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Love Is A Fragile Thing 13
Alice its okay, Im finethere is no need for you to be worried about me okay? I am content with only me and Becky (Becky laughed) see? Shes happyBette paid off the house, she gave me the car and I have enough money saved so I dont have to work for a little while longeractually I have more money than I thought I had
Okay, but you are coming to poker night tomorrow right?
Yeah Ill bring my boring self over
Funny(she gave Becky a kiss) Okay kiddo I got to get going since mommy is being her stubborn self again
Well see you Al
She walked out the door and Tina looked at her watch.
I think its time we go to the park Beck
Aaaa! Parkparkpark Tina laughed at her excitement. Were going to be okay
Bette and Dani had moved in with each other and they were loving every moment of it. Of course they had their arguments but one or other always made up for it. They both confessed their strong love for each other not too long after that first show. Then a few months later they got married. A little too fast? It didnt seem that way to Bette, she knew that she was totally in love with Danishe knew she got a second chance at love and she was more than grateful for that.
One night they went out with some friends, Shay and Anna, at the Crawler Night club.
Im going to get the drinks while you guys find a seat
Okay Anna, well be right over there
They sat down.
Wow, its pretty crowded tonight
Hey Bette! The lady was sitting at the booth next to them. Bette waved.
Hey Carla! (Talking to Dani) Hey Dee, Im going to go talk to her really quick, Ive been trying to get her work to be shown at the gallery for a while now
But babe, were supposed to be relaxing, youve been working too hard
I know babe, just five minutes okay?
Five minutes
I love you babe, you are the best She gave her a smoldering kiss.
Theres more for later
Youve got four minutes Bette left the table.
Wow, that was some kiss
Dont even start Shay
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(53 votes, average: 3.57 out of 5)
no,no.no.thats just wrong!b&t belong together.excellent writing tho.
awesome really always lonin this story thanks
I like it still…love the B&D look. They seem really good together / match personalities both personally & professionally. I think you’re setting us up for Dani’s eventual demise so I’m kinda sad about that. Too much time has passed for B&T. They should just stay friends if anything.
oh no I’m not liking this at all. I don’t hate you raspberry but I’m going off you very quickly!!! You can’t really do this to us :(
I like this story a lot. You have made Bette’s moving on story into something good. Can’t tell much about Tina yet. Hopefully more to follow.
I love my B&T together but I’m starting to like my B&D so who knows. I can’t belive she is pg. I wonder what Kit is going to say.
I’m sad, also, at where this story is going. Bette split even though Tina sent out a clear signal to her w/the baby’s name. Now, Bette’s off making new babies with trophy wife. Like the writing, but direction leaves me sad.
I didn’t think I could be so happy, yet so sad, all in the same chapter. You have done that with this, so I say…very well done. Thank you for making nice and long. Love that!!
WOW that is Great.I like Danielle & Bette.but I LOVE BETTE & TINA, sTILL IT’S A GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE POST SOON
[“I already am oneâ€
“Kit, Dee is pregnant!â€
“What?!†]
LOL, Aww I love Bette and Dani! I hope there baby survives.
Wow. So Dani’s pregnant? I hope Bette is able to enjoy this pregnancy and give Dani her all. I think they make a great couple and I’m glad to see she’s moved on. It’ll be interesting to see if you tie Bette and Tina back together. Can’t wait to see where you are going with this. Please post soon. =)
it’s me again..please be kind to dani. i’m getting attached to her already.
This was lovely, but you’re breaking my TiBette heart!
Well, tina got what she wanted and now Bette has what she wanted. I am so glad Bette is happy with Dee but little sad that tina doesn’t have someone special in her life. I think you are doing an awesome job with this story.
Good chapter. This is going crazy, Bette move on and getting married and Dani’s pragnant, and Tina is alone with Becky, this is sad for Bette and Tina’s story. Post soon, thank you!
WOW…I haven’t read the previous chapters for this story, but WOW…that’s all I can say. Don’t worry, I’ll read it;P I am a B&T fan, but I am glad that both Bette and Tina found some form of happiness. Bette’s just a pimp momma huh…two babies, wow. I think she should be in Becky’s life as well though, she’s already missed two years, she can’t just totally ignore her child from her first marriage. All in all, totally kick arse writing Raspberry=) Can’t wait to see the girls reaction, especially Tina’s. Update soon please!!
Ok no, I’ve got this funny feeling in my tummy and I got it the second you said that Tina thought she should just move on and when Bette stayed in Sydney! BnT should be together, Dani is nice and all but just not what Bette needs, or mabye this is about what I need. Anyhoo just saying get Bette’s ass back to Tina and there little girl!
This is my first comment to a fanfic. I’ve been reading almost all of the fanfic on the board and finally find the one i fall in love with. Your story and direction is so great and interesting. I love it soooooooooo much. Dani is definately a PERFECT SOUL MATE for Bett. So please, please don’t let anything happen to her. Thanks you so much for such a wonderfun story Rasperry. You’re the best!!!
*sniff* sigh *sniff* deeper sigh. Both Bette and Tina deserve their happiness. . .I just wish it was together. Keep posting, this is a very interesting story. I will read it even if B&T aren’t a couple (even though we all know they’re soul mates).
Thanks for the post Rasperry i’ve been looking forward to this. I’m hoping Tina will also find someone to love too.
Looking forward to everyones reaction to B&D news about the pregnancy, also does the gang know that B&D are married?
Please don’t leave us hanging too long to find out.
Thank you.
i´m very sorry..but is too painfull see whats going on here..bette and tina and all of us dont deserve this..i´m to angry and upset rigth now thank God the show is moving for other end