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Love Is A Fragile Thing 13
Love Is A Fragile Thing 13
There was silence
Bette, are you still there?
Yeah, Im here
So?Are you going to say something?
IIdont understandWhy?
I dont know what you are talking about
But Kit, were not together anymorewhy would she use my name?
You have to ask her that
There was silence again
Kit, please dont get me wrong, I am very excited about the baby, butI just started to move on(tears were beginning to fall) But she didnt evenshe didnt(it was beginning to be a little too much for her) sorry Kitbut I got to go. *click*
BetteBetteshit!
Bette was crying, she felt as if a ton of bricks had been put on her shoulders. Now her heart was being pulled two ways. She felt a great need to be there for the baby. But how could she when she was starting a new life here? She had been thinking during her time in Australiashe was thinking that life goes on and she felt like her chapter in L.A. was over and she was starting a new one in Sydney. How could she do this? Tina had made it very clear that she was going to have no part in their lives, she got it, she finally got it, and thats why she left in the first place. I got to get out of here. She grabbed her things and she walked out.
James, Im leaving Ill see you tomorrow
Bette, where are you going?
She left before he got an answer.
She had been driving around for a while, not sure where she was really going, until she ended up at the beach. She looked out to the water from the car, the beach, the place where she had laid out all her problems, worries, frustration, and whatever emotions she had, she poured it all out in the soft sand, the cold water. Though it wasnt the same beach she had gone to before, but she knew she would find some sort of understanding or relief.
Once she got to the sand she took off her shoes and walked closer to the ocean. She found a spot and sat down. She brought her knees up to her chest and rested her chin on her arms. She blocked out the sounds of the children playing, the chit-chat of people walking by, all she could hear was the roaring waves crashing into the water.
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(53 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
no,no.no.thats just wrong!b&t belong together.excellent writing tho.
awesome really always lonin this story thanks
I like it still…love the B&D look. They seem really good together / match personalities both personally & professionally. I think you’re setting us up for Dani’s eventual demise so I’m kinda sad about that. Too much time has passed for B&T. They should just stay friends if anything.
oh no I’m not liking this at all. I don’t hate you raspberry but I’m going off you very quickly!!! You can’t really do this to us :(
I like this story a lot. You have made Bette’s moving on story into something good. Can’t tell much about Tina yet. Hopefully more to follow.
I love my B&T together but I’m starting to like my B&D so who knows. I can’t belive she is pg. I wonder what Kit is going to say.
I’m sad, also, at where this story is going. Bette split even though Tina sent out a clear signal to her w/the baby’s name. Now, Bette’s off making new babies with trophy wife. Like the writing, but direction leaves me sad.
I didn’t think I could be so happy, yet so sad, all in the same chapter. You have done that with this, so I say…very well done. Thank you for making nice and long. Love that!!
WOW that is Great.I like Danielle & Bette.but I LOVE BETTE & TINA, sTILL IT’S A GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
[“I already am oneâ€
“Kit, Dee is pregnant!â€
“What?!†]
LOL, Aww I love Bette and Dani! I hope there baby survives.
Wow. So Dani’s pregnant? I hope Bette is able to enjoy this pregnancy and give Dani her all. I think they make a great couple and I’m glad to see she’s moved on. It’ll be interesting to see if you tie Bette and Tina back together. Can’t wait to see where you are going with this. Please post soon. =)
it’s me again..please be kind to dani. i’m getting attached to her already.
This was lovely, but you’re breaking my TiBette heart!
Well, tina got what she wanted and now Bette has what she wanted. I am so glad Bette is happy with Dee but little sad that tina doesn’t have someone special in her life. I think you are doing an awesome job with this story.
Good chapter. This is going crazy, Bette move on and getting married and Dani’s pragnant, and Tina is alone with Becky, this is sad for Bette and Tina’s story. Post soon, thank you!
WOW…I haven’t read the previous chapters for this story, but WOW…that’s all I can say. Don’t worry, I’ll read it;P I am a B&T fan, but I am glad that both Bette and Tina found some form of happiness. Bette’s just a pimp momma huh…two babies, wow. I think she should be in Becky’s life as well though, she’s already missed two years, she can’t just totally ignore her child from her first marriage. All in all, totally kick arse writing Raspberry=) Can’t wait to see the girls reaction, especially Tina’s. Update soon please!!
Ok no, I’ve got this funny feeling in my tummy and I got it the second you said that Tina thought she should just move on and when Bette stayed in Sydney! BnT should be together, Dani is nice and all but just not what Bette needs, or mabye this is about what I need. Anyhoo just saying get Bette’s ass back to Tina and there little girl!
This is my first comment to a fanfic. I’ve been reading almost all of the fanfic on the board and finally find the one i fall in love with. Your story and direction is so great and interesting. I love it soooooooooo much. Dani is definately a PERFECT SOUL MATE for Bett. So please, please don’t let anything happen to her. Thanks you so much for such a wonderfun story Rasperry. You’re the best!!!
*sniff* sigh *sniff* deeper sigh. Both Bette and Tina deserve their happiness. . .I just wish it was together. Keep posting, this is a very interesting story. I will read it even if B&T aren’t a couple (even though we all know they’re soul mates).
Thanks for the post Rasperry i’ve been looking forward to this. I’m hoping Tina will also find someone to love too.
Looking forward to everyones reaction to B&D news about the pregnancy, also does the gang know that B&D are married?
Please don’t leave us hanging too long to find out.
Thank you.
i´m very sorry..but is too painfull see whats going on here..bette and tina and all of us dont deserve this..i´m to angry and upset rigth now thank God the show is moving for other end