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Love In The L Word – Chapter 1
dana takes alice in2 her arms and hugs her tightly and her eyes begin 2 water. dana then reaches up and puts her hand on the back of alices neck and closes her eyes…while alice puts her hands on danas back rubbing up and down and hugging her back tightly…
dana: i am here with u…and always will be..and i dont want u 2 worry about losing me, because u wont. al, I LOVE YOU…
alice backs up from their hug..and looks deep in2 danas eyes..and dana smiles as alice starts smiling..with tears running down both their cheeks. alice whips the tears off of danas cheek with her hands..keeping her hands on danas cheek with dana holding them there…
alice: baby…i am so happy to hear that. I LOVE YOU too.
they both lean in for a passionate kiss. they go in2 their bed and start making love to eachother, where dana is now ontop of alice. alice puts her hands on danas hips, rubbing them up and down, while dana has her hands already up alices shirt rubbing her sides, kissing and sucking on her neck. alice lets out a lil moan as dana kisses and sucks on her neck. dana then stops kissing alice and lays beside alice looking in2 her eyes deeply and alice looks back..and they both begin 2 smile…
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as bette holds the baby..tina has her arm around bette..and they walk in2 the babies room 2 lay the baby down in the crib. when the baby is layed down in the crib..bette adjustes the lil blanket so that its over their baby so that she doesnt get cold, and bette has her hand on her babys stomach as the baby lays there sleeping..and bette then reaches over and puts a toy in the crib next to their adorable little baby girl.
tina and bette both stand by the crib watching their baby girl sleep..and they then glance over at eachother smiling…bette puts her hand on the crib..and tina then reaches out and puts hers ontop of bettes. they look over at eachother and smile and lean in closer 2 give eachother a big hug…
bette sighs as a sign of happiness: i dont want 2 ever lose you again
tina backs up from the hug and stares right in2 bettes teary eyes: baby..u WONT EVER lose me again..i have missed being with u so much. u r the only 1 that i love and want 2 always be with, u r the 1 that brings the most joy 2 my life. now that we have a baby girl, we are going to be spending alot of more time together, and that is what i want, and its what u want 2…i love u and our baby girl both so much.
tina and bette lean in for a long kiss then go back 2 hugging eachother. bette then walks behind tina and puts her arms around tinas waist, hugging her from behind. bette puts her head on tinas shoulder and tina leans her head back 2 touch bettes, and they glance over and smile at eachother, and stand their staring that their baby girl.
bette: I LOVE YOU TINA
tina: I LOVE YOU TOO.
bette: I LOVE YOU ANGELICA
tina smiles at bette and bette smiles back, and they give ecahother a kiss and begin 2 watch their baby again.
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(51 votes, average: 3.43 out of 5)
Nice story. I don’t usually comment but I think this would read better if you wrote out the words instead of using numbers and “u” instead of you. I just found myself getting distracted by it.
Sweet story. I like it.
I agree with greens. This was sweet, but I really found myself not able to concentrate on the story, because I was distracted by all your shortcuts, and no capital letters. I felt like I was reading a text message, not a story. I hope you do continue though, because it was sweet.
great chapter..please continue
great start…please post soon
I like this story and would love to see it develops.
I agree about the slang and shortcuts — distracting!
nice and sweet