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    Love Revisted – Coming Home Part 70

    Story written on September 22, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Al visits the search engine;Tina & Angelica visit Bette; Helena visits Tina; Tina pissed? I’d step back, if I were you, Helena…

    “Susan LaFay” came up with a reference to her company, nothing else.

     

    Well, Susan wasn’t making it up.  When she clicked on the link for LaFay Landscaping, it was redirected to Callahan Brothers Landscaping.  They were located in Short Hills, New Jersey.  From what Alice could find out Short Hills was a pretty wealthy part of New Jersey.

     

    That’s all she could find out about LaFay Landscaping.  All right, so maybe she is just starting anew.  She’s one good-looking woman so she shouldn’t have a problem finding someone to wrap that muscular body around either – yeah, so what, I noticed her body – I’m a snoop, I’m not a blind snoop.

     

    UmmAl mused.I’m not done with this yet. 

     

     

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    So I ask you, you big know-it-all out there, am I going to feel better once this is done?  Why the ***** should I answer you, you don’t believe in anything ‘out here’ anyway.  Okay, I’ll handle both sides of this conversation- it’s easier and I get the answers I want.   Nothing’s going to change the past –  Check.  Nothing’s going to make her come back to me for real – Check.  Even if by magic she did come back for real, who’s to say it would be any different – Check.  So nothing changes whether I do this or not – oh wait, something does change if I do this.  She gets to feel some measure of pain, and that makes me feel better just thinking about it.

     

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    “James, I really need some alone time.  No calls, no interruptions for at least an hour.”

     

    “How about Franklin?”

     

    “He can wait, too.”

     

    “Okay, boss.”

     

     

    Tina was on her way back from the center and decided to pay Bette an unannounced visit.

     

    “How about we stop in and see mama Bette, Angelica?  Yay, I like that!  She’ll be surprised to see us.  Yes, she will.  I hope that dragon lady isn’t thereI don’t want to see her.  Neither do I, Angelica.  We’ll just ignore her.  I could spit up on her, mommy.  Want me to do that?  As much as I’d like that, Angelica, that would mean she’d have to be holding you so we’ll just stick to ignoring her.”  You’re getting really good at this two way conversation, mommy T!

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    2. Great chapter arceextl, but I wished that Tina would just hald off and hit Helena herself (Now that’s a way to send a message.). I also hope that Alice finally puts her ever present NOSEYNESS to some GOOD use and find out that Helena owns Susan house. To answer your question snQQpy, Helena wants Tina back for 2 reasons; to hurt Bette and for the pleasure of dumping Tina and therefore regaining her pride. Yes, she is a sick and screwed up person.

    3. Alice might be a snoop. Always trying to dig up dirt, and wanting to know every ones business. She will get Susan and Helene first. Tina is not play patty cake with Helene, Helene hasn’t see the worse in Tina,just sweetness. Tina will hurt her bad if the family get and grief for her. My Bet is on Alice for the dirt.with Bette a close second. Bette knows to many people in a lot of towns. thanks

    6. RC…what DRAMA!! LOL. I don’t think Al’s done with Susan yet. Really like that Bette is still on alert with Susan…hope she does some investigating also. Hells is such a B@$%h…I glad Tina stood up to her, but Hells is just psycho. After all this time..it would be so funny if it was Peggy who brought down Hells. What a grand slap in the face would that be to Hells…;-) RC..thanks for the chapter, please do continue. Love that Bette has two girls who love to play with her hair. ;-)

    7. Alice, Bette, go with your instincts, cos trouble is brewing. I know Alice won’t let up lets hope Bette doesn’t and that they know what they need to before its too late. Then lets be done with one Ms. Helena once and for all. Susan, she’s being used, but she still deserves her ass kicked. Great update.

    8. such a good chappy. playing with bettes hair. aaawwwww. melted my heart. love the two ways with both moms and angie. just sweet.

      really not wanting hellno even mentioned anymore. she so pisses me off. i think tina would love to do some harm to her.

      cant wait for more drama. jk. but i know youll bring it anywho. thanks rc

    10. I do so want to get even for the time she screamed Bette’s name when I was making love to her – the time? It was more than one time. I don’t even think she realized it, but it doesn’t matter whether she did or not because I knew Bette Porter was in bed with us from the beginning.
      (gasp) If Helena feels like this, then why in the hell is she so determined to have Tina back?

      Tina’s expression became dark. Her eyes narrowed. Even Helena could see a coldness in her expression and anger to her voice. This was not the face or words of everyone’s sweet Tina.
      I love this Tina. Its not often she comes out to play, but when she does….watch out!

    11. i beleive that alice will come to the rescue and expose susan and helena. love this firey tina watch out for the mamma tiger. B&T lovin coming up ooohhh cant wait. have a great day arceextl

    12. Here’s hoping that Alice and Bette discover something about Helena nd Susan before it is too late. However, I believe that Tina will become Helena’s worse nightmare if she tries to hurt Tina or get her to her home again.

    13. Ah, if only Bette had looked out the window at that moment. I’d have to say she may have been arrested for beating the living shit out of Helena. Which would have truly made my day.

      I think a night away for our lovely lesbain couple is a perfect idea. However, what would happen if the trio of H/C/S should step in to mess w/ their family while their away?

      Great post, please write soon.

    14. Ugh why does Helena have to ruin good moments? I love their conversations with Angelica. Sooo adorable! The hair thing was also incredibly sweet, rc. Great job!!

    16. Arce,

      A good chapter that felt a bit like a filler before the next big twist of the knife. Still not convinced of Susan’s part in all of HellNo’s plans.

      I am sure that P.I. Pieszecki will stay on this hunt like a hound after a fox. There is more to this situation and I know that you will reveal it at an appropriate time. Goodie, goodie, gum drops.

      This was a prime example of the two disparate side to Tina: with Bette and Angelica we saw the tender, earth mother, supporter then witnessed a total 180 swing as the lioness and family protector appeared in HellNo’s presence.

      Thank you for this tremendous and torturous tale.

      I will be here waiting and watching for your next instalment.

      Much thanks,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    17. To add on to Dainty’s thought, I hope that both Bette and Alice get some dirt on miss susan and create their own plan of entrapment. This way, they can get the police involved and ensure the end of Helena and her hussies!

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