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Lover in the Dark: Chapter 4
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Chapter 4
“Waiting for someone?”
“Huh?” Bette turned to James who was sipping on his coffee while his feet were on top of his table
“I said, are you waiting for someone?”
“Nope, why?”
“Well you keep on looking at the elevator door, so are you waiting for someone or are you waiting for Ms. Kennard?”
It was already ten in the morning but Tina hadn’t arrived yet which was something unusual since the blonde hated being late and the caramel skinned beauty couldn’t help but wonder why
“No I’m not waiting for someone or Ms. Kennard…I’m just looking at that painting over there…”she lied; well partly she lied because she was looking back and forth the elevator and the painting
James turned his gaze to the work of art hanging on the wall “Beautiful right?”
It was a landscape painting showcasing a little boy sitting on a dock looking at the beautiful sunset “Yeah, you know what it’s called?” asked Bette
“Colors of the Memories”
“You know who made it?”
“Yup”
“Who?”
“Anonymous” James chuckled
“Haha very funny Mr. Little!”
James laughed “But it’s true you won’t see any signature on the painting”
“Hmm”
James removed his feet from the table and turned his attention to his computer “Anyway I forgot to tell you Ms. Kennard will be here probably after lunch…”
“Ok”
“She’s not feeling well”
“Oh that’s too bad” Bette said while arranging some paper works
“Migraine”
“Shouldn’t it be better if she will just stay at home instead of going to work especially if she’s not feeling well, she’s the boss anyway?”
“If I’m the owner of this firm I would gladly stay at home, sit my ass on the couch and watch football all day long with a pizza and a beer but unfortunately I’m not and our boss in case you don’t know is a workaholic, not seeing her at the office is very rare and it only happens when there’s an emergency” James said while his eyes still on the computer
“Good to know”
“Hey come here Bette, I want you to see this”
Bette moved her chair beside James “Okay do you see those two files?”
The brunette nodded
“In file number 1 you will see all the previous closed cases and law suits that Kennard Law Firm handled in the past…”
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And oh one more thing… I work in a bank so I don’t know anything about law firms, so please excuse any errors that you may see and if you do, just let me know privately, LoL! Songs used are just borrowed and no copyright infringement intended (-;
I feel like diving in the lake right now..
Wow, great update! I like the fact that Bette is reaching out to Molly to help her improve her life by sharing her good fortune. Ironically Molly wants to model her life after Bette’s. She does not know the personal deal that Bette has used to get a step up in life. It seems that business deal between she and Tina may cause problems in Tina’s life. I think Tim’s bitterness and Randall political causes are going to make Tina’s life very difficult. Randall have apparently talked to her parents about getting married and has enlisted their help to pop the question. Tina needs to end things with Randall and realize that she wants more than just sex with Bette. Please continue to post. Thank you
You’re killing me here!!! ;)
Hi, this was the bomb! You know I love this story. I think Tim will be trouble also once Tina break it off with Randall. I also think the parents helped him and he’s going to ask the question at the dinner. Oh well! Our ladies will stand strong together. I was really touched when Bette asked Molly to move in. I feel we all should reach back and help someone when we get a blessing. Those songs fitted the scene wonderful. You are so great at picking them. I hope you continue to do that when they are alone in her office. Please let the first time they make love be at the lake house. Can’t wait until the next post. I know it want be until at least next Saturday. Will be waiting. Thanks again and PPS.
I was looking forward to the next chapter , and I think of the following is likely to be a week :-( I am sad. :-)
I know I said: I love this story! so fascinate me when I read.
The scene between Tina and Randall, it was strange to me ,
that is so inconsistent with Tina’s personality ( she is a strong, independent, confident and strong woman ) and yet she behaved meekly . I understand that she enjoys being together with him, but if Tina have never let him into her bed and he uninvited appeared on the flat? now,why ?
(especially, if Tina angry about the rumors their marriage )
Randall is a manipulative person and I feel he is very dangerous . Tina have to yet break up with him before dinner because it will be Randall and Tina’s parents join forces, so she will not have a chance.
The sexual tension was again high in between. It seems to Bette getting curious rather than afraid.
Bette to help Molly did great things , and I hope she manages to make the most of the situation .
thnak you! I hope posting soon
Saying TOO SHORT a chapter….will that entice you to write a longer one as soon as possible?
Thanks!!!
