Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
Lover in the Dark: Chapter 5
Login to add story to favorites
“Yes that’s right”
Randall walked towards the blonde, hugged her, kissed her on the cheek and whispered “I’m so glad to be here tonight with you and your family babe…”
Terion and Jean were just looking at the “couple” both smiling
Tina smiled “I’m glad that you are here too”
+++
“Okay we can only watch one movie then we’ll off to bed is that a deal?”
“Deal!” Molly and Angelica answered at the same time
Bette, Molly and Angelica just finished dinner and all three were now in the entertainment room in front of the big HDTV choosing which movie they want to watch
“Good now which movie are we going to watch?”
“Frozen! Frozen! Frozen!” the little girl chanted
Bette groaned “Frozen again?”
“Yup it’s my favorite movie in the whole wide world!” Angelica said then nodded
“But you’ve watched it a million times already can we watch something else Boo?”
“Nope”
“Oh c’mon baby?”
Molly covered her mouth to hide her laugh
“Please?” Bette said showing her puppy eyes
Angelica giggled “Okay mommy”
Bette smiled “Really?”
“Yup!”
“Can I choose?” Bette asked
“Nope”
The brunette sighed “Okay good enough you can choose any other movie you want but Frozen”
“Deal!” Angelica answered
“So?”
Angelica held her chin thinking real hard which movie to watch “Oh I know!”
“What?” Bette and Molly asked
“How about, Despicable Me?”
Bette smiled “Oh yea I like that, love the Minions”
Molly was the one who put the movie into the DVD player and in just a few minutes everyone was silent and all eyes were fixed on the big television.
+++
“I have to say this is world class cooking, I feel that I’m eating in a restaurant with Michelin stars!”
Randall had so many traits and one of them was his undeniable charm and it was working tremendously well on the old couple
Terion blushed while Jean caressed her husband’s back
“I totally agree, my husband is gifted not only in the courtroom but also in the kitchen” Jean said proudly
“I really enjoyed it, thank you!” he beamed
“You’re most welcome and you can come here anytime you want” Terion stated
Tina just remained silent looking at the interaction in front of her
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Had a little problem with the chapter title so did a quick editing but hey a new chapter is now posted so hope you ladies enjoy!(-; Happy Saturday!!!
Great update. Randall is persistent as a a puppy. Seems to be heating up between Tina and Bette. Looking forward to the next chapter. I am sure Tina will be more than pleased w/Bette’s body.
Randall is an ass and he need to be gone and Kelly too. Now let’s see some of Bette and Tina time. Please post more, thanks
The relationship builds a bit more each time, but it’s such a long wait until next weekend! Thanks for posting!
Phacey, you are a master of the slow burn! Awaiting you next update.
Now Phacey, first off-thank you for updating.
Second-that was so NOT a nice place to stop.
Is Randall looking to ask for Tina’s hand in marriage? Yuck.
Tina is in the proverbial closet, kind of surprised considering her
self confidence.
I didn’t like how she told Bette she cannot communicate with Shane,
nor how easily Bette agreed to it. I hope that is “fixed” in coming chapters.
Hopefully Randall is kicked to the curb in the next update, he is beginning
to sound suspicious….
Thank you again for a FAB update and I do look forward to another…..VERY VERY SOON.
All week I could not wait for the next chapter. I loved it!
I saw the last sentence, just shouted: NO!!! So, you could not do this to us for a week : P
Kelly was the usual “I’m better than anyone else” form.
I knew that dinner will not be good, it was incredibly sneaky and calculating from Him!
I simply can not understand Tina’s behavior is so inconsistent with her personality.
Is that Tina did not want to disappoint her parents, for me, it’s not a good enough reason not to tell Randall: “crossed a line”. But I’m sure, are you going to explain why so happens :-)
(but if, Tina goes on vacation with him, I became disillusioned) :-D
I’m curious, you as to bring together the first encounter? whether in a lake house where Tina fantasy?
