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Lover in the Dark: Chapter 2
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Some said that time in an elevator with strangers was often one of the most awkward experiences of the day. The brunette didn’t know if she was just nervous because it was her first day at work but as she was standing inside the elevator in front of the mirror; everyone seemed to be looking at her, which only made her feel more than awkward and even self-conscious.
“Hey man have you seen Ian’s new car?”
“Nope not yet, which brand?”
Bette noticed it was the two male officemates standing at the back talking to each other
“Oh my god Jean you won’t believe what a nightmare it had been!”
“What? What happened?”
This time it was the two female employees she saw chatting
“Well you know Juanita?”
“That’s your new maid, right?”
“Right”
“What did she do this time?”
“It’s the new BMW M6 convertible!”
The other man whistled “Fuck I would kill to have that kind of car!”
“Me too that’s why I’m working extra hours, I’m gonna fucking buy that car too man”
“Well you’re single so you can definitely afford it unfortunately even if I work my ass off for few more hours I still can’t, my wife will fucking kill me if I did” the man laughed
“Well this new Dolce and Gabbana dress that I bought last week…”
“Uhuh”
“The dumb girl washed it together with the colored clothes!”
The other woman gasped “Oh my god what happened after?”
“It’s cream color turned violet! My idiot and stupid maid ruined my dress!”
“Yeah right, hey listen are you going to Stan’s party on Friday night?”
“No I can’t, the in-laws are coming over to visit their grandkids”
The other man chuckled “Oh well I feel sorry for you man. Stan told me that he invited a lot of people and there will be a lot of pussies that night so if I were you I’ll think about a fucking good excuse to be in that party”
“Yeah I guess so; I’ll let you know Thursday after work”
“Cool man!”
Bette didn’t like what she was hearing, those people despite their expensive clothes and good appearance, were very shallow, and she thought even though she was nervous as hell she couldn’t wait to get out of that elevator. The caramel skinned beauty turned to her side and noticed a good looking somewhat androgynous woman standing at the corner smiled at her. She didn’t look like the other women in the elevator who were wearing skirts. Her hair was a little spiky and she was wearing a black pant with white long sleeves with black bow tie and black boots. In fact it was the first time Bette saw a woman like her.
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Shoot this posting as a book thingy is freakin hard LoL! Well anyway hope you’ll like this new post,,, phacey
Yeah what was Tina thinking? LoL! Anyway you know my style of writing and without divulging anything all I can say for now is that I’m aiming for something intriguing and I hope to keep the readers’ interest until its conclusion. Good observation about the characters, given Bette’s situation I don’t want her to be someone who just follows someone’s order, the girl definitely needs to hold her ground if she wants to survive. Thanks for reading and commenting Bat!
Hey I really love this story, please come back soon!
Hey thanks! Yup hope to comeback soon too(-:
Loved it. Thanks for the update
You’re most welcome!
I was looking forward to the next update from you!
and WOW! I was not disappointed. It was great,
I can not wait to move forward more and more of the story, and we see what is your really planned
I agree, the way Tina took to the new “personal assistant” is a bit kinky : D but I know that is going to be about something more.
I’m really happy that Tina stopped to seduce Bette. would have been terrible if it happens in the office, it would have completely ruined their relationship, because Bette, would not have been other than a sexual subject.
how strong sexual tension between them was, -so what will be yet? ;-)
I really enjoyed reading, please posting soon!
Thanks for your kind words. I’m planning of putting a lot of sexiness into this at the same time add more depth to the story. Hope you’ll stick around(-;
This story is great!!
Well thanks and really appreciate you reading this humble fic (-;
Well-written story. I’m hooked.
Next update can’t come too soon!
Aw thanks sweetie, yeah I’m hoping to find more time to continue so pls stay tuned(-;
That was so good and love it
Thanks so much for reading and your continuous support!
I’m so glad Tina didn’t let anything happen in the office it would have been demeaning. Thanks for this phacey. PPS
My lips are sealed… thanks for reading and for letting me know your thoughts!