I think Tim is going to make a play for Bette and that will cause some major problems and drama..
Loved it, thanks
I read the scene in the office with fear, if Tina insists, soon everyone will know what’s going on.
Thank you phacey for giving us another exciting chapter.
While waiting I reread your other open stories.
Phacey, you write beautifully despite English not being your primary language. I love the way you have managed to take a similar theme and make separate and distinctively different stories of it. Please continue them. I await your next updates.
That’s awesome and please next post make them have they first kiss. Please post more, thanks
OMG Phacey, it should be against fanfic rules that when a story is as exceptional as this one is, it should only be posted in full completion.
This is the 2nd time I have come to read this update in one day.
1) The thought occurred to me that Tina’s parents may be anti gay….. Goodness I
hope they are not.
2) Bring on the break up with Randall and Tina.
3) Bring on the opportunity of Bette & Shane being seen by Tina & having Tina
become jealous etc.
4) Bring on Bette’s “move”- we know she is capable and she is also curious now.
5) Time for the girls to exchange numbers
6) Would love to read Tina’s POV in an initially unseen encounter with Bette,
Angie and Molly, followed by an introduction at said encounter.
IS THE NEXT UPDATE UP ALREADY????????
Tension filled scene in the office. Thanks for the post. Looking forward to the next chapter!
You write this story beautifully. Their emotions are so well described. Bette doesn’t understand her conflicting feelings . Randall will cause trouble and difficulty. Tina better break it off now while there’s still time before it gets so complicated that Tina will have a hard time extricating herself from the situation. Bette was kind w/her offer to Molly. Yes, pay it forward!
I am a silent reader but I had to tell u that this story is awesome. You are a very good writer. I love the tension between them. Please update soon.
Ok Tina’s employees really do have the worse timing. But this slow burn will be week worth the payoff once Bette and Tina can really be together. Also, it’s just so sweet how Bette has made Molly a part of her and Angie’s family. Thanks for the update, post soon please.
Another great chapter and I agree with the other readers tina needs to end this relationship with randall before the dinner with her parents I think she knows something is going on and I would hate to think he only wants to marry her for his career.And I hope shane is careful I think if tina get wind of her friendship with bette she may lose her job because I can see tina being jealous and im not to sure about tim I haven’t figured him out yet also love the relationship between molly bette and angie so pps..
Oh my god this chapter is explosive!!! I love that you gave us several scenarios here. Randall scares me, what will happen if Tina breaks up with him? I LOVE LOVE LOVE that scene in the office is soooo HOT!!!! and i cant wait for them to have their first time. Bette offering Molly to be part of the family was really touching. I imagine Tina meeting boo, oh phacey i cant believe i have to wait another week for a new update, but you know i always wait but please dont let us wait that long sweetie!
Another great chapter,wish you could post more offten can’t get enough of this story! Thanks so much for sharing :)
I just wanted to let you know that i am completely in love with this story which makes it super hard to have to wait a week for each post! I was also a bit angry when Tina allowed Randall to continue in her bed even though they hadn’t ever before. That being said, PPS! Thanks for posting!
It was written beautifully. Such a great post although you’re teasing us with Bette and Tina moment. Loved it, thanks for your effort for writting this beautiful story.
Thanks to all who left their comments and for sharing me your thoughts, super appreciate them (-; It’s already past 1 in the morning in my place right now and sleep is so elusive, uggh!. I was thinking of watching a movie but changed my mind so i’ll just go ahead and start writing another chapter and hopefully it’ll be ready by either Saturday or Sunday. Hope you ladies wait for that (-;
Thank you for sacrificing your rest to bring us pleasure. This great story is due to your unselfishness. Bravo!
Sorry to hear you can’t sleep, but jippie for us, a new chapter is on his way. Hope you have sweet dreams hen your finished eith the chapter. Thx for posting
Encouragement phasey!!!
We are many waiting for your creation.
I no longer count the times I’ve reread this chapter, previous, and your other stories.
(please forgives translation)
‘m with Jalex, Phacey! We miss you. Sure hope you will post this weekend!
I’ve been trying to post chapter 11 since this morning but it would always show incomplete text. I tried to re do it several times but it wouldnt work. I cant even bring up chapter 10 I’ll try again tom or when issue is finally fixed. Thanks for all your continous support
Loving it, especially the scene in the office. I agree with the gang Tina needs to end things with Randall.