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Love Revisted – Coming Home Part 70
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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 70
Previously
Oh, she is a formidable opponent, but the poor dear has some major fighting flaws – she’s got a heart, she’s got compassion, she cares, she even loves.
You may have won the small battles with these attributes – but, Bette Porter, you will not win the war.
They were quiet on the way home from Susan’s. Bette reached over a couple times just to touch Tina.
Bette had the furrowed brow and Tina could just picture the internal debating team of Porter vs. Porter.
“Want to talk about it, babe?”
“Um? Just tossing a few things around in my head, T. Is it that obvious?”
“You are hardly as inscrutable as you may think, Bette Porter, certainly not to me. Anything you want to toss my way for some feedback?”
“I’ve had a feeling lately that I’m in the tiny rowboat far from shore and the sharks are circlingwaiting.”
“The sharks being?”
“T, you know who they are.”
“But you’re thinking there’s others besides Helena and Candace?”
“Something’s nagging me about Susan, T. I can’t help it.”
“Know what I think?”
“What?”
“I think because Susan is the new kid on the block and because you thought she might have been ogling me, you’re still extremely cautious about her. We don’t have any frame of reference for her.”
“Maybe, T.”
“The important thing for you to remember, baby, is it doesn’t matter what
“They want to get even, T.”
Tina gave Bette’s hand a squeeze. “We won’t let them.”
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“Will she ever be out of our lives?…”
Is it evil of me to hope not… at least in this story? ;-)
Great chapter arceextl, but I wished that Tina would just hald off and hit Helena herself (Now that’s a way to send a message.). I also hope that Alice finally puts her ever present NOSEYNESS to some GOOD use and find out that Helena owns Susan house. To answer your question snQQpy, Helena wants Tina back for 2 reasons; to hurt Bette and for the pleasure of dumping Tina and therefore regaining her pride. Yes, she is a sick and screwed up person.
Alice might be a snoop. Always trying to dig up dirt, and wanting to know every ones business. She will get Susan and Helene first. Tina is not play patty cake with Helene, Helene hasn’t see the worse in Tina,just sweetness. Tina will hurt her bad if the family get and grief for her. My Bet is on Alice for the dirt.with Bette a close second. Bette knows to many people in a lot of towns. thanks
i hope Bette find out that Susan is as crazy as Helena..and good job Tina dont be afraid of HELLena..cant wait for next chapter post soon thanks
I love the drama and I for one can’t wait to see what Helena has in store for Tina. Is that twisted? lol. I am awaiting the next chapter.
RC…what DRAMA!! LOL. I don’t think Al’s done with Susan yet. Really like that Bette is still on alert with Susan…hope she does some investigating also. Hells is such a B@$%h…I glad Tina stood up to her, but Hells is just psycho. After all this time..it would be so funny if it was Peggy who brought down Hells. What a grand slap in the face would that be to Hells…;-) RC..thanks for the chapter, please do continue. Love that Bette has two girls who love to play with her hair. ;-)
Alice, Bette, go with your instincts, cos trouble is brewing. I know Alice won’t let up lets hope Bette doesn’t and that they know what they need to before its too late. Then lets be done with one Ms. Helena once and for all. Susan, she’s being used, but she still deserves her ass kicked. Great update.
such a good chappy. playing with bettes hair. aaawwwww. melted my heart. love the two ways with both moms and angie. just sweet.
really not wanting hellno even mentioned anymore. she so pisses me off. i think tina would love to do some harm to her.
cant wait for more drama. jk. but i know youll bring it anywho. thanks rc
damn HellLena.. yucks!!!
I do so want to get even for the time she screamed Bette’s name when I was making love to her – the time? It was more than one time. I don’t even think she realized it, but it doesn’t matter whether she did or not because I knew Bette Porter was in bed with us from the beginning.
(gasp) If Helena feels like this, then why in the hell is she so determined to have Tina back?
Tina’s expression became dark. Her eyes narrowed. Even Helena could see a coldness in her expression and anger to her voice. This was not the face or words of everyone’s sweet Tina.
I love this Tina. Its not often she comes out to play, but when she does….watch out!
i beleive that alice will come to the rescue and expose susan and helena. love this firey tina watch out for the mamma tiger. B&T lovin coming up ooohhh cant wait. have a great day arceextl
Here’s hoping that Alice and Bette discover something about Helena nd Susan before it is too late. However, I believe that Tina will become Helena’s worse nightmare if she tries to hurt Tina or get her to her home again.
Ah, if only Bette had looked out the window at that moment. I’d have to say she may have been arrested for beating the living shit out of Helena. Which would have truly made my day.
I think a night away for our lovely lesbain couple is a perfect idea. However, what would happen if the trio of H/C/S should step in to mess w/ their family while their away?
Great post, please write soon.
Ugh why does Helena have to ruin good moments? I love their conversations with Angelica. Sooo adorable! The hair thing was also incredibly sweet, rc. Great job!!
would have loved to see tina bitch slap the bitch… we know alice and shane to the rescue… love this…please continue
Arce,
A good chapter that felt a bit like a filler before the next big twist of the knife. Still not convinced of Susan’s part in all of HellNo’s plans.
I am sure that P.I. Pieszecki will stay on this hunt like a hound after a fox. There is more to this situation and I know that you will reveal it at an appropriate time. Goodie, goodie, gum drops.
This was a prime example of the two disparate side to Tina: with Bette and Angelica we saw the tender, earth mother, supporter then witnessed a total 180 swing as the lioness and family protector appeared in HellNo’s presence.
Thank you for this tremendous and torturous tale.
I will be here waiting and watching for your next instalment.
Much thanks,
Your Loyal Fan.
To add on to Dainty’s thought, I hope that both Bette and Alice get some dirt on miss susan and create their own plan of entrapment. This way, they can get the police involved and ensure the end of Helena and her hussies!
Find the scent Alice..We know you can do it…Fantastic Chapter..thanks and have a GREAT DAY…