice is sitting and reaches her hands out 2 alice..and alice puts her hands on danas..and dana pulls her up..and they stand infront of eachother holding hands…staring in2 eachothers eyes..

    alice: im sorry for the way i have been acting ( starts crying)..i felt as if i am losing u..and i was getting scared about that…because i love u so much..and i didnt want that 2 happen…

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    Comments

    1. Nice story. I don’t usually comment but I think this would read better if you wrote out the words instead of using numbers and “u” instead of you. I just found myself getting distracted by it.

    3. I agree with greens. This was sweet, but I really found myself not able to concentrate on the story, because I was distracted by all your shortcuts, and no capital letters. I felt like I was reading a text message, not a story. I hope you do continue though, because it was sweet.

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