I have mixed emotions about this story. I want to believe that Tina will not use Bette as her sex slave (victim). On the other hand I want to believe that she is going to live up to her end of the bargain and not hurt Bette. I hope that she does not make Bette chose between taking care of her daughter and doing “business” with her. She does not want Randall to use her to fulfill his political imagine maybe she will see that her agreement with Bette is going in that direction. If she is as powerful as she wants to project then exploitation of an employee would not fit her imagine. Thank you for your time and devotion to the site. PPS
A lot of things will happen between these two so i hope you’ll continue to stick around. Thanks for sharing your opinion its very much appreciated!
Your story is so intriguing and erotic. Exciting to read. Well done and thanks for continuing to write for this site.
Thanks for the compliment… I’m blushing right now
Love this story. The sexual tension is awesome. I’m glad Tina is not being harsh with Bette. Will Tina get jealous if Bette & Shane develop a friendship I wonder. I can’t wait til the next chapter. Quickly becoming a favorite! Thanks for posting!
Between Bette and Shane… who knows? Maybe… Thanks for reading!
Kudos on the music choice. Nothing sexier than Janet. And I’m really enjoying this story, post soon!
I totally agree she sounded so sexy and looked oh so sexy in her video… and that was 20 years ago. Glad that you enjoy this fic!
Love it!please psap!
Only if i could i would… thanks for reading!
Oh the fun you’re gonna have conducting tantalizing scenes between these two. Btw Tina is already such a clit tease, gah! Pps.
Just like what Bette said to Tina… Imagine the possibilities(-;
Thank you for another lovely update! Glad Tina didn’t do anything in the office. Much prefer the really slow burn with lots of sexual tension, intense kissing, passionate touching and growing friendship. Looking forward to more chapters on all of your stories!
I agree but right now all i can really say is that my lips are super sealed! (-:
Ahh~~~~you such a teaser!LoL Come on!you got us hooked!
That last scene in Tina’s office was so fucking sexy and Janet’s song made me feel hot as hell!!! Hahaha! So well written and I can’t get enough of this story that I wish to see a new update now oh pretty, pretty please! Really intrigue to where you will take this. Thanks for sharing this and for your talent my friend!
Hey my friend you felt the sexiness huh? (-; I’m glad, braced yourself for more (-:
Hi Dear- Fab update as usual. Looking forward the next.
Confident Tina is a change as is some what timid Bette.
As I read this I saw some possibilities, in regards to their developing relationship.
Yes it’s begun as a transaction of sorts-BUT that needs not hamper a committed relationship for them in the “future”.
You have such opportunities for them with the way in which you set this up.
Looking forward to your committed development of this story and the sharing of it.
RE-reading now.
Thank you again.
Thanks dear! Glad that you like this story and yes plenty of possibilities are floating in the air, so hope you’ll stick around!(-:
Finally you posted a chapter!…tagal ko inaantay to?…But I’m a little sad cuz until now “Give Me a Reason”
and “Meet Bette Porter the 30 Yr Old Virgin” has no update?…starting to worry thou.Until I saw your Authors note. Really hoping by next week you don’t have a busy schedule?
Sorry for the long wait. No update yet for the Virgin girl but hopefully there will be a new post for GMAR next week. Thanks so much!
Did some slight editing thought you should know (-:
Bette and Shane? Oh no!!! this is too funny, :-D I just cant see myself in front of the two together!
rather a strong friendship between them, -as always.
may be, that Tina will be jealous of this relationship, but I hope because she starts to feel towards Bette. and not only that “she wants to fuck” :-)
Please post soon… Thank you !
Hello, I love, love, love this story! I couldn’t wait to post my reply after reading. I think there is so much to be said about this relationship between Bette and Tina! I wait for Tina to meet Boo. I think she will fall in love with her (Boo) also. Just so much you can do with this story. Please post soon!
Love reading anything you write! This chapter was hot and nothing realy happened in it, a testament to your brilliant writing :) I looke forward to the next chapter. PPS
Ok now this is getting fucking hot, it suck that im reading this late but im catching up to the recent chapter cant wait to read their first time because if this is what a tease is like “oh shit”!! PHACEY you never seems to not amaze me love it
Of course Bette is a quick learner. Just because you don’t graduate college doesn’t mean you are not smart. That last part was hot, I am wet too.