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Love Is A Fragile Thing 25
‘I’m so tired, so tired,’ she says to herself while she allows the sweat to drip off the side of her face and gets ready for the next serve from her opponent, Jackie Schumacher.
Schumacher, rank 11 in the world, has been playing at the top of her game at this invitation. Actually they both have, how do you expect they both made it the finals? Jackie gets ready, the ball in her left hand, the racket in her right, and then she serves. Dana smacks the ball back and her opponent rushes to the other side of the court to hit the ball right back and Dana is unable to get it.
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“She sure does George. If she continues to play like that, I’m not sure if she’ll be able to win this.”
“I agree Ann, Schumacher is not letting up. People have been saying this is a ‘David & Goliath’ rematch.”
“I don’t know about that, but if that’s the case we are just going to have to wait and see if David can actually win this time.”
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UP IN THE STANDS
“Mommy?”
“Yes, sweetie?”
“Auntie Dana looks really tired.”
“I know.”
“Is she losing?”
“Not quite.”
The girls continue watching the match, but Tina couldn’t help looking over at the vacant seat next to Bette. She was curious and deep down she could feel that small twinge of jealousy, thinking that seat was saved for a surprise special someone in her life. Tina wasn’t the only one with curiosity
Kelly whispers in her ear
“Babe?”
“Yeah?”
“Is Bette seeing someone?”
“I don’t know.”
“Well who is that seat for?”
“I don’t know,” she said with a little annoyance in her voice.
THE ROW RIGHT BELOW THEM
Shane was watching the match and whispers to Missy.
“Hey Miss.”
“Yeah.”
“Is Bette seeing anyone?”
“No, if you’re talking about that empty seat she just said it was for a friend. Why?”
“Just asking.”
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“I don’t know Ann,
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oh please post soon…… love your story……. would love to see things heat up!!!!!!
I am so happy to see you back with this story!!! I know it is hard to work your way through writers block, but you did a wonderful job with this chapter. You haven’t posted for months, and I didn’t even have to go back and read previous chapters…I knew exactly what was going on…so please, please continue with this wonderful story. Thanks!!!
Thanks you so much for this chapter,Your story is like an old favorite,you dont forget it Bette and Tina are still so in love. I know that life and things gets in your way but so loved this story. Thanks and a million star for you.
I’m one of the silent readers of fanfic and have never posted a comment before, but I just love this story and felt compelled to tell you so that hopefully you will continue with it. I’ve definitely missed your updates, please post soon.
Coming out of lurking. Thanks so much for posting this chapter. I love this story and really missed it. It’s a great read and I look forward to your next post!
Okay, you got me. I’ve been reading stories here since almost the very beginning and never commented until now. The fear of not knowing how this one ends has finally motivated me to comment. You HAVE to continue it! I’ve been waiting/looking for a new chapter every day since the previous chapter. I really love it and you must post again soon.
i really, really love this story.. please, please post again..
Great to see that you posted and don’t keep us waiting to long next time and post soon.
Where on God’s little green Earth have you been? Do you know how much I’ve missed this story? I’m beginning to wonder if we readers are wearing out our fabulous writers?I’m really hooked on this story, I think it’s a great spin on Bette and Tina; not to mention I’m enjoying the new characters you’ve introduced. Please post again soon! We hate waiting for a good story line.
Long time no see Ras and this is good chapter and a little sad. Hope Bette and Tina have a little talk. OK post soon please, thanks!