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Love Is A Fragile Thing 13
She sat thinking for quite a while, than she began thinking of her nameBecky Elizabeth Kennard-Porterover and over again. The more she said the name in her head the more she was beginning to feel guilty for being in Sydney instead of being there for her.
She didnt know how long she was sitting there, she always lost track of time when she went to the beach to clear her head. The sun was beginning to set when she felt a hand rest on her shoulder. Her red and tired eyes looked up to a pair of worried ones.
Hey Dee
She sat next to her.
Baby are you okay? You had me worried sick
Bette wiped the tears from her face.
How did you find me?
Well I stopped by earlier to see you but James said that you left. He said that you looked upset about something and you just walked out(noticing Bette wasnt going to say anything) I tried calling your cell but you werent answering, so I drove around looking for youI thought that I would take a chance and come here.
Dani was just looking at Bette, she didnt know where to start so she sat and waited for Bette to talk. It had been about 15 minutes they had sat in silence watching the sun set.
She had the baby
Dani was confused.
What? Who?
Tinashe gave birth to our baby girl this morning or 5 in the evening their time.
Thats great, isnt it? I mean she is your daughter too
Its wonderful, Im really happy about the baby, butIm not sure if I told you that Tina didnt want me to be a part of their lives. (She had tears rolling down her cheeks) It hurt you know?*sniff* I guess I didnt deserve them for what I did to usBefore I left we agreed that we would be friendsbut we said it like well be friends but we wont hang out or anything but if we happen to run into each other we would be friends
Dani wrapped her arms around her.
Im sorry baby, Im so sorryisnt there anything that you could do to get some kind of parental rights?
I guess I couldvegod I tried so hard to get them back but Tina just didnt want that, thats why I came hereI needed to move on, I needed a change(Bette noticed she was babbling on about her past life. She looked at Dani) Im sorry for talking to you about this, it isnt fair to you
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(53 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
no,no.no.thats just wrong!b&t belong together.excellent writing tho.
awesome really always lonin this story thanks
I like it still…love the B&D look. They seem really good together / match personalities both personally & professionally. I think you’re setting us up for Dani’s eventual demise so I’m kinda sad about that. Too much time has passed for B&T. They should just stay friends if anything.
oh no I’m not liking this at all. I don’t hate you raspberry but I’m going off you very quickly!!! You can’t really do this to us :(
I like this story a lot. You have made Bette’s moving on story into something good. Can’t tell much about Tina yet. Hopefully more to follow.
I love my B&T together but I’m starting to like my B&D so who knows. I can’t belive she is pg. I wonder what Kit is going to say.
I’m sad, also, at where this story is going. Bette split even though Tina sent out a clear signal to her w/the baby’s name. Now, Bette’s off making new babies with trophy wife. Like the writing, but direction leaves me sad.
I didn’t think I could be so happy, yet so sad, all in the same chapter. You have done that with this, so I say…very well done. Thank you for making nice and long. Love that!!
WOW that is Great.I like Danielle & Bette.but I LOVE BETTE & TINA, sTILL IT’S A GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
[“I already am oneâ€
“Kit, Dee is pregnant!â€
“What?!†]
LOL, Aww I love Bette and Dani! I hope there baby survives.
Wow. So Dani’s pregnant? I hope Bette is able to enjoy this pregnancy and give Dani her all. I think they make a great couple and I’m glad to see she’s moved on. It’ll be interesting to see if you tie Bette and Tina back together. Can’t wait to see where you are going with this. Please post soon. =)
it’s me again..please be kind to dani. i’m getting attached to her already.
This was lovely, but you’re breaking my TiBette heart!
Well, tina got what she wanted and now Bette has what she wanted. I am so glad Bette is happy with Dee but little sad that tina doesn’t have someone special in her life. I think you are doing an awesome job with this story.
Good chapter. This is going crazy, Bette move on and getting married and Dani’s pragnant, and Tina is alone with Becky, this is sad for Bette and Tina’s story. Post soon, thank you!
WOW…I haven’t read the previous chapters for this story, but WOW…that’s all I can say. Don’t worry, I’ll read it;P I am a B&T fan, but I am glad that both Bette and Tina found some form of happiness. Bette’s just a pimp momma huh…two babies, wow. I think she should be in Becky’s life as well though, she’s already missed two years, she can’t just totally ignore her child from her first marriage. All in all, totally kick arse writing Raspberry=) Can’t wait to see the girls reaction, especially Tina’s. Update soon please!!
Ok no, I’ve got this funny feeling in my tummy and I got it the second you said that Tina thought she should just move on and when Bette stayed in Sydney! BnT should be together, Dani is nice and all but just not what Bette needs, or mabye this is about what I need. Anyhoo just saying get Bette’s ass back to Tina and there little girl!
This is my first comment to a fanfic. I’ve been reading almost all of the fanfic on the board and finally find the one i fall in love with. Your story and direction is so great and interesting. I love it soooooooooo much. Dani is definately a PERFECT SOUL MATE for Bett. So please, please don’t let anything happen to her. Thanks you so much for such a wonderfun story Rasperry. You’re the best!!!
*sniff* sigh *sniff* deeper sigh. Both Bette and Tina deserve their happiness. . .I just wish it was together. Keep posting, this is a very interesting story. I will read it even if B&T aren’t a couple (even though we all know they’re soul mates).
Thanks for the post Rasperry i’ve been looking forward to this. I’m hoping Tina will also find someone to love too.
Looking forward to everyones reaction to B&D news about the pregnancy, also does the gang know that B&D are married?
Please don’t leave us hanging too long to find out.
Thank you.
i´m very sorry..but is too painfull see whats going on here..bette and tina and all of us dont deserve this..i´m to angry and upset rigth now thank God the show is moving for other end