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Love Is A Fragile Thing 14
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Sure, Im sure Dani wouldnt mind Dani looked at her with the mention of her name.
Okay great, give me a call again sometimeId like to catch up
Me toookay talk to you later
Okay bye
Bye Bette hung up the phone.
So what wouldnt I mind?
Bette walked over to her and sat down.
Baby, please dont be upset with me
What is it?
I was talking to Kit earlier and I told her about the baby
I thought we were going to tell her together?
Baby Im sorry but I was so excited and I just told her
What did she say?
Well she was shocked thats for surebut she managed to suck out all my happiness
Was she not happy about the baby? Dani began fearing the worst.
Oh she was happybut
But what?
Well she was just kind of upset with me because I have a baby on the way yet I still havent seen Becky.
What? I thought Tina didnt want you to see her
Dee, thats partly trueI meanshe didnt want me to see thembut my friends know me, they thought that I would have at least tried to see her no matter whatbutthere was somethingI dont know what it wasI just felt that I finally got it, you know, like all that time I was trying to get her back but she didnt want thatsoI finally listenedI finally got itso I stopped tryingbut when Kit mentioned Beckyall that guilt came backyou knowevery time I look at her picture I feel guilty.
Dani grabbed her hand and kissed it.
So what are you planning on doing?
Well I was thinking that the both of us go to L.A., tell the girls about the baby, and then go see my daughter
L.A.?
Yeah
Are you sure? I mean its been over two years since youve been back
YeahIm sure
And what about Tina? She wasnt all that happy to meet me the last time.
You dont have to worry about that
Why?
Bette was trying to think how she should tell her that she talked to Tina. Dani noticed Bettes hesitation to say anything else.
Bette, you look a little confusedis there something else you need to talk to me about?
Bette looked down and began to find her hands more appealing than the intense stare Dani was giving her.
Baby, please dont tell me you already told mom
That got her attention.
Dee, of course not!
Then what?!
Bette took a deep breath
OkayI uhhhI I
Bette youre stuttering
Just ***** say it!
As fast as she could without a pause
Okay I talked to Tina and I told her about the baby!
TBC..
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i dont know.. but Tina begged to Bette not to leave, she names the baby with her name and last name, she say sorry so many times even after Bettes betrayel, she left Helena..what more gestures Bette needed to came back and be with her and her child?and what kind of mother left her child for 2 years and now she suddenly wants to be a mother?i´m end now i´m to angry..Bette and Tina deserve to be together but in your story i dont know how
yeah, if i were tina, i certainly wouldn’t be so understanding. 2 years is long time to be away and then suddenly decide to be a parent. anyway, great story!
wow, arent u getting tired of everyone saying “Wow…ok I like your story but you really need to change the pairing” lol. I mean there are at least 50 Bette Tina stories on here and everyone is pissed that yours isnt. Whatever, I love it. I hope u dont do anything drastic just to please the masses
I’m with moi, hunty and others. Bette doesn’t deserve to be in Becky’s life.
Ok I agree hunty38 that Bette has been a selfish ass but I also angelak’s idea about Dani going into a jealous rage! Great Post!
Well I agree with angelak, they should be together and happy again. Can’t wait to see what you coming up with the story. Thank you!
Bette should feel guilty about not seeing Becky. Why would Tina name her after Bette and everyone considers her Bette’s daughter, and Bette doesn’t even attempt to see her or even communicate with Tina. If I were Tina I wouldn’t be that understanding, Bette hasn’t wanted anything to do with them and now she’s having her own family she wants to know her daughter. Tina should have just raised Becky as just hers and forgot about Bette like Bette did them.
