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    Love Is A Fragile Thing 25

    Story written on January 31, 2006 by raspberry.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=59353
    Author Notes:

    About Dana some Bette. (I recommend you read the other chapters first in order to understand what’s going on here)

     

    Schumacher saw the ball coming and hit inside the court faster than she blinked. Her feet stood in the same spot as if they were filled with lead. “ACE!” Everyone clapped their hands. Dana pumped her fist and at that moment she knew her game was coming back.

     

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    SPORTS BROADCASTERS

     

    “Whoa! Where did that come from?”

     

    “I don’t know, did someone get how fast that ball flew?”

     

    They both look at the monitor. “110mph?! I think Schumacher better be ready for Fairbanks because I think she’s finally ready to play.”

     

    “I agree. Did you see the look on Schumacher’s face? She sure didn’t see that one coming.”

     

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    IN THE STANDS

     

    “See? I told you.” Bette smiles her fabulous smile.

     

    Lara smiles back and claps her hands.

     

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    AN HOUR LATER

     

    “Good game Fairbanks, you got my respect.”

     

    They both shake hands.

     

    Trying to keep her excitement in check she says, “Thanks Schumacher that was a good game.”

     

    ****REWIND TO THE LAST COUPLE OF SERVES****

     

    SPORTS BROADCASTERS

     

    “This has been a very close match. Now remember folks this could be Schumacher’s last serve if Fairbanks can’t get this serve. Okay now here we go. Schumacher is setting up.”

     

    DOWN ON THE COURT

     

    SCUMACHER bounced the ball a few times, throws it up and smacks it as hard as she can and it hits the net. She shakes it off and wipes the sweat off her forehead. She receives another ball, bounces it off her racket, and serves. This time the ball goes over and meets Dana’s racket and its hit back over. Schumacher runs to the other side and hits the ball back with a back hand. There was no way Dana was going to let this ball get passed her. This continues for a couple more moments and Schumacher decided that she has had enough and hits it as hard as she can without really trying to aim for a certain spot to hit. Dana noticed the ball was a little high and she was sure that the ball was going to hit out of bounds. As she turned to let the ball meet the ground she saw that it was out. She pumped her fists in excitement but it was crushed when she heard the line umpire say, “IN!” and she motioned both of her hands forward. Some fans stood in excitement while others stood with confusion and disappointment.

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    2. I am so happy to see you back with this story!!! I know it is hard to work your way through writers block, but you did a wonderful job with this chapter. You haven’t posted for months, and I didn’t even have to go back and read previous chapters…I knew exactly what was going on…so please, please continue with this wonderful story. Thanks!!!

    3. Thanks you so much for this chapter,Your story is like an old favorite,you dont forget it Bette and Tina are still so in love. I know that life and things gets in your way but so loved this story. Thanks and a million star for you.

    4. I’m one of the silent readers of fanfic and have never posted a comment before, but I just love this story and felt compelled to tell you so that hopefully you will continue with it. I’ve definitely missed your updates, please post soon.

    5. Coming out of lurking. Thanks so much for posting this chapter. I love this story and really missed it. It’s a great read and I look forward to your next post!

    6. Okay, you got me. I’ve been reading stories here since almost the very beginning and never commented until now. The fear of not knowing how this one ends has finally motivated me to comment. You HAVE to continue it! I’ve been waiting/looking for a new chapter every day since the previous chapter. I really love it and you must post again soon.

    9. Where on God’s little green Earth have you been? Do you know how much I’ve missed this story? I’m beginning to wonder if we readers are wearing out our fabulous writers?I’m really hooked on this story, I think it’s a great spin on Bette and Tina; not to mention I’m enjoying the new characters you’ve introduced. Please post again soon! We hate waiting for a good story line.

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