can not be earlier than one week to the next chapter? please? :-)
I’m been waiting for your next update and you did not disappoint.For a woman of power, Tina does not seem to have control of her personal life. She is 34 years old but still answers to her parents like a teenager.She allows herself to manipulated by Kelly(what a b*tch), Randall and her parents. I think that’s why she has this arrangement with Bette. She can control her life with Bette( she thinks) and keep that life separate from her real world. She has to know what Randall wants from her and she is putting her head in the sand to appease her parents. The political contacts are slimy at best and their will be fallout from those relationships. I am torn about her “arrangement” with Bette. She knows Bette has a small child so for her to call her out in the middle of the night is callous at best. Using her power in this manner is demeaning and makes her less than kind in my book. Keep posting this great story. We will agree to disagree. lol
Oh Phacey you are so mean to stop there! ;-) I thought for sure that Randall was going to propose in front of Tina’s parents. He sure knows how to play Tina in front of her parents so she can’t say no. I can’t wait for her to dump him. Kelly is a self important cheater and I hope she gets caught. I am glad that Bette is warming to the idea of being intimate with Tina. How could Tina ever be disappointed in Bette’s looks? Looking forward to your next update!
OMG!!!! You’re killing me!!!! ;)
I read the chapter again and I have to say a couple of things start to become clear.
I could not place why Tina’s opposite behavior. In business and work, Tina firm, strong independent woman. but in the personal life she was manipulated and influenced. she let herself be influenced by the parents’s, Randall’s, even Kelly.
I agree, this is the biggest point in the contract with Bette: so, in her personal life Tina is in control. Tina has power over Bette, she can not say no to her,
so she called Bette in the middle of the night. (if only because of curiosity: what kind of sex with a woman? Tina would anyone received one night, instead of Tina guessed this contract …)
I’m wondering what else is in the background? :-) I love it!
I hope you post really soon I have been waiting on this moment
Very interesting, exciting
Fabulous Phasey, thank you very much
I am tormented with what may come.
Good to see Bette thinking about Tina at home.
It is a very bad time forTina, complications at work and in their relationships.
Will end with Randall or will not be so easy?
Bette attend? What kind of Tina find?
The comments you leave are very disturbing.
I’ve always been a silent reader, is difficult to write in English, I would like to comment more.
Damn, I wanted the chapter to continue. Loved it.
Hi,
Another great one! I can’t stand Randall! I knew he was up to no good! Tina needs to put on her big girls panties and kick Kelly and Randall sorry asses to the curb. I love how Bette is thinking about what Tina will think of her body. Tina shouldn’t have told Bette that she can’t be friends with Shane. Shane will be the one to give Bette tips on how to please Tina in bed. Another week to wait before your next post. Like Florida Evans said on Good Times “damn, damn, damn”! Sitting on pins and needles. PPS
What a cruel place to end the chapter! Maybe we can get another updates sooner then next week???
Kelly is a terrible friend, we need to get ride of her…. Didn’t like the fact that Tina asked Bette not to be friends with Shane but I suppose that will change…Tottaly makes sense that Tina would seek out someone she could have power and control over since her personal life with her family, friends and Randall, lacks it big time…Thanks for sharing , can’t wait for the next chapter!
Oh what a tease! I like it that not only does Bette is now curious about being with another woman i think shes starting to feel something for Tina too. Randall and Kelly need to go away and you my dear needs to post another chapter asap for leaving us with a cliffhanger(-:Great update and thanks for sharing my friend!
Looking forward to the next chapter.thank you for the update.PPS
I wanted to wait until I was done catching up before commenting so here I am, caught up at last :] One thing I enjoy about reading a new story is having the ability to read chapters back to back. I was hooked from the beginning, I’m really enjoying this story. Unfortunately now I’m stuck in the same boat as everyone else, waiting for your next chapter. I can’t wait, keep ’em coming !
HI,
I thought I would just check in to see if you posted! Wishful thinking! LOL! See you on Saturday! Be blessed!
what a chapter. i really love your stories. i am bit concerned though with the “breaking a big time politician’s heart” thing that is waiting to happen. either way. bring it on. more please. :))
Tina has too much to handle. Can’t wait for the next lovely chapter. Thank you.
Hello, its Friday night! Only a few more hours until the post. I hope and pray! Got a 8 am meeting but I will be reading ASAP
Oh yeah its about to get good,,”Do you want to build a snowmannnn” (song from the movie Frozen) omg Angie Frozen is one of my favorite cartoon movies too and im a grown woman so I feel you on that lol…ok please tell Bette and Tina about to hook im getting too excited! Wow another brilliant chapter