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Love Is A Fragile Thing 12
Well Im glad to here that
Hows Tina?
Well you knowshes still with herand you know shes going to have the baby in a couple of weeks
Yeah, I know
Are you going to be here for that?
II dont think soeverything is just so complicated right nowI know Tina and I talked a little before I left but I dont think anything really changedI mean, god, shes still with Helena, its like she cant see whats shes really like
Yeah, I know what you mean
Just take care of her and the baby ShaneI know its not going to be easy raising the baby
You dont have to worry about that, we got everything
Okay, well I better get going, I got to get at least some work done before the day is over.
Yeah, I guess I forgot about the time differences, Well it was good to here from you Bettedo you want to talk to Kit again?
Yeah
Alright talk to you later She hands the phone to Kit.
Alright baby girl, you take care of yourself now you here?
Yeah I hearUmm Kit?
Yeah?
Would it be wrong ififIif I fell in love again?
What do you mean?
KitII god how do I say thisyou know Dani? the woman that I brought that one night I told you guys I was leaving?
Yeah, yeah, I know who youre talking aboutHer?
WellyeahI dont know how to explain it Kitit it just kind of happenedbut I feel guilty for some reasonlike Im cheating all over again
Bette you cant do that to yourselfand whats the matter with falling in love?Youre not with Tina anymore, so you should be able to move on without holding backHave you told her yet?
NoI was just waiting for the right timeI mean we just went out on our first date a couple of weeks ago, but weve been hanging out together almost everyday since I got here
Well it sounds like my baby girl has a crush
Yeah, I guess you could say that
Well dont let anything hold you back girl, its been too long you need to move on, be glad you found love again
Thanks KitI really needed to talk to someone about this and I couldnt talk to the girlsyou knowtheyd freaktheir really stuck on me and Tina getting back together
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(51 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Love that Tina got rid of Helena, That the baby is born and seems to be okay, How3 will Bette take the baby name. Alive is like a hot air balloon. Put a hole in it and its not worth a flip.. Love this
great story continue
Excellent chapter. I’m glad Tina kick Helena’s ass and not with that bitch anymore. Now I hope Bette will fly back LA and stay with Tina and the baby soon. Alice is so funny, I just laughing and love it. Oh I don’t complaining about long chapter and I like to read long chapter so post soon, thank you!
please raspberry are you trying to kill all of us?..please fix this NOW..send Bette back to her wife and her baby i know Dani is fine..but Bette and tina are soulmates forever..thanks for another great chapter, but please stop teasing us post soon ;-)
C’mon! Please we really like this Awesome story you can fix this to Bette and Tina together again Please post soon.
no, not too long at all. Excellent chapter and wonderful story. I am excited to see what happens next!
Wow! So much drama oin one chapter- I loved it! I have a feeling that Helena isn’t completely out of picture, yet. Can’t wait to see Bette back in LA with her baby.
I love this story. I hope You keep Bette with Dani though and just make her and Tina really good friends. PLEASE Dont break Dani and bette up.
i´m sorry Nicole..but are you crazy or something..did you hear what did you say? Bette and Tina meant to be together no matter what..the time will close those 2 again and YOU raspberry try to fix this NOW!!!!
I LOVE YOUR LONG CHAPTERS. Now it is time for Bette to go back to LA and bring Tina and the baby to Sydney…..POST SOON…
Nice going. I hope you have Dani go with Bette back to visit Tina. I still like Bette & Dani together. They seem really cute. After all, in real life, the trauma experienced by Tina & Bette would be pivotal to a broken relationship many times too difficult to repair. Why not forge a new relationship b/w the two? Yes, people can be JUST friends.
OMG, Bette has to fly back to LA and see Tina and the baby – SHE HAS TO!!!
I want to know what you have planned.
I like long chapters, so i’m not complaining.
Thanks for the post and i’m really looking forward to finding out Bette’s reaction to the baby’s name.
OMG this is going to be good!!!!
And suddenly, Bette breaks into a medly of songs including “Should I stay or should I go?”, “Fooled around and fell in love”, and that old standard “If you can’t be with the one you love, love the one you’re with.” So, Porter, on Helena’s rather hasty departure and Becky’s not as hasty entrance, what’s it going to be?
Hey Bettezilla! get your ass back to LA and be with your wife and daughter…now move! and better make it fast……………..
Can’t wait to see where you take this. And there is no such thing as “Too Long”. Loved this chapter and can’t wait for the next one.
Okay, now that I’ve stopped laughing from slackers comment, I think I agree. Is Bette gonna stay with dee or leave to be with tee.
ok, love long chapters, need Bette to get back there or Tina to go there
I loved it and there is not chapter that is “too long”. Please post soon. I am addicted now.
Ay young, I know this make sound fucked up but… Bette needs to leave Dani’s ass (I dont care how good she’s been), and fly her ass back to LA to fight for her family. And I loved how Tina dropped Helena’s ass (Its about time). LOL, i crack myself up. Great chapter as usual update soon please.
I AM NOT COMPLAINING!!! I love long chapters. This is going to get interesting now that Helena is out of the picture. Can’t wait to see what happens when Bette comes home to see her new daughter. Great chapter, please post soon!!!
The worry about the length of the story as long as it’s good. I can’t wait for Bette’ reaction. Good Job. Thanks for finally get rid of Helena.
I love this story but I do miss “This Should Be Intresting”
Ok, I’m not so happy Bette missed the birth but now all you can do to make up for it is to get her ass back to LA and to here wife!!!!!
Raspberry, your updates are never too long :) Ok, so nows the time for Bette to get her cute ass on the plane back to LA – the sooner the better.