OK…..I have a solution – Dani goes into a huge jealous rage, and is contunually horrible about Tina. Bette sees a completely different side of her and decides she doesn’t like it so she goes to LA on her own and falls in love with Tina all over again and it all ends happily ever after. You could redeem yourself here Rasp and make us all happy again :)))
If i were Tina i would blow Bette off totally. She has’nt shown any interest whatsover in Becky,Bette does,nt deserve to be let in to Becky’s life, she’s a selfish ass,and she should feel guilty, i’m not happy with Bette, she seems to want all her own way.I can’t believe how understanding Tina is, hope she realises she has been better off without Bette, and i hope Bette finds herself still in love with Tina, it’d serve her right.Now i’ve i’d sid that, great story, love it, don’t take so long next time.
somethings wrong there is no post
I’m so glad you’re back!!!! I’ve been waiting for soooooooo long. thanks for another great chapter. Bette and Dani are so happy together, please don’t break them up. Bette can still support and care about Becky and Tina, but no more love between them. Let Bette moves on and just be a friend to Tina. I can’t wait for another chapter!!!!
I’m totally pissed at Bette. I agree with Hunty38, fuck Bette, Tina and Becky are fine without her. But I do love Angelak’s idea. I really hope they both see each other and this time Tina seduces the beautiful, married woman, instead of Bette seducing the straight girl. I love this story. Please dont keep us waiting.
I am so happy to see that you are back! Ok girl…since school is over, I except wonderful chapters, just like this one…as often as possible!!! Love this story!!!
you say that you are a T B fan but i think i cant see how can you fix this..this is so wrong made two people that means to be together fall apart like this
i honestly don’t know what to say…except maybe that this is a B & T story, so i assume you know what you’re dealing here with! i respect your ideas but we don’t need this now, what we need is something we can hold on to until S3 so pleasssseeee be kind and bring them back together with Becky!
Thank god your back.
Like the others i don’t know how you are going to get B&T back together if that is your intention. The phone call was a long time coming i can understand why Bette didn’t call when you consider how they parted.. but to not have bothered about Becky until now is kinda sad..
Tina has accepted that Bette has moved on, so why can’t she move on with someone else to.
Looking forward to next update, please don’t leave us hanging for too long.
Thanks Rasperry.
Hey Raspberry thank you where did you been I just worried about you LOL I just kidding thank God you’re back, Thank you I love this Story and you did a great Awesome Amazing story Anyway Please don’t take so long to post it again PLEASE.
I don’t see how B&T can get back together without a ‘tragic death’ of the Dani variety. She doesn’t deserve that but…
I guess people go off and start a new life everyday. I was pissed that Bette went off and left her child, but I feel better about it with this phone call.
Tina is certainly forgiving. She understands Bette better than most and loves her unconditionally, I suspect.
Thanks for coming back to this story!
Perhaps, it’ll be time and good that Tina meets someone else who will love her sincerily and will full accept Becky.
I cant believe quite how determined everyone is about this story, its amazing what you have done to us all!! It is a really good story and you take it where it needs to go…. I suppose we just wait and see, but not wait too long…. ;-)
I love this story…And I guess I’m in the small “Bette shouldn’t feel guilty” camp. Tina told her she didn’t want her in their lives. Bette had been groveling for months and finally moved on. The minute she “looked” like she was moving on, Tina threw a little jealous tantrum. That all seems like a bunch of headgames to me and Bette just took herself out of the game. I think Tina has been very passive agressive with this whole thing. Is Bette supposed to read her mind and assume that Tina would really want her in their lives and not play games again? Could Bette have fought to see Becky and be in their lives? Absoluely. But in her mind, would that have been good for Tina? Probably not. So, she did what she could to save her sanity and not cause any more pain. Naming the baby after Bette…again, passive aggressive. If you want Bette there, tell her that. Don’t drop hints or name babies. However, I can understand that Bette would feel guilty because she holds herself in such high regard and feels she has failed.
I can’t believe I went into such a long explanation on a fan fic based on fictional characters. See the emotion you provoke?! Great writing. And great ability to capture the essence of the characters. Can’t wait to see dani’s reaction and where your B&T luvin’ heart takes the story!
I love this story…I am getting a little worried that something bad is going to happen to Dani…That’s what will bring Bette & Tina together..very excited for the next chapter..PLEASE POST SOON..